Stories for Over 18s

“Poetic”

Reviewed by

A.J.

Beautiful, abstract, poetic. 💙🌹

“Apocalypse ”

Reviewed by

Eileen M Kendall

Very well written. Some spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but that's normal if this is a work in progress still. I can actually picture myself in the story with the main character, that is a high compliment when coming from me Keep up the good work.

“Catching lightning in a bottle”

Reviewed by

Luke Peace

Just like your previous story, it is well written and engaging. What sets it apart is its darker, less friendly depiction of South Africa than was Some Picnic! This can be thought of as the yang to the others yang— quite different, but just as good.

“Very interesting ”

Reviewed by

Me To

I liked it! It was very interesting as well as suspenseful. Great plot, great ending.