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Well written

Since romance isn't really my genre, I don't know what to compare this to. However, despite that, I thought this was really well written. The style kept me engaged throughout. There was solid world-building and character development. There were times where the dialogue felt a bit exaggerated, but it was still good. Overall, I would recommend this to anyone wanting a good fantasy romance novel.

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Intriguing Start

I enjoyed this first chapter. It has good character development and it flows really well. My only suggestion would be to have some source of conflict in the chapter or, at the very least, very close to the start of chapter 2. Right now, I don't have a sense of urgency to make me read on other than wanting to learn more about the characters. Really great start!

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Loved it

I really enjoyed this read. Though I have not read any other Star Wars story, I love the movie franchise. I thought this story was a great and unique take on the franchise. The plot and author's writing style kept me engaged all the way through.

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Worthy Read

What stands out most is the plot. The other took a unique concept and made it very interesting and enjoyable. My attention was grabbed every step of the way. I only wish the hook was a bit stronger. Well done.

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Draft

To start with, I was really intrigued by the premise of the story. I think it has a ton of potential. Also, since it's a draft, it's totally understandable that there would be grammatical errors. However, I feel the story jumped too quickly into action without an appropriate amount of world-building or character development. Fix that and I think it could be really great. Keep going!

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