Stories Located in the Mountains

“Nightmares...”

Reviewed by

Lee Schenck

Excellent story overall! Noah is just descriptive enough in his storytelling to enable the reader to visualize the characters, setting, and action without getting too lost in the details. I am a fan of fantasy and anime, so I found this story to be quite enjoyable. The reason that I mention… Read More

“Taken by surprise”

Reviewed by

Jenifer Harley

I was gripped right away and could feel and see the landscape described by this author. Got so engrossed didn't see the surprise ending coming, although the clues were there. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

“1st chapter review”

Reviewed by

Deleted User

Great first paragraph. Very gripping. I want to know more about the assignment. If he is thinking to himself, there should not be quotations marks. Those are only for things that are actually being said outlaid. I’d like to know more about the imagery of the garden as the conversation goes on… Read More

“I can see it.”

Reviewed by

SandwichSean

Despite bits of awkward structure, I can see the scene. I've can imagine Milton, and I can imagine the taste of the ice cream. I can also feel the pain and relief from the ending.