Wow, I have no words.
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Although there's only one chapter so far, this story is fantastic. Your writing style is super compelling and draws the reader in. I love how descriptive you are when you are comparing the two sisters, it really brings the characters to life.
The only reason I didn't give full stars for your plot is because there is only one chapter and it's the prologue so I'm still not entirely sure how the book is going to unfurl. However, I love the suspense you created with the ending and the overall flow of the chapter.
There were a few technical errors in the chapter, a few sentences were not completely finished, and some grammar errors, little mistakes everyone makes. Again, I think your language is super descriptive and really gives your characters a "soul".
I think you're writing is amazing and I can't get over how good this story is in just one chapter! Keep up the superb work!