Coraidhe

London/Bucharest

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Interesting plot

From what I read so far, I enjoyed. I think is unique, the story line easy to follow and the plot of the book is very good and different. I found no writing errors, but English is not my first language, so I must give 5 stars for that also. Good work, and the author's imagination deserve all the appreciation!

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Amazing!

I love every detail, every scene!
I want more!

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Strong emotions

This story is very touching. I must give all the credit to the author for the power to make a reader to experience a cascade of emotions as going deeper into the chapters. All I can hope is that this book will be finished, so I can read it all, because it left me wanting to know what happends next.
Very good story!

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Something nice

I find this story sweet. Very good to read when in bed, because then you can fall asleep with a smile on your face. Congratulations to the wonderful author!

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A story with potential

I rated this story overall with four stars out of five because there are many things you can improve. As your first book -is very good, but try not to rush it and be careful with the flow of the actions and events.
The writing style can be improved as well, try to reduce the "-ing" and some repetition, like the v neck line, which appears too much.
You could add a better description of the characters' internal struggles, so the reader could understand them better..
Remember always that i can understand only what you write, not what you picture. Gestures are important, many times a simple one can tell a lot about a character.
I hope this helps, as we learn and grow as writers- our fictional worlds grow with us.
Nevertheless, I would recommend your story and I enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work !

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Intriguing!

I like how the story begin and the transition from the introduction to the plot.There are some things i don't understand but it might be too early for that, so I will wait for more chapters.
A bit unrealistic the driving scene and the two stories dive, maybe need more details on those scenes, so the reader can have a better picture of the set and how the characters got in that phase...
Promising start, i think it has a lot of potential and i m waiting to see what shape the story will take.

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Very nice story

The story is sweet. I like very much the descriptions and how the author builds the characters accordingly to their age, with their inner struggles and feelings.
I think is worth reading when you want to lose yourself in the universe of supernatural beings.
The dialogue and the line of events flows nice, and the story is easy to follow.
I recommend it!

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Amazing story

This story has the salt and pepper. Once you start it, it keeps you engaged till the point you find yourself into the characters' skin. Easy to follow, the smooth flow takes a reader to another dimension and keeps him there, in the dynamic of the book's world.
Congratulations!

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Simply captivating!

It seems to me that anything I would say it wouldn't do justice to the beauty of this story.
From the introduction I was captivated by the layers of mystery that paints the characters' world, and amazed of the descriptions that accentuate the feelings and the suspense.
Very good story!

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Good internal struggle focus, good flow of the story

I love how the author is building the world of this book, and focus also on the internal problems of the wife, and her struggles living with a war traumatised man. I like the details and descriptions but i think a bit more could be added. Per total, this story attracts and impress! Good job!

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Different

Not the typical werewolf story. The details are connected and full of meaning, developing a story beyond the story. The connections are easy to miss, but once you spot them, they add heaviness to the plot.
Different style, very good plot!

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