Joshua Bryant

A guy who likes scifi, history, and surrealism

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A Good Prospect for Dystopian Young Adult Fiction

This story shows great promise, with a high vocabulary and intense social commentary. The concept of the story is uncompromising and engrossing, pulling you from paragraph to paragraph with relative ease. That being said, certain sentences do run on a little too long, while they are by no means tedious, they certainly feel a little too weighed down. But, otherwise, the story, the author's writing style, and the resolute social stance, all make this story very gripping.

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BLÙE

This story has great potential. While the grammar isn't perfect, it's still a very legible story that balances a somber emotional atmosphere with stark dialogue that is never weighed down with adverbs. The writing style itself is very intriguing, feeling both poetic yet realistic, reminiscent of Sherman Alexie. I honestly look forward to reading further, and would recommend other people to do so.

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