Cellia Veeds

Just a girl who loves to write

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I really liked it a lot. Most of it was east to read and understand. Its not all too in your face and its a quick read if you have time to sit. I really loved how it was easy to understand the world, especially since a lot of the times I get lost when the world's are created. The only part where it got difficult for me to understand and follow were the flashbacks. I had to make sure that I understood what part was the flashback and what was part of the current story. Once I got the hang of understanding their placements and relevance to the story, it got easier for me to follow along in the later chapters. I really liked the imagery and descriptions, it was well thought out and you can tell time was taken in plotting out the story! I'm excited to read the sequels!

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