Stories About College

“Omg”

Reviewed by

Shalyse Wright-Bethea

Thank god I found you. Last night I caught up on the other site and saw that people were having trouble finding you.I was so sad at the thought of not finishing the story. I look forward to more. ~ Zephyrrine

“Amazing!!!”

Reviewed by

Leonardo-space-child

Everyone who has not read Piper's story must, this story is just wonderful, glorious, and original. If you follow her on Deviantart DA, her characters are just so cool and inspirational and very colorful, and her mainulip skills are just off the top. enough about the art, back to the story. She… Read More

“Only formatting issues”

Reviewed by

LenaPresents

The extra spacing between paragraphs in the first chapter should be fixed. Italicising thoughts or interenal dialogue is best, Paragraphs containing dialogue can be long when actions of the speaker break up their dialogue. But if it ends in narration and then the next person speaks, it's best to… Read More

“Whoa man! you gave me shivers”

Reviewed by

Dimitris Morakeas

My history with university's essays is still in the make-out phase, 3ed year, 1 to go, and the essays fall more often than rain on my head, and fuck, yes, the anxiety of them increases with each, and the more work you put in each the more you want toy here some comments about it, and NO-ONE, not… Read More