Cryptic Writer

Without a doubt THE best book I've read on Inkitt

This book was honestly amazing in so many different ways. I loved the concept of a inmate remembering their life and what got them in there. I loved the questions that the narrator asked themselves and I loved their personality. The characters in this story were fantastic and well-written. I noticed one thing though I kept seeing scarred instead of scared and I was wondering if this was intentional or not. My only real problem with the story is that the main character likes grape jelly over strawberry jelly which immediately shows mental instability.

Good short stories

These stories will keep you entertain and I like how the short stories aren't drawn out, I love the twist in some and I like how it doesn't just stick to murder or something like that but also goes to Paranormal Activities. I highly recommend reading this book you will not be disappointed. Also read her other stories she is a great writer.

Better than the first one

So first of all, I'm glad you fixed my only issue that I mentioned in my last review. I think the overall story was better than the first one I felt it was a more gripping plot with him fighting for his right as clan leader and we learn a lot more about Yautja Prime. There was some parts I didn't like but the good outweighs the bad by a large margin.

Worth a read

I honestly enjoyed the story and I think it's a good start to the series I do wish that when the chapters shared two different perspectives you would use the line to show when changing perspectives because sometimes I would get confused. The plot is fast-paced and something is always happening and it's overall a good story

Amazing book

This book is amazing to say the least. It stays to the basic story of the DLC but it has its own changes and it is probably my favorite Fan Fic book. I love the ending and I think the hero is fantastic. I would love to see more written by this author and I will definitely read it.

A great but sadly probably a forgotten story.

I loved these 4 chapters and waited the longest time for chapter 5 but it never came. The plot is very interesting and intriguing. I love the over concept and I wish to see more of both of these characters but sadly I do NOT think that will happen. I love how we see both perspectives both man and Orc on the war. I do not think chapter 5 will come but anything is possible.