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Perceptions can change the way you see a story, Stories can change the way you perceive.

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Very Good!

The story and the plot were pretty interesting. The character's emotions and feelings were very well-written.
Aghori Baba's lecture was an eye-opener. Kudos for writing it, I liked the English translation. Great Work.
All the Best!

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An engaging ride

A great attempt in incorporating a hyperlink drama and making it intense. I personally could not find any flaws in the story. I also liked the pace that the story maintained throughout. Good work. Keep Going and All the Best.

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Engaging and Impressive

I personally felt that the names that you have used for the characters added meaning to the story and made it even more amazing. It added a newer dimension to the characters you have used. For example, Shizuko meant a quiet child, Sayuri meant a small lily( apparently, she ended up placing a lily over Shizuko's grave). It was an engaging narrative that I didn't realize time pass by and I also convinced myself not to turn around.
Expressions like " The smell of the cigarette hit Hana's nose like a slap in the face" enthralled me.

Great work. Keep going and all the best.

Thank You.

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