chilledcat

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Looks good

Only 2 chapters in and I already love the concept. Some of the sentences are a little clunky at times and I think you should change some of your paragraph starters i.e. in the prologue you begin consecutive paragraphs with Leafwing which makes it sound a little repetitive. But other than that I love it!

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Needs improvement

The story sounds amazing and I really love the concept. However, the sentence structure seems a little clunky and hard to follow at times causing the story to not really flow all that well.
But nevertheless, the plot-line is beautiful concept and I look forward to reading more

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Amazing

This is my first time writing a review so bear with me. I'm only a chapter in but I love it already. It can be a little over descriptive at times (some may like this however, its probably just me) but other than that you are immersed into the story straight away. Can't wait to read more!

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