T. Kookie

Perak, Malaysia ๐Ÿ‡ฒ๐Ÿ‡พ

Mental Health Illness Stories + Complicated Endings = This Amateur Writer ๐ŸŒˆ๐Ÿงš๐Ÿ’œ Butterfly far far awayyyyy ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž Webnovel and Instagram: cookiewrites27

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Knight's Academy

The story is really narrative and spoken in a formal language ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’œ The way the author explains about the adventures, karma and friendship is beyond impressive ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ My only suggestions for you is to re-read your story and edit the misspelled words in this book ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿงก Furthermore, I love the writing style here โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ Till then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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A God Named Sin

The author has a great way of telling the story ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I like the way the author expressed the story just by simple and understanding words โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› So far, it's going great ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ Byeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Victorious

This story just keeps you turning the page after a chapter because it's THAT interesting to read ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ Yea, the chapters may be short but this author managed to make the short chapters really amazing โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ It's a great book to re-read as well โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Lovin' it ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Valley of Wolves

Three words for this extraordinary book ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž

I purple it ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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I Am Catalina (Book 1 of the Catalina Chronicles)

This book has such an interesting story and I loved all of it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Love the way it was presented ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Such a good read ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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She Cried Wolf (OLD)

Loved it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Loved it more โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Loved it infinity and beyond ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Y/N Lestrange's Story

The paragraphs for each chapter are quite catchy and I love it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Tho, your plot is very different considering that it's based on songs ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ I've never read a book like this before and that's why I'm kinda confused on how you could turn songs into stories ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ I'm still getting used to the writing style and plot to this story so that's why, I've rated it like that ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Overall, it was fun to read your book ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’œ It was one of a kind โฃ๏ธ Kookiewers, do read this book as well because it's pretty awesome ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Not 'Just' Friends

A simple werewolf love story that is truly understandable ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ I still think that Amanda and Asher are mates ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’ž Because I somehow feel like they are but in the end, they're just friends ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ I'm just at chapter 8 right now so I'm not sure how this story will end exactly ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” Amanda and Asher are literally meant to be but somehow fate is playing at the moment and not letting them be together ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Whyyyy ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Anyways, I'm really hooked on this story of yours ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ I don't think I've ever read about the ranking Delta in the previous werewolf stories I've read before ๐Ÿบ So, that part literally makes your story really special and unique โฃ๏ธ I hope you'll continue writing more stories because I think your writing style is pretty cool โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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Unwanted

Hey there ๐Ÿ‘‹ I'm actually a fan of BTS and it's been 5 years since I've liked them ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ I do know that at some point they will have to stop making music and stuff like that, but I didn't wanna think about that just yet because they really make me smile whenever I'm sad ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” The first chapter I've read was quite sad for me because as a BTS fan, the word 'disband' itself made me sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ The second chapter was about the characters, Tiffany and Jessica โฃ๏ธ Both of the characters are superb โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I'll definitely recommend this story to all of my friends ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Please update soon because I'm waiting the upcoming chapters ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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HIM: Preserving Beauty

The story is really good ๐Ÿ˜„โค๏ธ I liked how Lydia's character is a soft person ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• I also liked Vince's character because his character sounds kinda similar to mine as in I also like to work alone ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Even the sentence structuring is awesomeโฃ๏ธ The first chapter itself has got me hooked with the story ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’ž Thanks for publishing this story ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’• Otherwise, I wouldn't have gotten to enjoy this beautiful story of yours ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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Inside Out

This story is amazing and the choice of words that you've used are truly incredible ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I liked how you've described the characters ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ Childish? Yes โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ A great start? Well, obviously ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ There was nothing that I hate towards this story because the more I read, the more interesting it gets ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’• This book is definitely worth the read if you're looking for something extraordinary ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ Te quiero mucho, autor del libro 'Inside Out' ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Psychic

Another mind-blowing story I've read today ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ The plot, the characters, like literally everything! Everything was perfect! I was more intrigued with the plot๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคญ The plot of the story was the one that caught my attention immediately ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ I'm actually planning to continue reading your story on my free days because it is THAT AWESOME! I can't just seem to wonder, "Hmm...what's gonna happen next?". Literally, that's the question that has always popped out in my mind whenever I finished reading a chapter ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’• I'm currently at Chapter 3 at the moment, but I can say that I'm slowly getting there ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I'm actually looking forward for my books written by y'all ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ž This book literally needs to be read by everyone or else, they wouldn't know what they're actually missing out โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž

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The Silence Is Lifted

Alright, I'm going to start off with the summary. It was fun to read as it was mysterious and it made me question multiple times on what will happen next. Then, the prologue of the story. I love how the prologue reminded me of Ron from Harry Potter as he says, "Bloody Hell", a few times. Here, it is said as bloody grakken gnomes. Loved that. I've never read a story about grakkens, let alone a well-written one at that! It's just the beginning and it's already exciting. Never have I ever encountered a prologue to make me feel as if I was watching this story live in the cinemas. What a prologue!!

Before I get into the chapters, I'd like to talk about the plot. I love how the plot went but I didn't see much of the grakken gnomes. Okay, this one confused me...
Aren't the grakken gnomes the most important thing in the story? Anyways, since it was a excerpt, it was understandable. I was looking forward to it but it's cool.

As for chapter one, the way it was described was quite calming for me. This time, I felt like I was watching an old English film as it was sounding that way when I was reading it. Amazing!

