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Soulful

I enjoyed reading it. The thread of reasoning through it was pretty good.. I'm impressed by how you could sustain it through so many chapters. There was a lot of insight in it. There was a lot of sense to it. So much feeling and intuition and wisdom.

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Escape

I liked reading it. I liked the declarative nature of your complex and compound sentences, the way that they encompassed a complete thought. They showed a lot of imagination and creativity. The plot is great. Just when I was beginning to wonder what was going on, a resolution brought total clarity to it. You're weaving several plots, together. I'm left wondering what's going to become of Steve and why Harold met the dark fate that he did. I'm wondering about the next plot twist; and what's going to become of Dave and Amelia? Keeping writing and keep getting better at it. Good luck....

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