Cyntrina

Has a certain something

So this one had me thinking it was a psycho kind off a thing, but turned out differently. The surprise part is a fresh take on a classic, but the confusion and speed of events has me torn and bewildered. In general I liked the distorted reality of Nevil and his mother, just as much as i enjoyed the reveal of the actual.reality

Just beautiful

Oh my God, I loved it all! Just the concept of slowly fading away, tiny bit by bit seems so horrifying. You've touched deep into every humans fear of being left alone, behind. The part where you took away her eyes seems most morbid of all, but then again without her eyes she could cling to the picture of self she had before.. Perfectly captivating the numbness of the soul, that slowly turns into a serious doubt of existence.

Promising title

Perhaps the one thing that attracted me to the story was the title. Has a certain mischievous spark that made me want for more. But my issue is that the story seems a bit rushed and confusing. Blunt descriptions, lack of punctuation and the sudden shifts in reality are what made me pull away from it. Love the concept though, it is rather different and refreshing.