As for chapter two, the way the author describes the weather was still able to put me in a calm state. I don't know but I just admire the author's way of presenting her work. The words kept going and soon, I found myself at the end of the chapter.

This story sure does have potential. A lot of it, to be exact. The grammar and punctuation was as clean as a brand new piece of paper. No suggestions are needed as I found it as perfect as it is. I must say that they author has put a lot of effort into her work from my point of view. Long chapters are difficult to write yet this author made it seem like it was as easy as ABC'S. I truly admire and respect you for working so hard on this novel till it has become flawless. You're the definition of an amazing and hardworking person. Also, I love the energy in the story. Gotta admit, you and this story are better than unicorns and sparkles combined.

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The Black Rose: I've Been Watching You (Book 1)

Twelve words that I need to say about this book ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’œ๐ŸŒธโค๏ธ

I am getting more addicted to this book as I read further ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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A Battle for the Crown

It was a cute story ๐Ÿ’˜๐ŸŒน Also, A well-developed setting ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ‘ This is another absolutely vital element within fantasy fiction ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Kim Myungsoo's Mystery Girl (INFINITE FANFICTION)

The characters were believable and I cared about them ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜, very pleasing โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ, a beautifully crafted story ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฆ‹, exceptionally good ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Flake & Flare

Absorbing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜, unputdownable โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ, spellbinding ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ and impressive ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Mermaid and The Boy

Interesting ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ, different ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿงก and sounds really magical to begin with ๐Ÿงœโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿงœ Well done ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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CONSCIENCE KILLER

Intense ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ, mysterious ๐Ÿคซ๐Ÿคซ, emotional ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข, and fun to read ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Fate Intertwined

A novel with deserves all of the stars in the world ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ Not only was it interesting and a story that makes you go in awe, it was funny and cute at the same time ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ At first, it was sad and maybe even terrifying, but in the end it was going well โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ There were a few misspelled words and I noticed a wrong word used in a sentence ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿง Just sprinkle a few magic of editing to the story and it'll be wonderful ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Almighty Voyage

The novel had great potential to it and I personally enjoyed on what the author was writing for this story ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ However, I wish the writing style would be a little bit organized ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’™ I could tell that some of the sentence were supposed to be dialogues but the opening and closing commas aren't there to prove that if it's actually a dialogue or not โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ The dialogues in a story are legit the best part when it comes to writing a story, so I'd suggest you to do some editing for that ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ The plot and everything were awesome ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž I was just uncomfortable with the writing style, that's all๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ–ค I don't mind when a story has grammar issues or anything because I know many writers don't realize the mistakes unless it has been looked through multiple times โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I think if you edit the writing style, then this story would be better ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿงก Keep writing, keep smiling and keep imagining ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Cat-astrophe Witch

The story kept me engage till the end and I loved every part of it ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’œ The mystery, the cat, the normal girl who is suddenly now a witch was just mind-blowing ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ I've never read a story like this before as a novel but I have seen anime movies like this before ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ Atleast, I'm somewhat knowledgeable ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Anyways, at first I was like kinda confused on why did the character change, which came to my mind that maybe just maybe the author accidentally changed the words due to autocorrect or something ๐Ÿคท๐Ÿคท๐Ÿคท But in the end, I understood that it wasn't anything like I imagined ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ It was wayyyyyyyyy different from what I was thinking ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” As in, I thought Rune (I guess cause as I've said before, I'm not great at remembering character names) was just a boy but it turns out that that character actually have two genders ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ My brain only figured that out after a few more reads of the story ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฃ In conclusion, it's an amazing novel ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Villa of Hills

Based on my reading, I can say that I haven't really gotten to the horror part yet considering the genre is a horror genre ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿคกโ˜ ๏ธ๐ŸŽƒ๐Ÿ•ท๏ธ The chapters are a little bit shorter than what I read usually but that's okay because everyone's creative in their own way ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’œ Since the author tried making the chapters sound like episodes, I can say it's a great start ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ Honestly, I'm for one intrigued to read more and figure out what's gonna happen next because damn, I'm left with a cliffhanger ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ I wanted to know more โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ I'm literally crying inside ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Hope that you'll update more chapters when you've got the time to do so โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Good luck in completing your work here ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ I wish you all the best ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Willow Rise Six

The cover is very intriguing. The fact that I've never read an adventure genre before but got the chance to do so right now, excites me to the core. By the looks of the first chapter, I can already tell that it's a pretty good story because the way the author narrates the story is incredible! The story was quite mysterious at some bits and it was fun to read. In short, I loved it. Even though the writing style wasn't what I really preferred, I would still recommend this book to my friends and family. As an addition, the author would reply positively to his readers and I highly respect the author for that. Great work.

