Stories Located on Another Planet

“This is such a sad story. :(”

Reviewed by

Laraine Smith

My only suggestion is to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. The diary. entry reminded me of a song that James Barbour sang in "Dracula, The Musical" called "The Longer I Live." Donna reminded me of the Sargent Hulka from the movie "Stripes!" The part where the man went through the exercises reminded… Read More

“Great voice!”

Reviewed by

FreydisMM

I really, really liked the first line! It really threw you into the story, which was amazing. However, I was a bit put off by the next few lines. I was confused about what was going on, and add to that the unknown names and characters that were introduced. I found myself needing to reread some… Read More