Craig Beckham

Newcastle Upon Tyne

I love to write, and to challenge myself. "The only way of discovering the limits of the possible, is to venture a little way past them into the impossible" Arthur C. Clarke

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Unique!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Excellent writing style and structure.

Intriguing characters, living in a world full of possibilities.

I love an exciting fantasy story, and that is what you have given me. I look forward to seeing it completed. Keep up the good work!

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Promise is full of promise!

The plot is an interesting one, with a lot of potential. The characters are well rounded, and loveable. The emotional dialogue suits those characters as well. Any grammatical errors can be fixed, and I am excited to read more. Keep it up.

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A story with potential

The plot idea was very interesting, and Jeremy's character allows plenty of room for development as the story progresses.
It has a lot of potential, and I look forward to reading more when it is finished. Keep up the hard work.

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An awesome read!

This was an amazing story, told from the perspective of the zombies! Honestly, I have not read anything like it. After all, zombie stories tend to follow the lead of human characters instead. As a result, I could not help but compare their lives to ours.

It is very well written, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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A real page turner!

I don't usually take to this genre, but I was intrigued. The characters are well built on, and that is what does it for me. Keep up the good work!

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Eerily addictive!

The author demonstrated a use of page-turning creativity. The writing style works perfectly with this particular genre as well. The spooky details of this haunting are told in a way which left me wanting more, this was especially the case with the chosen cliff-hangers at the end of each chapter. The characters are mysterious and well rounded, which is exactly what you want in a story.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Werewolves!

This story has excellent attention to detail. The characters are well rounded, Jax is my favourite of course. The author has a lovely writing style, of which made for a compelling read

I look forward to reading more of your work, keep it up.

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Romantic

The story was beautifully written, and the plot flowed nicely. The characters were well rounded and addictive, especially my favourite of whom was Jake. I do not usually read this genre, and may have blushed a little, only a little. It defined the term 'page-turner'.
I truly enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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A great tale

The use of famous quotes to begin each chapter was a very nice touch, and one that we don't see very often. The plot is perfect, the world is magical and the characters were well built on. It was a lovely escape from reality.

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Creative

The author has a beautiful writing style, and it is great that such an interesting plot is not lost amidst each character's point of view. Quentin's character has it all, and it made me want to read more. I look forward to reading the next chapters. Keep up the good work.

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Spine-tingling

There is no better read than what you get from a story that is filled with mystery and suspicious characters that you can't stop thinking about. This plot stuck with me. It is very well written, just like the author's other works.

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A heartfelt story.

The way in which the author addressed complex relationships in this story was incredible. I truly felt invested in the happiness of the characters. It is beautifully written.

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Immersing!

This story was thoroughly enjoyable. It had it all, from effective use of cliff-hangers, attention to detail, memorable characters and an incredible plot which left me wanting more. The next chapters will only add to the high quality of writing which the author has demonstrated.

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Haunting!

The story defines the term 'page turner'. The characters are well rounded, with a lot of potential. Even though there are only four chapters so far, the plot stays with you after you put it down. It is haunting! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read the rest of it.

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A pleasant read

I must say, I am no ballet dancer. As someone with little knowledge of the art, I found Rachel's story to be fascinating. I actually feel educated. The pain that ballet dancers must go through, both physically and emotionally!

The story is well written. Each of the main characters were nicely rounded, and as a result of that the plot naturally flourished. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Enthralling!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is well written, with an interesting plot. I was hooked from the beginning.

The characters are entertaining, loveable and most of all bubbly (Especially Cindy and Emma). I loved the cliff-hanger too.

I look forward to reading it all again when it's complete.

Good work.

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A story with potential

I like the overall plot of the story. There are a few aspects of grammar, punctuation and sentence structure that could use a little work. This is normal for any ongoing piece of writing though.

The characters are mysterious, and will allow for further exploration throughout the later chapters.

I look forward to reading it when it's finished. keep it up!

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You have a convert in me

I have always took to reading science fiction more than anything. This story jumped out at me, and now I can't get enough. Great plot. Great structure and great characters. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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A lovely read

I loved the developing relationship between Carra and Jo throughout. For me, the story held a perfect balance of 'steamy' and 'romantic'.

The plot was fantastic. Impressionable characters, and a nice all around read. Keep it up!

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A real page turner!

First of all, I would like to say that I loved Zero and Alicia. I also noticed that you have written the same story in Spanish I believe? Very impressive.

Romance and Fantasy combined here in a magical way. This made for a great plot. I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up!

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Intriguing plot!

As you mentioned earlier, there are some issues relating to punctuation and grammar. This is to be expected with any draft though.
I love the attention to detail with each of the characters, A story is only as good as it's characters after all. I think that Tina is my favourite if I had to choose.

There's also the car choice, I mean who doesn't love an Impala.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story when it is finished.

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Inspiring!

I had never realised just how much difference short, powerful chapters could make to the plot of a story. Naturally, some stories require longer chapters. This one was perfect! I especially loved the comparisons between our world and his. Very creative, and a pleasure to read.

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An incredible read!

It has been noted many times already throughout the comments, but your writing style is brilliant. I felt as though I was sitting there with each of the characters. I look forward to reading more of your work!

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Amazing!

I have to admit, the title of the book drew me straight in. The plot took care of the rest. It was a great read, and a story that I feel I could come back to again.

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Incredible!

This is an intense, and an utterly engrossing fast-paced stroll through human history and culture.

This wonderful story allows the reader to engage more with this particular time period, through the eyes of some truly interesting characters.

Your chapter structure could not have been chosen better for writing this kind of story. I believe that the story's first person narrative, from multiple perspectives, was a sound idea, and it kept me wanting more.

This story was an emotional rollercoaster, where plot twists and ever developing characters were in abundance.

Chapter Four has me yearning to discover what has become of these loveable characters, especially Ester, and Klara. With the use of such an effective plot twist at the very end of this chapter, I am eager to read on.

There were a few punctuation flaws and missing words, as previously mentioned. yet that can be expected within any piece of writing.
Do let me know when you have wrote some more, I look forward to reading it. Great work!

Craig. B.

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A unique and vivid portrayal of another world!

I thoroughly enjoyed the descriptive technique that the writer applies here. This is truly another world that I would like to see more of. The dialogue also kept me enthralled, I just wish that there was more to read, certainly something to look forward to. There may have been couple of punctuation mistakes, but the plot of the story overshadowed these, very enjoyable.

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