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On the Verge

The story was truly great and lengthy, just the way I preferred ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ Though, I didn't like the part on how you explained about the old woman at the library ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” I just like it when stories respected old people no matter what the genre is but hey, it's just my opinion if any books are gonna talk about old people โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ However, when the female protagonist met the male protagonist, I found it really funny and I was literally laughing for minutes ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Not sure if I'm supposed to laugh at that but I did ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ The rest of the story really just intrigues the reader ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Overall, I can say that this story amazing but it does has it's flaws in my point of view. Example, the author has spelled "hurriedly" wrongly in the first chapter. I don't know if anyone noticed but I'm just telling it so that, the author knows where the mistakes are because sometimes as authors, we don't know where our mistakes are until someone tells 'em ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ That's all from me, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Alphas Lost Luna

It was really exciting and nice to read this ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’œ I enjoyed it ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Resident Evil: Field of Blood (Fireheart Fury Book 1)

The story really sounded mysterious and all to me ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž And the way it was narrated, left thinking on my own about what could've happened next ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ However, I think the punctuation when it comes to the dialogues need to be taken care of ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง Also, I found a word that was misspelled in the first chapter ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™ I have yet to read further because I'm quite busy nowadays but I hope my review on the first chapter will be found atleast helpful at some point ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ If I understood the sentence right, then the word 'started violently' should be corrected to startled violently ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Other than that, I don't think there's anymore mistakes that were done in the first chapter ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„ Someone has told me like 3 or 4 months ago that if the first and second chapter is good, then the rest of the story will run smoothly โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ My advice is the same for u โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› If the first and second chapter is great, then the rest of the story will be amazing ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ Until then, byeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Rainbow Island: Book 1

The story is great and really narrative ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ I could literally hear in my mind that someone is actually narrating the story ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคญ This story was narrated like how our elders would tell us about their olden days ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž However, there were a few words that we're spelled wrongly and it was spelled in a the same way to pronounce it but not in it's actually spelling ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” I'll help you with one word ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ There were actually more words that were spelled wrongly but I know that with the magic of editing, the story will end up great โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ Example of the word: found. According to your sentence in the novel, found should actually be written as fond ๐Ÿ’œ Another word: breathe. According to the sentence I read, it was supposed to be breed ๐Ÿ’™ Like I said, with the magic of editing, the story will definitely be greater than it is already ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ Until then, byeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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All you need is - Immortality

The story really captives a reader's attention when it comes to reading the first chapter ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• It really excited you at a point you can't explain because the more you read it, the more interesting it gets โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I'll give the overall rating a solid 4/5 stars because the book is still incomplete ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Okay so, moving on to the writing style โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› This is just my opinion on how I prefer to read my storybooks so, you don't have to change your writing style or anything because of me ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ Everyone is imaginative and really creative when it comes to writing ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ However, it's just my opinion about writing styles ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„ I love it when an author doesn't do so many paragraphs ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™ I know it's probably easier to read if it had many paragraphs but I just prefer it another way ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค You've done a very good job at writing this book and I hope you'll complete the story as soon as possible ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’œ Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Ice in Warm Blood

The cover was the one that had attracted my attention to read this book so, here I am ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ It was good read for me ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Also, it was wholly fascinating, savage and humorous ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿงก Overall, it was brilliant ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Lost Souls

Since I've read the old version of this story, I can tell that the author has made many changes and I liked the changes that were made because it simply made the story even more fantastic โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ Well done ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ‘

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The Skulls

The story was absorbing, beautifully written and quite narrative ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ Loved it โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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The Missing Piece (Excerpt)

Emotional, engaging, funny, a little bit toxic and we'll written ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ Definitely my type of book ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’ž

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TAMING THE ZOOKEEPER (First draft)

I must say that as a first draft, this was an outstanding work ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ I really loved it โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ It was intense at times and easy to read ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’• Yup, my favourite first draft ever ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Depressed Souls

I really felt the poems about Demons ๐Ÿ˜ˆ, Underwater ๐ŸŒŠ, Strong ๐Ÿ’ช, Hell ๐Ÿ”ฅ, Rain ๐ŸŒง๏ธ, Friends โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ, Lost in Tracks ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” and Moon ๐ŸŒ• This poet has some awesome skills in writing poems ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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I can't let the past repeat itself

Let's start off with the intro ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• A boy who spoke in rhyme got possessed ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜จ The rhyme he recited had a deep meaning ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ A deep and sad meaningful rhyme ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Moving on to chapter one ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿงก Kyle is friends with the protagonist โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Kyle was the possessed one ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Luckily, he didn't ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ Thanks to our protagonist ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿคญ The broken leg part was kinda disgusting but I really loved the mystery left there ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Like why did she suddenly twist her ankle ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค” How did she not notice the rabbit hole there ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿง Oh! The suspense killed the heck outta me ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ By the way, I think the story needed a few comma, full stop and question marks like here and there ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Overall, it was a great read for me โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Keep writing, keep smiling, and keep imagining ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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My Indian Mate

The summary is relatable because as an Indian girl myself, many people do judge us even if it was a small mistake and we don't really have much of a choice to disobey if they say we can't do certain things โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ I loved the mystery in the summary as well ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ It sounds so mysterious ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿบ Okayyyy, that sounded wayyyyyy better in my head ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Anyways, our female protagonist is the good ol' well-behaved girl while our male protagonist is a notorious playboy ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Did I mention that our male protagonist is the Alpha? ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ’œ Now, ya know ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I love how the characters communicate with each other ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ It just gives out a friendly vibe ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ And how this story speaks about fate โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Overall, it was great โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ

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Breaking The Contract

Another great work that was shared by this amazinggggggggggggggggggg author to her fellow readers โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› You truly are a born writer ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Prisoner Doctor

Great book, great concept and an excellent work done by the author ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ I'm beyond impressed โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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The Noir Crimson Escape

