Detective Stories

“Serious people”

Reviewed by

James Bundi Bundeh

The ending was lame the writer should have given it more time than he did But the story was beautiful.I had a feeling robert never died...just saying I loved how characters were expendable gave the story more suspense The emphasis put by the writer on character is a bonus

“100% would read again!! ”

Reviewed by

CinnamonDaddy

I first read this story on FanFiction after it was recomended by a friend and it was on of the first online books that I’d read! And since then all Ive done is re-read it over and over! Although I must say that pretty much every other writer out there in the world of FanFiction has a looooot to… Read More

“Nour elfaramawy”

Reviewed by

Nour Elfaramawy

I love every aspect of this story. The slow tension buildup keeps me on the edge every single time, wanting an update the next second. I'm in love with the characters and the way you shift from one POV to the other is effortless. Keep up the amazing work, and if there is anything I can do to help,… Read More

“A great read”

Reviewed by

Geraldine Moorkens Byrne

TBH I thought I knew where this story would go - but it was so well written and nicely paced that I didn't mind too much. Instead it pulls a neat twist and while the ending is satisfying it's not predictable. The characters are believable, and likable, with enough depth to keep you guessing and… Read More

“Very unique”

Reviewed by

Carole Villemaire

I am glad you wrote back to my old review as I had forgotten all about this story. I am happy I was able to come back and finish it. The ending felt just the tiniest bit rushed after describing everything else so thoroughly. I definitely give it a 97 outta 100 ...One little thing that irks me was… Read More

“The golden hotel”

Reviewed by

ihateunicorns

I really love the twists and the events(games) happening in this story. Really really thrilling for me. Would highly recommend!!! 10/10

“Great thriller”

Reviewed by

Ryne

I'm absolutely in love with this story. I like how everything builds up and isn't just thrust at us at the very beginning. I also adore the relationship between Ian and Steve but cant help hoping it evolves into something deeper. They seem like good friends but i think Steve might like Ian more… Read More