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Interesting concept but..
I honestly read this book because it had a lot of hype. The plot it interesting and has potential, but I had a really hard time getting through this story. I had to constantly guess what the author was trying to say, which really took the fun out of reading. The dialogue needs work. The characters don't use contractions like how normal people talk in society. I can see one character not use contractions but they all don't, If it wins, it needs to go through several rounds of editing because of wrong word choice and grammar, etc..Read the story now
Even though I rated this 3 stars, I didn't hate this book. Far from it, I did vote for it, What drew me to the story was the concept. I thought it would be fun to read. I wasn't disappointed. The world building was great and the characters weren't flat. The only thing that ruined it for me was the grammar. I had walk away from this a couple of times because of the run-ons and wrong punctuation that ruined the flow. Also, there are too many action tags like yelled,argued, etc when said would have worked out fine. I trucked on through because I wanted to find out what happened. With a little bit more editing this book would be a gem and a refreshing read.Read the story now
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