As I dove in to read this novel, I was shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Shocked to hear that her own mum doesn't want her ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ What kind of mother says that ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ An awful one, for sure ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Literally, the mum doesn't care for the kid but she cares so much about money ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘ Hello, mum to the female protagonist โ‰๏ธ MONEY CAN'T FREAKING BUY YOU HAPPINESS ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก I don't like this mum, she simply makes me angry ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ My mum is a woman who is sweet, kind and caring so, I can't really relate this mum who apparently has a trashy attitude ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿ™„ Anyway, the chapters are really short ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• Is this a short story โ“โ“ If it is, then good job ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ Alrighty then, that's all from me โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Byeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Psyche

Till two chapters so far but I can tell that you've started off with a great beginning ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ So, congrats on making an interesting start for your readers ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Hooked || JJK โœ”๏ธ

I'm so honored to be doing a review for this book a.k.a a fanfiction for BTS ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• This is like my second or third novel that I'mma review regarding a BTS fanfiction ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก I've already read this book like months ago and I've also shared with my gang and they said that they purple it ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ Well, so do I โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Overall, you've done a great job and I'd suggest you go do more fanfictions as it is like your special talent ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ Till then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Is She Your Sweet Dream

Perun has a toxic relationship and I hate it that it's toxic but I do love the drama ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Now, add in a scary mythological creature and Perun having sexual attractions for this creature that is the princess of darkness ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜จ๐Ÿ˜จ To make everything more interesting, horrific surroundings are also described in this story to make you scream for your parents or anyone who is near you ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Just, don't scream for ghosts, kayyyyy ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Who would've thought that this creature is the one to warm him about his toxic relationshipโ“I certainly did not ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿงก Three words for this novel, it is dramatic, horrifying and fantasticโ€ผ๏ธ See what I did there?? ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Cuz it's a fantasy genre and fantastic almost sounds like-- nevermind ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ Enough with my dad jokes ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Alrighty, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Wrong Train

Wooowww, this story is really good ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ‘ The prologue was the only emotional part for me at the moment ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž The rest were more to high school drama which I love โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Just like Sophie, I'm also confused on who's the famous one here ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Is it class president or football boyโ“โ“ As in, Lucas or Noah ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• The mean girl drama that Lisa has caused is kinda annoying like bruh, who would even bully a girl on her first day ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ Sophie doesn't even know what's happening in the school yet ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ Overall, this novel was terrific ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ Keep writing, keep smiling and keep imagining ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿงก

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Kimetsu no Yaiba: an Adventure tale, Part 1

This novel had such an interesting story that was told by the author ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ Brilliant โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›

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The Dark Side of Obsession

The chapters are really captivating and intriguing ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž Overall, it was an awesome read โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ

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Together Again

So far, it's off with a great start ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ I loved how this story was simple yet a good read ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’ž Good job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ‘

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The Silent Stalker

Omg, I'm terrified ๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜– Thank goodness that I was reading this in the daylight ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฐ It's been so long since I've got the goosebumps because of a story ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ I've noticed that there were a few grammar mistakes, misspelled words and stuff like that ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง๐Ÿง However, it's nothing that can't be fixed with the magic of editing ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿง™โ€โ™‚๏ธ Hmmm....if I kept reading Evan as Even, is that bad? ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Welp, for me, I kept reading his name like that and just realised that it was Evan at the end of the chapter ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Okay the guy in the beginning is completely a psycho ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช When he entered the story, I was already scared of him โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ This was such a good read ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž I love it ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Kookiewers, don't read this at night unless you want nightmares ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ It's absolutely terrifying ๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿ˜– Yikes ๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™€๐Ÿ™€ Overall, you've done a great job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ‘

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His Hidden Badass Queen

Adored it ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž

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Craving

The summary was true according to my few reads of vampire books and you're writing style is great ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ I've actually read your story beforehand when I've already discovered your page but I'm just writing the review today because I was super busy as I had a lot of school projects and so on to complete ๐Ÿซ๐Ÿ“š You're off with a great start and I'd like to suggest you to keep writing โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› You're a queen at writing and there's no doubt in that ๐Ÿ‘‘๐Ÿ‘ธ๐Ÿคด So, don't you dare drop that crown no matter what and just write, kayyyyyyyy ๐Ÿ–‹๏ธ๐Ÿ“˜

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Survival Journey

This story is somewhat similar to my reality and that's what made me want to read this story ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ Even the remark was amazing ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ I've read the first chapter and it was an awesome start โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Keep writing, keep smiling โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ž

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Shadow in the Darkness

I absolutely loved it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ

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Deviant

Eenie menie minie mo, this is the book that I love the most. The summary had caught my attention and I knew that I must move on to the next one, the prologue. I feel like I'm reading a movie's script because that was exactly how I felt when I was reading this work.

The prologue and the chapters were beautifully written. The author said in the book that the prologue was simply meant to manipulate me into reading Deviant. I think the summary itself has caught my attention, dear author. I'm literally falling in love with each and every word written in this book. No lie. The writing style is the best.

