Beyond basics, approaching brilliance
This writer knows how to craft a story (spelling, grammar, dialogue structure) - and that's rare. But she also knows how to f'ing tell a story. And that's even more rare in combination with the ability to master the basics and keep things tidy. Yes, spelling counts. The care this author has taken with the basics means the reader gets to do nothing but enjoy the story.
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The dialogue makes sense. The characters' dialogue is fantastic - we know who these two are, we know they have history, we know they're more than mere mortals, we know they're working for some kind of royalty in a high fantasy concept - but the author organically lets the reader learn these details instead of dumping what feels like required reading on us (how many times have you cracked open a work of fantasy to be confronted with a history lesson before you ever get to any action?).
Well done my friend - you are crushing this and if you're as young as you say you are in your profile, and you're writing at this level now? You are on your true path, because there are people who come onto these writing platforms and boast great numbers of followers, reads etc., but their writing is trash, technically; it's boring / unoriginal; or it's both.
This is what you're supposed to be doing with your life. Keep doing it.