Detective Stories

“Serious people”

Reviewed by

James Bundi Bundeh

The ending was lame the writer should have given it more time than he did But the story was beautiful.I had a feeling robert never died...just saying I loved how characters were expendable gave the story more suspense The emphasis put by the writer on character is a bonus

“Love, always & forever”

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Keefe R.D

Writing the Royal Arcanum series is like a saudade feeling, feels like being surrounded by the loved ones. The writing process gives me a lot of life lessons, especially about the things that I didn't know that I would find... Eventually, we're all connected by passion, fate, and life patterns. … Read More

“A very good read!”

Reviewed by

matrixmark

I loved the blurb which you used to hook the reader into your work. Being a big fan of all things serial killer and ones in particular who are on the loose is always going to grab my attention. You gave away just enough detail of the killer to keep hold my interest, with doing this technique you… Read More

“Thanx”

Reviewed by

zepe

Thank you for writing a decent, exciting story! I am especially thankful that it didn't sound as though it was written by a ten year old. Next time you may want to sonsult a native Spanish speaker. :-) Zepe

“Smart, funny and frightening”

Reviewed by

Rique Franks

This book reads like an intelligent Stephen King serial I want to know what happens next! The characters are all well formed and interesting. There are moments of hilarity that offset the tense suspense that makes you want to keep on reading. There is a lot that happens, but more that I want… Read More

“Fantastic! must read!”

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FateFellShort

I have read this story and have followed the writers on tumblr from the beginning. Its a wonderful story. Beautifully written with a really nice pace, that makes it enjoyable to read more than once. For me, fairy tail has very good characters but what the writers have done is give them more depth.… Read More

“Cmw”

Reviewed by

christineweigel825

So far I have enjoyed everything about it. I especially liked Elmer's friend harry; I like the way that he's always teasing him about Val and his relationship.

“Liked it very much”

Reviewed by

Nathan90

This story starts off as a description of an ordinary day, but soon becomes very thrilling and dynamic. You have really nice narratives and I like how you portray your characters. Rather than introducing them yourself, you let them introduce themselves through their words and actions. Through… Read More

“Blood thrust ”

Reviewed by

Linda Cameron

Every since I started to read this it just pulled me in. It's amazing all of the twists, can't wait to finish it.