Dancingdog

Hiya! I'm a vet student from England and I thought I'd try my hand at writing! I love fantasy and sci-fi and all things angel and demon. Hope you enjoy my writing!

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Lots of originality

Fun characters and orignial plot idea! Things really start moving in chapter 4 and chapter 5 introduces some interesting drama regarding one character. A few techincal errors in the first couple of chapters (grammar, punctuation etc.) and a couple of formatting issues (that may be due to the website/app input process), but the writing greatly improves as the chapters go on. Definitely worth a read if you're into mysteries and fantasy! It's wonderful to see how this story improves with every paragraph! Impatiently waiting for more!

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