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Intrigued and Different

I absolutely love the description of the setting of location.
I feel some parts of the writing there's some stuff missing for more flow. However I love the introduction of character and the straight forward conflict along with mystery a nice read.

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Really Nice Read

I liked the description of how the characters had known this man throughout all their life.
the grammer was good. a very nice read

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Relaxing and Good Plot

First time reading Fan Fiction which was exciting because I have never read anything like this before. I have heard of Fan Fiction and this has opened my eyes.

I really enjoyed how an easy and relaxed read it was, I didn't have to be in too much limbo at all, the story was straightforward on who was who and what was going on.

I liked the theme of a fast pace of conflict and introduction to characters.

Enjoyed it

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