Ahhhhhhh!!!! Loving it โ™กโ™กโ™ก

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Bad Blood

Such a captivating story ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ Mind-blown ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ

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New Beginning

Splendid work done by this lovely author โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ

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Masked

Awesome and unique โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ

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Queen of hell

Loved it ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Mind Reader

I love stories like this ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ And I really love the way you've put everything together โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Honestly, I'd give this one a 10/10 if I could โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› It was fantastic ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

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My Lover Boy

I loved how the female protagonist doesn't likes Hunter's company but still wants him to be like himself towards her like saying hi and so on ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Okay, so obviously this Hunter boy had a crush on our female protagonist because well, it's kinda obvious ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Not sure why his friends can't figure it out on one go though ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ Super sus ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ The names you gave the female characters are so unique ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ, I don't even know even know how to spell 'em ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ I think it's spelled as Zeraphineโ“I'm so sorry if I got the name wrong ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ I've never came across a female protagonist that was given a unique name by the author ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… This is actually my first time witnessing a very name and also kinda hard to remember ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Anyways, I really love how you've decided to do long chapters because I personally love long chapters as I find short chapters just ends the journey a bit too quickly ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Thanks for sharing this story with us on Inkitt ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ It was splendid ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Once There Was A Princess

This story really has a lot of potential in it and that's the best part ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ I'd love to see more chapters for this book ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’ž This story really is something else โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Recommended to all ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

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The Miserable Prince and the Would be Wizard

I really loved how the summary went smoothly and how the first chapter simply grabs my attention ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ Wonderful work โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›

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Shake It Up; Wonder Boys

If you're an army, then this book was definitely made for you ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ This book is awesome, creative and the best fanfiction that I've read so far โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Thanks for sharing this story with us ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Pandora's Box

Believe me, the prologue is the best part in this fantastic novel ๐Ÿ“˜๐Ÿ’ž

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Rival Gangs

The beginning and the writing style were awesome ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ So, well done ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ

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Project Trouble X Three

A brilliant work that shall never be forgotten by any โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›

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Supposed love

Words just can't simply describe how great this author is when it comes to writing poems ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ

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In the Absence of Light

I really liked this story ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž This story automatically gave me the "movie vibe" and that's my favorite vibe ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜

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The Silent Witness

The summary, the way the author professionally describes this story, all of the god and goddess in this story like the names and their powers literally amazed me ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ I really love this story and I personally think that this story needs be published right away โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I really hope to see your book on the bookstore I always go to which is Popular ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Great job and good luck ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ‘

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A Midnight Mind

This was such a great start ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž Well done ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ‘

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Memories & Treasures

I have three words for ya ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž I am impressed โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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The life of a teenage vampire

The first chapter was definitely intense ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING โฃ๏ธ I felt that guy was being too generous tho ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ However, if I was in her situation, I would've probably pray to live as well ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Anyway, I can see that your story is about to take on an epic journey ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• So, I've only read two chapters so far ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’ž Tho, the writing style isn't something that I usually prefer, but this story just automatically changed my mindset ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ So, good job ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ Hope to see you writing more stories like this one ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Sharp

I was obsessed with this wonderful book written by the author ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ It's really hard to find good books nowadays but luckily I found you and your novels ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Not so Innocent

This story deserves two thumbs up ๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘ Il literally saluting you in reality ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’• Hope that you'll become a successful writer with many published books ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’ž

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Meeting You

Too fast and too jumpy ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Welp, that was my first impression of this book ๐Ÿ“–โค๏ธ However, I don't mind scenes that are kinda fast and jumpy, as long as I understood the story ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’œ I've read a novel that was fast and jumpy too at times and I found no problem in reading it because the writer presented the story well ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ๐Ÿฆ‹ The same goes for this writer ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’ž The writer presented his/her story well enough for me to understand it even though it's a bit jumpy ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ Please don't change anything for this story, tho if you wanna edit the grammar and stuff then it's fine ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ However, please don't change the writing style no matter what โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ I really love your writing style so please don't make any changes to that even if someone asked you to ๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž You're awesome and unique ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก Keep writing and you'll definitely achieve something HUGE in the future ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Chaha Tujhe (my heart loves you) OS

The introduction for the characters was amazing ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• The story line was terrific ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ The way that this story was described was just perfect โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงกโค๏ธ What more could you want from this story? Exactly! Nothing more cause everything was superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’ž Great job ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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FALLING IN LOVE WITH MY THERAPIST

The first chapter was kinda like a sad chapter for Annie ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” The second chapter was really intense ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ I can't imagine whatever Annie had to go through ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข Especially her baby ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Annie's husband literally made me mad in a second ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜  That jerk ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก In the third chapter, the story went pretty smoothly ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Also, the chat between Jojo and Annie seemed like how I'd chat with my friends everyday ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ So, that's really relatable for me ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ On the fourth chapter, it's a good chapter and most likely to be more of a calm situation but it's a little intense as well ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคญ Overall, this story is awesome โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Keep up with the good work ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿงก Hope that you'll complete this book as soon as possible ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ I'm waiting for more updates ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž

-Kookie ๐Ÿช๐Ÿ’•

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The party

I really liked this story because I've never read anything like this before ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Good job on the sentence structuring ๐Ÿ˜„โค๏ธ There were quite a few grammar mistakes that can be fixed by editing ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› Other than that, the book cover looks simple and nice ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Also, this book is somewhat similar to reality โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ I've definitely picked out a good book to read ๐Ÿ“™๐Ÿ’ž

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Candyland

Okay, for this story, you may think that this novel is all about a cute and lovely story in Candyland ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿญ Welp, you're wrongโ€ผ๏ธThis is a true horror story that may or may not give you nightmares if you don't really read much horror genres ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’œ What about the characters? Well, the main character is Claire โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Claire is...an idiot ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’• However, I do like the fact that she is brave โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› She is brave but again, she's an idiot for playing a game she shouldn't have ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ Literally, Claire was babysitting and she played a horror game ๐ŸŽƒ Clearly, she thought, "Oh well, none of this would happen anyway!". But in reality, everything goes wrong from then onwards ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ Honestly, I'm more scared for the baby more than Claire โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ I mean, she's the one who did it so, I don't feel guilty for picturing what's the worst that could happen to her ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคญ

Should I actually be worried that in all horror genres, the police officers don't take the characters who needs help seriously?

