Chang Didi

The Netherlands

Just some girl who always wanted to write a book

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Lovely story, punctuation....

The story had a really nice, realistic flow. It was really cute and progressed slowly, which gave is a realistic pace. Some things were a bit weird, since the story wasn't 100% consistent. At one point, the name of someone who died was swapped with someone else's, which was quite confusing. Also the punctuation of the quotation marks were wrong at least half of the time I think, which wasn't pleasant... However, the characters grew on me a lot! The ending definitely got me and I'm hooked. Good job!!!

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Realistic flow

The story is very nicely detailed. The main characters are very realistic with a nicely paced progress, the side characters (at least some) are a little dull in my opinion. In overall, I really like the flow of the story, nothing is too hurried. I thought they would end up doing it with each other within 5 chapters, maybe 10 at most. Since they didn't, I really do appreciate the storyline even more. Nothing is too rushed and just when you think "it" is going to happen, they stop. This constant slight tension, is also a point I really like. In the whole story, I believe I saw maybe one or two spelling/grammar mistakes, but I am not sure as English isn't my native tongue. Good job, keep it up!!!! <3

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Overall good

The story is good in my opinion. Have not noticed any grammar faults. My only minus is that there's actually a little too much sex. More plot and just conversations would be better in my opinion. Keep up the good work!

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