What I think after reading chapters 1-3
Well I wasn't a fan, I'm sorry, I just wasn't. I was happy when I finally reached the 40th page.
Read the story now
Let me start by saying the description gave didn't describe the story, I was expecting something totally different. Or maybe I didn't reach that part in the story. Chapter 1 could (and should) be shortened down to a paragraph or 2. You pose interesting questions, but it goes on for too long. Chapter 2 and 3 aren't bad, but it's all very wordy, I had to force myself to keep reading because I didn't find it that interesting. You write like a conspiracy nut. Also your grammar needs some serious work, but that can be said for a lot of people, myself included.
All in all, not a story I would ever read more than I have to. Sorry if this review was mean. but at least you know it was honest.