This story had a great opener that promised violence, action, fun, sexy times and adventure which i really enjoyed. Each chapter has delivered in this regard and has something exciting taking place whether its more understanding of the characters or the world etc. and that bodes well for bingeing!
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I really like the old world feel of the vampires and wolves. Its unapologetically dark with no glittering skin or other such nonsense lol I love Levant as a main character and find him really intense and brooding and sexy which is amazing. Maria is definitely fiery and reminiscent of many current female main characters so she works well.
On an anticipation/reader level, i really enjoyed this and think its a great addition to the site and something that readers will love.
On a technical/level there could be some improvements in syntax, grammar and overall structure. I have left the author a few feedback comments relating to this as they are minor/fixable but did jump out at me while reading so thought I would mention. Less is more when it comes to some sentences so finding ways to make descriptions and inner thoughts of characters more succinct, i think would be beneficial.