Stories Located in the Mountains

“Allsaints4”

Reviewed by

georgewong2

Only on the third chapter but thought I'd share my impression so far. The writing is smooth and infectious. It teases you into a world with uncommon ease and slickness. Dialogue is fun and punchy and the narrative rich and fully formed. Loving it so far...Good Job sir.

“I can see it.”

Reviewed by

SandwichSean

Despite bits of awkward structure, I can see the scene. I've can imagine Milton, and I can imagine the taste of the ice cream. I can also feel the pain and relief from the ending.

“Awesome!”

Reviewed by

MirelleFk

Hard to put down once you start reading... captivating plot as were the character.

“Nightmares...”

Reviewed by

Lee Schenck

Excellent story overall! Noah is just descriptive enough in his storytelling to enable the reader to visualize the characters, setting, and action without getting too lost in the details. I am a fan of fantasy and anime, so I found this story to be quite enjoyable. The reason that I mention… Read More