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Excellent story of young love

This was a beautiful story about what young lovers are really like. It is not perfect, it is not clean and it takes a while to get there. It is one of the most realistic stories I have read about two young people finding love and sex together. I think what I loved the most is neither of them knew what the hell they were doing. I loved that she was the aggressor, love that she saw her parents still having sex and I loved all the things they had to do to be together. This is what young love really looks like. I do wish the story was longer, but I can absolutely see where the two of them are going. I loved it!!

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Wonderful creative story

Such a wonderful story about love, lust, and attraction. Beautifully written and in such a unique way that I have not seen before. I was there with them and could feel what they were feeling. Absolutely loved it.

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Great Story

What happens to Hayden happens all the time. This author created a character who was exactly who she was supposed to be. You wanted Hayden to win; you wanted her to come out on top. Every character in this story was believable and you could see them in everyday life. I could not put this story down and I needed to know how this was going to end. There were some grammar and spelling errors, but they did not take away from the story for me. I would absolutely read other stories by this author. Her writing style is very easy to read and makes the story feel real.
I do want to say this story is not the kind of story I like to read. I am not a fan of stories about people who do not learn from their mistakes. Hayden was way too nice and was unwilling to forgo her fantasy and see people for who they are. But, that does not mean it is not a truthful and very honest story. Hayden was a totally believable character.

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