Stories Located in the Mountains

“I can see it.”

Reviewed by

SandwichSean

Despite bits of awkward structure, I can see the scene. I've can imagine Milton, and I can imagine the taste of the ice cream. I can also feel the pain and relief from the ending.

“My tiny review ”

Reviewed by

Aishat Adisa

Nice style of writing,it made me cry, smile and I felt all other emotions. The poems were awesome,they had a way of carrying one along. The description made me felt like I had been to jos before🙈. I loved furairah's wittiness,na'imah's courage. It simply told us that every character in our lives… Read More

“Creepy as hell (in a good way)!”

Reviewed by

jonwrivera

WELL DONE! I was reading this at work, squirming at my desk towards the end. The plot and pacing were just right and your descriptions were perfect. I could picture it all in my head, as if I were watching it on TV. A few technical things here and there. The combination of dialect spelling… Read More

“Allsaints4”

Reviewed by

georgewong2

Only on the third chapter but thought I'd share my impression so far. The writing is smooth and infectious. It teases you into a world with uncommon ease and slickness. Dialogue is fun and punchy and the narrative rich and fully formed. Loving it so far...Good Job sir.

“Enjoyed it”

Reviewed by

Rouba Shishakly

So much creativity is present in the plot ideas. The writing style is very engaging and keeps me interested!

“Another war”

Reviewed by

readingreading

As I read this story it seemed to appear in my imagination like watching a movie. The characters are so complete and the situations so well told it's like being there with them. I learned a lot about history but in an interesting way. Needs a good edit.

“Taken by surprise”

Reviewed by

Jenifer Harley

I was gripped right away and could feel and see the landscape described by this author. Got so engrossed didn't see the surprise ending coming, although the clues were there. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.