This has a very capturing start. However, it does need a re-read and a polish there were some sentence structure issues that need looking a,t as it could distract from what is a very good plot.
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Some the characters have very 'famous' names from shall we say 'famous' love stories and Emma, Scarlet, Darcy... that could be a plus or a minus. howver it was so enjoyable that maybe it is a minor. Some of your dialogue was brilliant. I would definitely improve the blurb as that does the story no justice and does not fit the writing style which is compelling overall. BTW consider getting a new high res cover as the picture has pixilated in the upload and that's a shame because from what I could see its a good cover.
Keep writing and improving well done and good luck