No, I won't cuz I live for non-reality dramas ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Anyways, I'm not gonna spoil anymore of the good scenes in this book cause where's the fun in that ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ It's better for you to read this amazing book yourself and discover on why Claire is a bit foolish ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Well, not only that, but also to find out about the ghost ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’ž

This book is incredible and I would definitely recommend this book to y'all who simply loves horror genres just like me โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ So, this is where I'm gonna end my review cuz I have tuition in three hours and I seriously need my sleep because sleep is bae ๐Ÿ˜ดโค๏ธ Till then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Preserved In Ink

Loved it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’œ

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Falling For Kristian

The summary is really great ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ I can't wait the first chapter โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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Unforgettable Love : Sebastian and Ximena

Literally everything in this book is amazing ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ I also liked how you've used a different language in this book ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ It's Italian ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’œ I've learned a little Spanish but I don't really understand Italian because Spanish was already hard for me to learn ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Let alone, Italian ๐Ÿ˜ Also, your summary was short but captivating ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ Anyways, since you're an author who wants to improve their work, here's some tips ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’•

1) You've put a warning in the first chapter, am I right? So, why don't you put it at the summary ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿงก I personally think it's better to put it at the summary because readers will usually take a look at the summary first ๐Ÿ“šโค๏ธ

2) Please fix the grammar mistakes in this book ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ This because many readers will read a storybook to either learn the language or just enjoy their favorite author's book ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’• It's actually nothing that serious, so it's not a necessity to fix mistakes. However, it's just one of my suggestion ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž

I really enjoyed this book and I hope that you'll become a successful published author in the future ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ Till then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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POEMS

The author of this book will literally blow up your mind with the poems that the author has written ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ The poems were definitely filled with a lot of emotions ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• The poems that were written by this author was something that I've never seen before ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ If I was an agent, I would've already help you publish your book so that, the whole world knows about it ๐Ÿ—บ๏ธโค๏ธ However, I'm not ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’œ Literally, everytime I read poems, they all sound legitimately relatable ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› I don't know how y'all do it and I find it quite awesome โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I'm looking forward to more poems written by you in the future ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿ”ฎ Do let me know if you're about to publish another poem book because I'd gladly read it and tell you how incredible it is again ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ Until then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’œ

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ยฐยฐยฐ_POEMS_ยฐยฐยฐ

I must say that you've definitely succeeded in entertaining your readers like you've wanted to ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Two of my favorite poems from this book is dreaming and personal envy ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’ž I'd give this book two thumbs up because the poems here are really relatable ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› I know this is for entertainment purposes only, but I'd really like to see you doing more poems books ๐Ÿ“šโค๏ธ Your poems are fascinating and I loved every part of it ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Being able to write poems is really hard as I have tried to write a few poems myself ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’œ So, I'd gladly salute to you for making such beautiful poems ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก Have a great day ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

-Kookie ๐Ÿช๐Ÿ’•

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Emma

Honestly, I don't know whether to be happy that this story got me hooked by the first chapter itself ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Or to be sad that all of the characters are going through some deep stuff ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข Either way, this story was really interesting ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ At first, I got confused with Emma's name because I didn't know her full name in the first place ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’œ However, after I've read a few more chapters, I've accomplished something โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ I've figured out her full name ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Sounds very childish for a teen like me to say but I'mma say it anyways ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ You've done a very nice job at entertaining your readers and I really respect you for that ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’ž Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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The Archaeological Chronicles

This book is sooooooooo relatable to reality ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• That's one of the reasons on why I love this ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’ž Other than that, I loved the author's writing style ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ There were a few sentences that caught my attention such as a raging war ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ I loveee how some authors can put words like these together and make it sounds funny ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Furthermore, this is actually the first book that I've read on Inkitt that tells me that the female protagonist is riding a motorcycle to her work place and so on ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Also, the sentence structuring in this book is incredible ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ There were a few grammar mistakes but it's nothing that can't be fixed ๐Ÿ˜„ I mean, I've never seen a book without grammar mistakes because it's quite a common thing to happen so, don't worry about it ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’• I'd really recommend everyone to read this book because it's pretty awesome โฃ๏ธ Yup, I'm back to writing long reviews because I have one week of holiday starting from tommorow before my school reopens again ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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New Winter Mornings

This author has definitely got a true gift when it comes to writing ๐ŸŽโœ๏ธ Keep smiling, keep writing ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’› You'll achieve something HUGE in the end ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ”š I just know it ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž

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Ella Hope

This is my first read by this author and Iโ€™d definitely read her book again ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ

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Her Life

This story was perfectly written and very deep ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ Well, done ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Discovering The Pack: Primordial Claim

This is my first book by Myuki but it will definitely NOT be my last ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ

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Ray Of Sunshine

I absolutely loved the first chapter ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• This book is such a heart-warming story โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ The author has also done a very good job at describing the characters and that made me love the story even more โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ This story reminds of a love story that is brought by fate ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ This book definitely deserves more reads ๐Ÿ‘“ So, I'd suggest everyone to go check out this book right now because it's such a beautiful story ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ

