CharliAuthor

London, England

Fantasy Drama/Romance author of the EverVerse.

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Fast Paced

There is a lot going on with this story which i quite enjoy with my reading.
There's always some excitement and questions to be answered which is always fun.
I found the chapters a bit long for my personal taste with some extra long sentences/phrasing but nothing that takes away from the story overall.
Good characters, good dialogue overall and I recommend

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Exciting

This story had a great opener that promised violence, action, fun, sexy times and adventure which i really enjoyed. Each chapter has delivered in this regard and has something exciting taking place whether its more understanding of the characters or the world etc. and that bodes well for bingeing!
I really like the old world feel of the vampires and wolves. Its unapologetically dark with no glittering skin or other such nonsense lol I love Levant as a main character and find him really intense and brooding and sexy which is amazing. Maria is definitely fiery and reminiscent of many current female main characters so she works well.

On an anticipation/reader level, i really enjoyed this and think its a great addition to the site and something that readers will love.
On a technical/level there could be some improvements in syntax, grammar and overall structure. I have left the author a few feedback comments relating to this as they are minor/fixable but did jump out at me while reading so thought I would mention. Less is more when it comes to some sentences so finding ways to make descriptions and inner thoughts of characters more succinct, i think would be beneficial.

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Plot
Writing Style
Grammar & Punctuation

Fast Paced

I really enjoyed this story and as i'm so busy with writer things, it was great to be able to get stuck into something quick, fun and sexy.
I liked Walker and Harper as characters and definitely as a couple. I am a sucker for a HEA so i was happy they were able to find their way back to each other even when Walker was being really silly.
I would have preferred the steam scenes to be a bit more detailed. Not in a sexual way necessarily but their first time together felt a little rushed and when building up the intensity between characters, its really important for it to pay off once you get there.
Overall, a good story that could even be extended to create more tension within the plot of the writer chose. Expand the world, the scenes/events and up the angst which is all there to be explored which is great.

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