Damikun

Keeps me hooked.

The was the plot plays out slowly its smooth even with some slight grammar errors. The descriptions and emotions of the characters glide like ice. It gives you that realism and makes you feel empathetic towards the characters. It's something different and cliche breaking which is always a plus. You never want to read the same stories with the same cliche and themes over and over again. This book breaks that chain. The way you write makes me sit back and reevaluate my writing abilities I'm taking mental notes as I'm reading along. I can indeed see myself going on a binge on my free time.

Something refreshing.

While the summary may have thrown me off a tad bit the chapter itself gave me clarification. Usually a summary is short and simple but you've manage to twist that into a way of opening your story. It's unique to address one's culture into a story and you did it perfectly even addressing the terms so the reader wouldn't be lost. I must say you have a way with writing and I'm looking for more.