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I liked reading it. I liked the declarative nature of your complex and compound sentences, the way that they encompassed a complete thought. They showed a lot of imagination and creativity. The plot is great. Just when I was beginning to wonder what was going on, a resolution brought total clarity to it. You're weaving several plots, together. I'm left wondering what's going to become of Steve and why Harold met the dark fate that he did. I'm wondering about the next plot twist; and what's going to become of Dave and Amelia? Keeping writing and keep getting better at it. Good luck....

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