Stories Located in the Mountains

“Taken by surprise”

Reviewed by

Jenifer Harley

I was gripped right away and could feel and see the landscape described by this author. Got so engrossed didn't see the surprise ending coming, although the clues were there. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

“Creepy as hell (in a good way)!”

Reviewed by

jonwrivera

WELL DONE! I was reading this at work, squirming at my desk towards the end. The plot and pacing were just right and your descriptions were perfect. I could picture it all in my head, as if I were watching it on TV. A few technical things here and there. The combination of dialect spelling… Read More

“Allsaints4”

Reviewed by

georgewong2

Only on the third chapter but thought I'd share my impression so far. The writing is smooth and infectious. It teases you into a world with uncommon ease and slickness. Dialogue is fun and punchy and the narrative rich and fully formed. Loving it so far...Good Job sir.

“I can see it.”

Reviewed by

SandwichSean

Despite bits of awkward structure, I can see the scene. I've can imagine Milton, and I can imagine the taste of the ice cream. I can also feel the pain and relief from the ending.

“The mischievous ”

Reviewed by

Jaeren

I like that this story has fantasy

“Nightmares...”

Reviewed by

Lee Schenck

Excellent story overall! Noah is just descriptive enough in his storytelling to enable the reader to visualize the characters, setting, and action without getting too lost in the details. I am a fan of fantasy and anime, so I found this story to be quite enjoyable. The reason that I mention… Read More

“Beautiful story”

Reviewed by

Royal

The plot kept me turning the pages and speeding through the book. It was really beautiful storytelling.

“Awesome!”

Reviewed by

MirelleFk

Hard to put down once you start reading... captivating plot as were the character.