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Reviwed till chapter 10

A really great rom-com book with an amazing cover and title. Although a few mistakes here and there do make it hard for the intro to me as good as it should be, mainly due to no paragraph formation and lots of punctuation mistakes. From chapter 3 , story do gets it form and shape. The story feels so realistic. It concerning high school student life with lots of comedy that will make you roll on the floor. ..

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Reviewed till chapter 3

You have a nice book cover and it really draws attention. The title being the most common among high school students draws a lot of readers. Still, the story is diverse and doesn't constrict to one age group. It has a nice and light plot. You excel in character building which most of the new babies struggle with. Now coming to the author's writing style, it is very unique but a little bit of changes would be great. Your grammar is a bit weak and we did point out some mistakes in chapter 1 . A little advice, revise chapter 1 and 2 as they have some grammatical errors.. Other than that you have a nice plot building, character building skills. Don't let something stop you from writing. Anyway nice work and see you around...

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Reviewed up till 8th chapter....

I agree there are very few grammatical errors , just some typing errors mostly in chapter 1 . Other chapters are mostly clean of any grammatical error. Go through chapter 1 once to correct the mistakes.
Coming to the plot, it is interesting, captivating, catches the reader's attention,, unique and lovely.
The problem is the first impression here, the book cover doesn't give the vibe you want tit to say Like the color are way too bright. You should show one side darker and on side bright. Showing the light of one charter eliminating the darkness of another.
The charter development needs improvement . Chose a specific character and stick to it. Too much complex characters makes it hard for the reader to feel their realistic. feeling .
Overall the book is great and fun to read . It covers the most crucial topic about the sexuality acceptance of kids. Do continue your work and don't ever feel down. Good luck for your writing future.

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Reviewed till chapter 10

A stunning masterpiece!
Nice cover in accordance with the story message. Amazing plot with realistic characters and excellent writing style.
Just a few typing errors in chapter 2 and 3. Other than that the book was a good read.

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Reviewed till chapter 10

Highly original piece of work!
A lot of amazing character building of Gods especially Ka'Azalin. but the strong and complex character buildings made it a little difficult for the plot to have a smooth flow.

The setting and mystical part of book is well built and quite stable. Grammar errors are very less.
One thing the author need to work on is the message delivery. We recommend you to create a logline for the Retribution and then stick to that. I will improve the structure of the book.
On the whole this is an amazing book and a must book for mythology readers.

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Reviewed till chapter 4

The first impression of the book is a fair but not good enough, the reason behind the lack of reader's engagement .Book cover doesn't attracts as much attention as it should. Maybe because of the lack of a hint about the story like a short blurb or something like that. Still, the book was worth a shot. The plot was the one thing that grabbed my attention. It flows in a nice way that is neither way to leggy or too quick to keep up with. The character building skills are awesome and they make the sentiments so real. Author has a unique writing style which doesn't bore you instead it keeps you hooked. We found some technical mistakes in chapter 3 and 4 mostly about punctuation. You do have a good grip over grammar. We suggest you to go through those chapters again. Lastly, it was a nice book and we really loved it.

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Reviewed till chapter 12

Nice book cover. It catches the eye the reader. Author has worked really hard on this book and it is evident form the work. The plot has a nice amount of suspense, mystery and thriller. the main character calypso is a real neat character. Also, the grammar is excellent. We recommend you to shorten your sentence length. it makes it hard for average reader to concentrate. Keeping it as simple at possible will target greater reader engagement. On the whole this, a good book. with a mix of thriller and mystery

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Reviwed till chapter 10

Book cover is a reflection of the story you might find inside the book and greatly reflects the major theme of the story.
The message of finding the true love and never giving up are nicely delivered.
The story runs beautifully and one can't help getting addicted. The plot has a nice way of opening up the mystery and the suspense runs till the end. The characters are so realistic. The way the author describes their pains and struggles makes the reader cry out their eyes.
One thing that greatly needs the attention of the author is the grammar. It hurts the smooth flow of the story. If English is not your native language we strongly recommend you to go throw the option of proofreading and editing. It will help the book to improve and grow, and catch a lot readers
Anyway, it was a nice experience to read it and we look forward to reading more...

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Reviewed till chapter 22

Amazing Book!
The setting of the brothel adds up the fun with an intimating book cover. The plot is so great and make us question our own thinking. We love how this book shows the true nature of mankind. The choices we make and choices we don't have. The characters feels so alive regardless of them being related to a brothel. Also, the grammar is so enriched we find really faultless. The story is also engaging and we find no part we would want to skip. On the whole we loved it. It was fun to read. This book deserves to be published!

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Reviewed till chapter 4

Amazing first impression. The book cover is so lovely. Of course with this little reading of this book I wasn't able to figure out the message you wanted to deliver. Still I was intimated with the book and find it just perfect.
Without giving away too much of the story you hold the suspense and thrill till the end of the chapter. Amazing mix of mystery and science fiction. You have excellent character building skills. Also, grammatical skills and technical skill have nothing wrong with them. They just made the reading more fun and engaging. Lastly, I would say that this book deserve to be best seller!

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Reviewed till chapter 4

Nice book cover. It draws attention thought it conveys the message of something way to dangerous and dark mysterious secrets. That coincides with the general theme of this book.. You have a nice way of delivering your message.
Coming to next important things i.e., the plot, setting and character building, they are just way to perfect. The plot is intimating, yet maintains the suspense and it is set in high school. The characters are the best part of the book they seem so realistic and charming.
You have a nice reading style, just some defect in long and lengthy sentences. Try to keep it a bit simple as it will make it easier for the reader to comprehend small paragraphs.
As for the grammar and technical writing skills, we found no real problem is that. it just make it more interesting to read. On the whole, it was a nice experience to read this book.

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Reviewed till chapter 2

You have a nice book cover and book title. It all adds up the positive impression of the book. You have a nice writing style and it is good that you have them edited. Although a bit of punctuation mistakes are there. That is a piece of cake. Overall, you have a nice way of concaving your feelings and you have a lot of potential. Do keep up your good work!

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Reviewed up till chapter 2

The first impression of this book is good.. You have an amazing cover and it resembles the them of story. The second thing here is the plot . The thing here is that you really need to work on character formation . There are little scenes formation mistakes in at the last of chapter 1. Go through chapter 1 again and see if you can improve the scene setting.
As for the writing style, well to be honest you have this unique style with little seriousness and drama. instead less serious. You need to work on your suspense. I fully understand this thing comes automatically as you age so no need to worry. Go with proof reading. It will be more helpful. As for your grammatical and technical writing skill, well you have excelled in that portion. I find really less grammatical errors in your book.
In the end I will say one thing, your book has an amazing idea of a heartbroken girl awaking an ancient demon. Everything is fine just you need to improve in scenes setting and putting thrill in your books. So keep up your good work and don't be dishearten form any negative views. You have a bright future ahead. Keep fighting and smiling.
Good Luck and stay safe!!!!

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