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Everything I'm Not

Somebody honestly tell me this is NOT the best Inkitt story you've ever read. No one? Okay. I'm glad we're in agreement. I seriously can't think of any constructive criticism to give. It's really amazing. Some scenes do make me a little uncomfortable but they're easy to skip past, and I wouldn't not read it for that reason. I always get so excited when there are updates- it's not even funny. (Okay, it's a little funny)
Okay. That's my two cents. (Why do people say that?)

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AMAZING!

This was one of the best Inkitt stories I've ever read. (Isn't it ironic that Inkitt thinks Inkitt is a misspelled word?) I loved the character development and the plot was very well thought out! There were barely any technical mistakes, which we all know is rare in an Inkitt story. Author, you did and AMAZING job and should be very proud.

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sweet

i thought this story was very cute. .tbh i read it all in one night, but it's short so that's okay. (me ignoring all grammatical things in my writing this except apostrophes for some reason) i like watching the relationship develop, and i thought you did a good job incorporating sub plots but also not straying from the main plot.

overall this was a great story and you should be very proud.

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I don't date cheerleaders

I thought this was a pretty good story.

I thought the Lavore's relationship with money and wealth was very interesting. There were parts that I felt were a little funny or unrealistic, but overall, I think that it was a well developed plot, good characters, etc. Good job. You should be very proud!

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Really good

I really enjoyed this story. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. The beginning was a little slow for me, but I got through it fine. The story kept me reading despite anything else I should have been doing. I think you should be very proud of this.

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His Trans Boy

This was a very good story. You did a good job making me happy and sad for Hunter. I liked how he was weak and strong at the same time. The only part that put me off a little was the ending. I found it strange that he doesn't continue to protest his kidnapping. Overall, I think that this was a great story, and I look forward to reading more of your writing.

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