cbellen

Student. Bookworm. I'm new to all of this and would enjoy feedback, my stories may have grammar errors but I do try really hard to fix them, I constantly go back and check. ^-^

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Coffee!!

Hey! I love soy lattes!! lol, I loved your main character, but I feel like I was missing something. LIke a teaser on where the story might head for being a sci-fi/romance. There was a couple of grammar errors, but overall the story flowed. Also, your story did make me giggle a couple of times, like the spaghetti part. I will definitely continue reading because I want to see where you take it!!

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Winter

The beginning of the story was a bit confusing as there wasn't a lot in the blurb. There were a couple awkward phrased sentences that made it hard to understand everything completely. I wanted to know why Blake was so infatuated with Winter in the beginning. I would love to see how you continue to create their relationship. I also thought you did a great job with the pace of the story and I liked the idea of Blake and the world you created. (Don't want to spoil anything for potential readers) Overall I think your plot is great, just need to fix the flow of some chapters.

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The Fortress

I loved the details in your story, I'm very curious on why she was there and who is on the other side. I think you should definitely write some more so I can see where you take this story :)

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Omg

Your story is so interesting and wow! Your writing is amazing and the whole time I couldn't stop reading. Your story is by far unique and the character's thought process was so intriguing. I've never read a book like this and I definitely will continue reading any books you write :)

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Rogue

You have a great story going, I loved the attitude of Evelyn! I'm really interested in what's going to happen next! There were a few grammar mistakes, but those are an easy fix. I will definitely be reading your story! :)

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Escaping in the Pages

Omg, I love your writing style and I fell in love instantly! Your first chapter grabs the reader's attention and I can't wait to read more :) Don't stop writing, it's amazing!

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Black Petals

I loved your writing, you conveyed the protagonist's emotions so well! Your story building was amazing and I can't wait to keep reading :)

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Hidden Fantasy

I love where you're going with this story! It was hard to follow at times and a couple of grammar errors, but overall it was super interesting! I'm curious on where you take this :)

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The Dream

You did an amazing job with creating this world! I loved Olivia and you could really feel her emotions about everything going on around her. I didn't want it to end!

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Loved it!

Your story was captivating, the second chapter really grabs your attention. Of course a couple grammar errors but those are unavoidable when spell checking your own work, I know from my own work lol You created a whole new world and its amazing! The characters are so likeable, I will definitely keep reading :)

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