Stories Featuring Magic

“"charlatan series""”

Reviewed by

William Elliott Kern

SarahJayne13" You have written a fine love story, modestly constructied Between a Doctor who had lost his love, HANA, moved from the area to start his own clinic and take care of patience properly and his way. A twelve year old Girl knocks on his clinic door, looking for work, and highly… Read More

“Blade of erogrund review”

Reviewed by

Cheyenne

Amazing story! I greatly enjoyed reading it, watching the characters grow as they face the challenges living in a world that's full of dangers and facing numerous do-or-die scenarios. In the beginning, it was hard for me to understand what was going on, not being used to much archaic writing style… Read More

“Love!”

Reviewed by

Silver

Between Gates has really caught my attention. I am in chapter 11 so far but I had to write a review. The writing style is very smooth, the characters hold my attention, and some of the twists caught me off guard! I can't wait to continue reading this and find out what happens in the end. The more… Read More

“Nice story so far”

Reviewed by

Khryce

Hi Jake, I took a look at your story and I am very impressed at your story so far! This first chapter holds so much promise to the rest of your story and I am very excited to read the rest! I'll give you this, you already introduced very interesting ideas. Your first chapter is unusually… Read More

“Arcane chronicles: book of fire”

Reviewed by

Yea

I'm enjoying this. I like how the writer plunges us immediately into the story. The punctuation needs slight corrections in places but that's easily remedied and subtracts nothing from the story. Good writing.

“Radiant ”

Reviewed by

rafma2023

Cant wait till i get to read more its truely a wonderful story.could hardly put it down in fact. Honestly il check daily for updates on this one. Apparently i have to have 150