Crystal W

Great read!

I like fantasy, this book is captivating so far some errors nothing that takes from the story at all. I normally like POV stories. The Author had good skills in telling a story that can pull you in. Nice strong plot I found myself enjoying the read. I would recommend this book.

Potential

I gave you four stars because I would have liked more description of the characters. You have some errors try using a grammatical app. I think this will have great potential. We all have our writing style. I will finish the book, curious to see where this leads, and I will change my review once I see more chapters; there is only a few to go off of.

Enjoyed

The book was hot and steamy phew 😥 I noticed you said you will edited it so I am not going to critique the grammar and writing. You have a good dialogue going for you. When writing BDASM things can be tricky and you got it. I have a great understanding of BDSM. I enjoyed it.

Very good

I think you did very well with your writing style, my son enjoyed reading the book with me, I normally would pass a book up like this only because it is more for the younger generation. This held my interest. You’re timing was punctual. I don't have any criticism to say about this book. Well done, I recommend this for your children or the younger generation.

Intrigued

I like this book a lot; it held my attention. I usually get bored of stories quickly. You can write beautifully and capture your characters and their emotions. I love how you have them interact with each other, for that is essential in a story. The dialogue is excellent, the story plot was good so far. I definitely recommend this story.

Bored

You have excellent writing techniques. I was bored with the whole story. The characters were boring. There wasn't enough interaction between the characters—just my personal opinion.

Think this book has potential to be so much better. From what I have seen from your other books.

Needs work.

Has potential.

Great read

The grammar is not bad you can look past it this is a app I don’t think lot of us authors have a editing team on stand by. I really enjoyed Book 1 and I am enjoying book 2. I think the dialogue is strong, I think Kat is very descriptive in this this book and adds details well and clear with her writings s characters. Takes a lot to get me into a book, I am really enjoying this part two.

Has potential

You have a good great idea the plot could be stronger we are only into 4 chapters you did pull me in and I would like to know a little more about Xander and Jamie. There could be so much detail added into the chapters. Slowly add there background leaving suspense. I can’t wait to see you do wonderful things with this book I will be following and reading more.

Amazing

There are some grammar errors, nothing I can’t get past. I love how you pull readers into this plot is solid and captivating. I want to read more. The chemistry is off the charts. You are very descriptive in your writing. I cannot wait to see what this author does with his book. I want to read more I am intrigued. I can get bored fast with a book. I can’t wait for more updates. I can’t wait to see where this goes. Well done so far. 

Amazing

Great plot. There are some grammar issues that I can’t get past. I was pulled in immediately. There has only been a few books that I found on here that keep me interested. Keep up the great work.

Potential suitor

I love the plot of the book, how this book is light hearted, some comedy added in. The dialogue is done well. There was some grammar issues and little confusion with the characters when they interact with one another nothing that can’t be fixed. I am interested to read more. You hold my interest and I don’t find that often I get bored easily.

Spit fire 🔥

This is not really my type of book to read. I am amazed at how well you have written the characters and gave great detail and strong dialogue. I seen a few errors nothing that will throw readers off. I am curious how the book will end. Good luck on this amazing book. You have me intrigued.

Great job 👏

I am changing my review as this book is written a lot better you have a great dialogue that is done well. The chapters are more clearer and written really well. Still a few grammar issues but not a big deal.

Great!

There were some grammar issues, nothing that can’t be fixed. I do like the characters as they are not like a robot in some books. I enjoy the mother-son duo, as I am a mother myself.
I am looking forward to reading more of this book. The dialogue is vital. Once a book is finished, I will change the review.

I really Enjoy it.

I honestly don’t really have anything negative to say as I really enjoyed the book so far I did get confused with characters at first but when I read again I got where you were going with it. I love how it’s takes place in the 90’s I can relate with April’s character. I did had a few giggles. I normally like to review a finished book. This was I needed a lead heated Romance-comedy. Like how this different from others’ I have read. Think once the story moved along I will enjoy more of the characters.

Great story

I enjoy this story, unique from others, and I am looking forward for more chapters. I like the plot. The dialogue is done well. Few errors but don’t affect the story. I like how you wrote Samuel, Clara as well. I can’t wait for more!

Potential

I felt the story was rushed. The dialogue was okay, not as strong as I would have liked to see for this kind of book. I like the idea of letting readers use their imagination. Some books I like that and some I enjoy a muse and description. With this kind of book, I would have liked to see more details of how she became a little, how he became a ‘Daddy’ these books can be tricky to write. I understand they have a way to talk as she is a little. He is a ‘Daddy’ He doesn’t seem very strong as a ‘Daddy’ would be with a little. You have a great idea of the story and plot. The grammar and punctuation can be fixed quickly. Little more details and a clearer outlook of her life would help you out a lot. Hard to review without the book being finished. I always change the review once you finish the book. I am not rude; I want you to succeed. These stories are a big hit on these apps. When a character speaks, please start a new line; otherwise makes them jumbled up.

Potential

The grammar and punctuation need work as I understand English is not your first language. I recommend using a grammatical app, use a beta reader from the group section of this app. The plot was right, and I would make paragraphs 5-8 no longer. I enjoy the characters. Somethings are really jumbled up, get confusing please don't take me as being ruse this book has fantastic potential, I want you to succeed 😀

Great story

think the onshore story was done very well. Do you plan to make this into something more? I think it would be amazing if you did to give insight of what happen to his family, life with his family. I could go with emotion like he was insane talking to ghost of his past. You really hit the emotion part very well. Dialogue was done well. Definitely gave me the chills and was creepy in a good way. Good job

Very well done

You have a great dialogue; the writing is on point. I, however, have a hard time getting into this kind of story, but your way of writing is captivating. The first chapter pulled me in.

You're paragraphs were placed right. I think you did great overall.

Loved this story.

The writing is beautiful; I am going to add this to my reading list. I love how I can feel the emotions in this book. The dialogue is done well. The characters sound like humans—just overall amazing.

Nicely done

I usually am not into these stories, but I took the time to read them. I must nice, and it is a charming work. It was written well. Keep me intrigued, wanting to read more. Not a lot of stories in here can hold my interest, but your dose. There were some errors but nothing that wrecks the book. Very good I hope they're more chapters to come!

Beautiful

This story is beautiful so far. I added the book; the dialogue was excellent; the interaction with the characters was very well done. I want to read more of your book. I usually can't hold interest in books. I am very interested in this book.

Loved it

I really like this horror book. This was a great fanfic from what I have read, I usually don’t read fanfic books. I am fan of the 70’s, 80’s early 90’s. Horror flicks. I am intrigued plan to finish the book.

Love it

I liked this book. I am not into fantasies. This pulled me in. The Interaction, the dialogue was beautifully done. I am becoming invested in your story; that is hard; I become bored with these stories. I recommend this book to everyone. What I would like to say is you should change somethings like leaving some mysterious. Only one thing I have to say about this beautiful book.