Stories Featuring Kidnapping

“Bemused”

Reviewed by

OrphanBlack

That was a fairly good story. I loved the prose but hated the technical skills. That was one thing you were lacking in. In some areas, you were completely devoid of the English language rules. I was a bit confused in some parts. I still really liked the story. You also wrote a very intriguing… Read More

“My review of lady of the sea”

Reviewed by

Ben Gauger

Kudos go to Melinde Mari-Venter author of Lady of the Sea, one of perhaps the most imaginative pieces of writing I've ever read, ever. Overall, it was a true masterpiece, and although the punctuation itself was top-notch the grammar in and of itself would need a little work, oh and then of course… Read More

“Addictive”

Reviewed by

Ady203she204

Finished reading the fourth chapter. Definitely leaves me being hooked on for more! So addictive, and I love good reads such as this one! Love it!! It just attracts the reader for reading more! I will be waiting till the next chapter!

“Totally gripping”

Reviewed by

Belle Dowson

I stumbled on this story by accident and I am glad I did! The writer gets you hooked from the first word to the last, I am totally hooked by her use of emotional language and a distinctive way she gets you to love and understand the characters..