CottonCandySkies

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Damn...

Wow, I have no words.
Although there's only one chapter so far, this story is fantastic. Your writing style is super compelling and draws the reader in. I love how descriptive you are when you are comparing the two sisters, it really brings the characters to life.
The only reason I didn't give full stars for your plot is because there is only one chapter and it's the prologue so I'm still not entirely sure how the book is going to unfurl. However, I love the suspense you created with the ending and the overall flow of the chapter.
There were a few technical errors in the chapter, a few sentences were not completely finished, and some grammar errors, little mistakes everyone makes. Again, I think your language is super descriptive and really gives your characters a "soul".
I think you're writing is amazing and I can't get over how good this story is in just one chapter! Keep up the superb work!

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Interesting Story!

So far I’m really enjoying the story! It’s an interesting vampire story and although I don’t know much about the previous books, I like what you’re doing! However, I do find the storytelling a little jumpy and some of the grammar isn’t quite right. Luckily, it’s all stuff that can be changed with a little editing so I’m sure your story will only continue to get better! Good luck, I look forward to reading more!

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Intrigue!

I'm not completely caught up, but I'm really loving the story so far! It's intense and fast paced, jumping straight into a suspenseful and action filled plot complete with a lovely slow burn romance. I'm not usually someone who enjoys multiple points of view because they tend to be choppy, but you've succeeded at creating a nice flow where the switches aren't jarring. There are some grammar mistakes that can be fixed with some extra read throughs, such as punctuation and spelling errors. Overall I'm really enjoying the story and your style! I can't wait to keep reading!

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A new favourite!

I love this story so much! I think it's super well written and I'm loving the new telling of this greek myth. There are a few moments where the use of more modern words is a little jarring, and some of the grammar and spelling is a little off, but the characters are so vibrant and the descriptions are so colourful and beautiful those mistakes are easily forgotten. I think this story is truly beautiful and I'm so glad to see this myth live on in such a romantic and magical way. I can't wait to read more! I absolutely love what you're doing!

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Great Start!

So far it's really interesting and descriptive. It's easy to see that you're used to writing poetry due to the amount of literary devices in your writing. The switching of the characters in each chapter is a little confusing and get's me a little lost in the story sometime, but the plot is really interesting and unique so far! There are also a few facts that don't add up in the story, which might have been due to my confusion with the character switching and some grammatical errors. So far, it's an interesting story and I'm excited to see how it will unfold.

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AMAZING

I've read then entire Carmichael series on Wattpad and I've loved each and every one of them. You're wiring style is so unique and your characters are so relatable. Even though I loved the original Knox's Girl, I think I'm finding this one to be my favourite. It's a little cliché, which I love, yet is unique and different to the stories I've read on here or any other platform. I don't think there has been any glaring grammar issues which makes me super happy!
Continue writing, you're work is fantastic!

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I LOVE IT

I started reading your books on Wattpad, and have loved them since I first started reading "My One and Only", I love your characterization and I love your writing style. It was a welcome shock when I saw "Innocent Prisoners" on my home page. I love your plots and can't wait to continue reading your book. Never stop writing, you are amazing!

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OBSESSED

So, this is the first time I've read a viking novel an I am completely obsessed. I have always enjoyed historical romances, and have always had a soft spot for the Highlands and England, but this is perhaps one of my favourite books I've read on any sites! The plot is great, and I love your writing style. I hope this book inspires authors to write more novels like this one! I love your story, please write more like it!

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