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Lighting Seeker

Interesting ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• Fascinating ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ Extraordinary โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Loved it ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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The Grooms Baby

This story is just like your typical girls story and I love it โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ However, I kinda find your writing style a bit uncomfortable for me ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” I found it a bit uncomfortable because you've used some bad words in here and didn't censor it ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ It's also because of the lifestyle I'm currently living in and that's why I found it just a bit disturbing ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… Maybe you could censor it or put a warning in the start of the story? For example, b*tch. I often read bad words like that so, your story has really surprised me ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Tbh, everytime I read a book that had some bad words that weren't censored, I'd give the author the same advice ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Other than that, there were a few grammar mistakes but nothing that can't be understood by the reader ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’ž This is only the first chapter and the starting really sounds interesting ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• I hope that you will update your book as soon as possible because I think this book really deserves all of the reads in this world ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’œ

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The Hunter

I'm liking the start so far โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ“˜ Charlie's character is pretty cool ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ She's also a bit sassy which made me like her character more ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ Great job on the first chapter ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Two thumbs up for this awesome story ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I'm sorry but I can't really rate that much for your plot because I'm not quite sure where the story is going yet but by the looks of it, I can tell that you're gonna blow everyone's mind with the next updates ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ There were a few mistakes and missing words in the story but it's nothing serious ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’ž It's just some minor mistakes that everyone will do ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’œ In short, I'm really hoping for more updates on this story because it was magnificent (โ˜†โ–ฝโ˜†) Till then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œโœจ

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The Art Of Lying

It's simple, beautiful, special and unique ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž Overall, I loved it โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ

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How Remus Met Marlene

I absolutely loved this story ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• This story had definitely brought me back to the memories when I was watching Harry Potter ๐Ÿ”ฎ๐Ÿง™โ€โ™‚๏ธ This story is exactly how the 'behind the scenes' would be like for Harry Potter โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ You've done a terrific job at this novel ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ Keep up with the amazing work ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Train me, Coach

Such a sweet love story ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ My words simply can't explain on how much I love this story ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ Keep up with the great work ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Exclusive

Heyya ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’• You've done such an amazing job for the first chapter ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I'm already hooked โฃ๏ธ I'm just waiting for the next chapters ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ I can't rate much for your novel overall cause it's just your first chapter ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” However, I already know that your literally gonna blow my mind when you submit the next chapters ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฉ Also, I think I've spotted a few grammar mistakes on the summary ๐Ÿค“๐Ÿค“ Look at me, try'na be a English teacher ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Well, it's not bad considering I can understand the summary and I honestly don't care much for the grammar but I just wanted to let you know why I've rated the grammar part a bit low โ˜น๏ธโ˜น๏ธ Again, you've done a very good job, so don't give up at writing even tho there might haters trying to make you fall ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’ž Keep smiling while writing ๐Ÿ“šโœ๏ธ

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Finding Paradise In Hell

You have written so many beautiful chapters for this book and I really wanna thank you for that ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’• You've also structured your sentences perfectly and the words you've used here are simply splendid โฃ๏ธ This story had almost brought me to tears ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Great job, author ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ You really know how to make your readers to feel what the characters are feeling ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ There's nothing much to say because your story was lit ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ I'll definitely recommend this story to all of my friends because I think they'll love it too โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’ž

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Distress Alpha's Damsel Mate

Till now, there's two chapters so far ๐Ÿค” So, I'm not really quite sure how the plot is but I'm excited for the upcoming chapters ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’ž And this is one of the many books that has made me speechless again ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ I'm waiting for more chapters because I'm interested on knowing where this story is going ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ Good luck ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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Walls Around Us

I think this is the first time I'm reading a poem book and I absolutely loved it ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ I do read the poem books that are given to read at school, but I find 'em really boring ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… But your poems literally amazed me ๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿคฏ Ur way of writing is definitely my style ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’• I also liked how your poems show that reading poems can actually be fun and exciting โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œโค๏ธ I've never read or bought any poems book before so I'm happy that yours is the first one that I've read ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ž Do tell me if you're gonna publish this book of yours in the future because I really wanna buy it sooooooooo badly ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ Love ya โค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’šโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be Pt.1

I really like how you've immediately got me hooked with the first chapter itself ๐Ÿ˜„โค๏ธ Even though the first chapter was quite short, I still enjoyed it โฃ๏ธ Never have I ever imagined that I would like a book's first chapter that was really short ๐Ÿ“š๐Ÿ’• This book definitely has a great start but the grammar is just a little bit messy ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” However, I would like to ask you to not be worried about that because if the story is awesome, the readers definitely won't bother about the small mistakes ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ Until then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿฆ‹โค๏ธ

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Catalyst- The Journey Begins

First off, I'm really hooked with the summary itself ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ It immediately made me wanna read the rest of the story ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ As for the story, it really got me intrigued! I really liked that this story was kinda connected to the Science subject when you referred to the Sun, the Moon, human, animals and more (โ‰งโ–ฝโ‰ฆ) The backstory of the Light Being and the Dark being was fantastic as well ๐Ÿ˜„โค๏ธ I also really liked how the small brown haired boy was the only one listening to the priest ๐Ÿฆ‹๐Ÿ’ž If it was me, I would've been like playing with my fingers for no reason โœŒ๏ธ, looking at the clock every minute โฐ, thinking about food ๐Ÿฅจ๐ŸŒฎ and the list just goes on and on ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ This is a really great start for your book ๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ’• I'm really looking forward to reading the whole book if I can ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’ž There were a few grammar mistakes but I don't really mind 'em โ™กโ™ก I don't really care much about the grammar mistakes as long as I can understand the story, then that should be enough โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Œ Again, I just wanna say that this is absolutely a great start and a great book โฃ๏ธ Keep up with the good work ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ‘ Until then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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Ansley (A Stalking Love)

