Stories Featuring Demons

“Start where the story starts”

Reviewed by

Deleted User

Whether you are looking for an agent, publisher or reader your first line is the most important. A good first line needs to hook the reader. It is also a good idea for your opening line to be the start of your story. Or to put it another way, start where the trouble (your story) starts I almost… Read More

“My review of dark shadows' rise”

Reviewed by

Ben Gauger

Kudos go to KyKellen, author of Dark Shadows, for her otherwise imaginative portrayal of the battle between good and evil, which is more than can be said for anything I'd ever conceived of writing myself, though personally the depiction of the battle in and of itself was a bit much for me, but… Read More

“Breathtaking and immersive!!”

Reviewed by

IAmEm_

Though the story is not complete yet, I felt the need to review what I've read so far in order to support the author and express just how much I love this story. Radiant is amazing, and absolutely deserves to be a published novel. I will break this review into categories, explaining my thoughts on… Read More

“A beautifully-written story”

Reviewed by

Calvin Drumland

Wow, I was impressed. This novelist writes for a YA audience but ends up entertaining everyone. I like books about the supernatural that slowly build up suspense, and this was better than Steven King. I don't want to give away the plot, read it for yourself! :)

“Bridgetown survival guide”

Reviewed by

Howard Ryan Dixon

Interesting story line and well written plot. Written in a rather harsh yet unforgiving world, this story is still portrayed in a light manner with all the premise for a sequel, where morals tend not to exist and people can be whoever the hell they want. Think it's good but not too certain that… Read More

“Very impressed!”

Reviewed by

steve89

I'm not sure whether the person who reviewed this story with 1 star in each category read the same story that I did, because I found Rot to be gripping and at times chilling, perfect for a horror short story. There are plenty of possession stories out there in the genre, but this is the first time… Read More

“Sacrificed”

Reviewed by

FarahJ

Love the story. Please continue.