Cleo Storme

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Good story

I love the plot and characters so far, but I feel that the witch plot twist was a desperate last addition, as there is no build up to it. The fact that the main character is a witch as well as a secret pop star is too much, I would stick to one plot only. And not the witchy one. I feel like the main character is kind of unlikable, especially the way she reacts to things; eg. her parents' phone call. I like the diverse cast, but the use of POVS makes the story slow and tedious to read. Overall, it has good potential.

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