I actually liked how the characters were suspenseful. I think story just creeped the heck out of me ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ I must say that you've done a very good job in this horror genre ๐Ÿ˜ I love horror stories and I definitely love it when they scare every bit inside of you and this story has definitely given that๐Ÿ˜ฃ๐Ÿ˜ฃ I accidentally read this at night one day, and I kept looking over my shoulder ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ Because I was paranoid after reading this story ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ๐Ÿ˜ถ I also liked how the summary was short, nice and quite understanding ๐Ÿ˜„ I'm still reading this story and by far, it's very good ๐Ÿ‘ Besides keep on over thinking on who the stalker is and getting paranoid from every little thing๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚, I'll say it's a very good horror story. If this story was out in cinemas, I would go but I'd probably scare every inside of me again and I'd have to run outside after getting a heart attack๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ However, I have no complains over story cuz it was freaking awesome!!!!! I love you๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee โœŒ๏ธ

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The Alpha's Rejected Mate

When I started reading this outstanding book๐Ÿ“–, I was like, "Cade, you idiot! You lost yourself the best girl that anyone could dream to have!!!!". I was literally scolding Cade in my mind for multiple times ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ He deserved it ๐Ÿ™„ But, when I heard about Kaiden and Scar, I immediately ship them already knowing how cute they will look together ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I shipped them as Kailette ๐Ÿ˜ As in Kaiden and Scarlett ๐Ÿ˜ I was secretly hoping Scar would be with Kaiden forever as in for marriage and so on ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ’• I really hate Cade though ๐Ÿ˜‘ He's sooo stupid fro rejecting the most kindest, brightest and sweetest girl in the world! I know he had his reasons ๐Ÿ˜, but still! It's not okay! I really hope form the bottom of my heard Scar will end up with Kaiden ๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿคญ If it's Cade, I'm really gonna cry cuz Kaiden is wayyyyyyyyyyy more better than Cade ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ Sorry but not sorry Cade, your just a jerk ๐Ÿ˜ and I hate you because you rejected, our lovely Scar ๐Ÿ˜ก Anyways, I'm just at Chapter 15 and i really do hope that Kaiden and Scar will remain together forever bcuz they're literally meant to beโฃ๏ธ That's all from me now๐Ÿ˜„ I love you and byeeee๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โœจ

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Unpredictable: Through The Darkness

Okay, first of all, you did an amazing job on bringing my attention towards this story (โ‰งโ–ฝโ‰ฆ) Honestly, I didn't quite know where this story was going but in the end I understood ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’• It's a nice story and has some epic lines along with it too! I've actually watched Kungfu Panda like a quadrillion times and I already remembered the whole movie lines๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Anyway, what I'm try'na say is that I feel like the words in your book is sooooo relatable, well for me, I would definitely remember most of the lines once I've read 'em more than five times๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ’ž I really loved the character who's named Ava cuz my life is kinda almost like her as in helping my friends whenever they need a shoulder to cry on๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค— I personally think if your a published author maybe now or in the future, this book could sell for more than a 100 copies and I'd be one of the buyer๐Ÿ˜ Seriously though, I really can't stop buying myself novels when I walk into the bookstore ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ๐Ÿคฆโ€โ™€๏ธ Okay, jokes aside๐Ÿ˜‚, I really love your book and would loooooove to read it over and over again๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’žโœจ Till then, byeeee ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’•

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Alpha's Boy

Omg๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ’ž Am I the only one who has been in love with the summary itself๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ Literally, I have soooooooo much to say! Unfortunately, this book has left me speechless ๐Ÿ˜ถ Like, literally! I mean, I've read your story and it is absolutely AMAZING ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’žโœจ Just wanted to kick in that I would definitely read any book that has a werewolve genre in it๐Ÿบ Before I end this 10 minutes of speech that completely sounds like the speeches that our headmistress will give and bore us to death till we fall asleep๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚, I would like to say, "PLEASE CONTINUE WRITINGโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ" By the way, if you're ever been on a writer's block or maybe just something like that, don't worry๐Ÿ˜ It'll be better sooner or later๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’• I love your stories โค๏ธ Hoping for better stories from the bottom of my heart๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’ž Yup, that totally sounded cringy, even to me๐Ÿ˜‘ However, I don't mind actually๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Anyways, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ’•

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The Dog

Ok so first of all, I'd like to say that I'm actually quite picky when it comes to reading horror stories because I love a good horror story! When I first looked at the title, I didn't have a clue on how a dog could be a part of a horror story but as I read your story, I started to understand everything!! I must say, hands off to you for making a very interesting story!!!!! I may not know what's the most comfortable genre you like writing, but if you'd like to continue writing more horror stories, I'd say go for it! Even though I felt like I saw a few grammar mistakes(like simple minor mistakes), I didn't mind because as long as I understood the story, I guess that was enough for me already. Yea so, just in case if you wanna publish this book, I will be the first to rush to the bookstore and buy it ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿคญ๐Ÿ“š Lastly, I still wanna remind you that this book is absolutely fantastic ๐Ÿ’žโœจ

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