Quite frankly, it's been a long time since I had such a enjoyable read! Fair warning! Once started, there is no stopping. The story is quite captivating. I became totally engrossed within the first two chapters. The characters are well thought out, quite convincing. My only complaint is the same one I have with any engaging short story, it screams out for more detail. Fleshed out and expanded with background detail it could easily become a novella. I'm not going to mention much about the story itself, because I've always hated "spoiler" reviews that give the story line away. I'm asking that you take my word that it is a excellent read, and well worth your time! Congrats! Hope you win! As far as I'm concerned you hit a home run on this one!
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