Maria

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Don't just dream, create memories. I am 16 years old, and very new to writing. I love writing Romance and Fantasy books.

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An Exceptionally Crafted Thriller Romance Piece

It's great! It's pretty fast. And the chemistry between the leads, Angel and Theo is also intense. But it also gives a sense of danger. It is really good in giving the fearsome and dangerous vibes. It's a gripping tale with those little half spoilers popping up. I really like that writing style. The way you show the readers a little light and shut them up in the cupboard again compelling them to try to come out, themselves. Though, the first chapter's grammar and stuff can confuse, but I do recommend to not stop. It gets better. As you move forward, the chemistry gets intense and dangerous, and the story becomes more dark.

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Compelling

This is like a real novel, the hard ones I used read before the pandemic. The writing style is smooth. The grammar is great.
And honestly, I have never read anything related to this genre. This was my first. And I loved it😍😍. I couldn't stop flipping the pages. It's a great book. I think you should consider publishing this.
With love,
Maria.

P.S. Are you an actual, professional writer?

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Great start😊

Great story, actually, great start.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘Relatable situations. It's good how you have hooked the readers to flip for more. We don't know what's gonna happen next, that's in every other story, but actually being able to hook the readers is difficult and you've done it!😊😊😊😊
And, well it's just the grammar that can go here and there. With that I mean, that set a tense for the story and follow it. The only problem is you keep switching between present tense to past tense.
But, leaving that the surprise actually has a lot of potential.😊😊😊😊I am going to follow this story. Keep updating chapters.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Plot😍

Well, negatives first. The grammar is bad. You really need to work on it. And that's like the only negative that's destroying your story. The grammar, makes the writing style confusing, and the plot gets confusing, too. Try extending the story, too.
But as far as positives are concerned, the plot is good. Develop it and it will be really good.
Anyways, good luck. Keep writing, that will help in the grammar.
With love,
Maria

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LOVELY 😍

Negatives first, Grammar a little shake and few things can get a little confusing, but that's alright. It was a great story, filled my stomach with butterflies at times and my brain with anger at moments. But, as this was my first fan fiction ever, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Jimin is my Bias and I already love him. This book made me fall for him more.
I really hope this was real. Even the last part, because after saving Jimin I could even get to meet Jungkook. Ha!
Well, I hope this continues and you don't leave us here. Rest, thanks a lot for writing this story.
With love,
Maria

P.S. You nice! Keep writing!πŸ˜‰

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A magical journey

I haven't completed the book, but it got me so hooked, I just got scolded by my parents, for not attending my class properly. But still I thought, I will go after writing the review. I simply love it.
The way every character has its own unfolding, and significance.
The story is magical, pun intended. It's a great ride of emotions. And, I love YAs, so I would just recommend this book to anyone who loves a good YA Romance fantasyπŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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A magical journey

I haven't completed the book, but it got me so hooked, I just got scolded by my parents, for not attending my class properly. But still I thought, I will go after writing the review. I simply love it.
The way every character has its own unfolding, and significance.
The story is magical, pun intended. It's a great ride of emotions. And, I love YAs, so I would just recommend this book to anyone who loves a good YA Romance fantasyπŸ₯°πŸ₯°

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Breezy

The plot can be called repetitive, BUT, I am the BIGGEST fan of death related stories. I really liked this. The grammar has few mistakes, but I think that's absolutely OK. The plot is good. I liked the writing style. It's a good book if you liked the fault in our stars or five feet apart.

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Luna and the Alpha

Everything in this novel is great. I like the set up of juxtaposition. It looks interesting. The grammar, writing style and the plot, everything is spot on. Only one thing is I don't read erotica, and I didn't know this was one. But still that didn't stop me. I skipped that part and read forward, and found it really interesting.

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Heart wrenching

It's a really good story. And being a person who was also bullied in school I could relate. It's really sad, about what happened with her. It's racy, and thrilling. And incredibly sad. Just a few problems with the grammar, but that improves with practice

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Short and Sweet

This book is amazing for fans of Harry Potter, more importantly, Luna Lovegood. I am a big fan. So I love her. The grammar and writing style also doesn't have any problem. It is a short story, which is very entertaining. You love Luna Lovegood, and her personality you will love this. Just a piece of advice. Add chapters of them playing muggle games. And it will be more fun. Extend the book more. I know you will do it the best. :)

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Great YA

Above anything, this book is a source of nostalgia for me. Considering this situation, and all. Leaving that it's a great high school romance book, considering the amount of awkwardness. The writing style is good but, in the 3rd or 4th chapter you had added your own opinion as the narrator. That's good but I suggest you stay a little consistent. Because after that you never included yourself in the story. So I think you should choose if you want to be a part of the story or not. The grammar can be improved but that's OK. Lastly, it is great because it is pretty relatable. So I recommend you to read this book if you are missing school, or want to relive your memories.
P.S. Just my brutal honesty, not me, my brutal honesty wants to say that the book cover and title is great but till now I haven't, I mean my brutal honesty hasn't found a relation between them.

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Pacy and rather, Dark

The set up is really dark, I have to say. But that's one of the special things of the book. The way the love story of Butterfly and Caspian is described, it actually gives those "something bad is about to happen" vibes. And unlike the other thriller novels I have seen, this one is also pretty fast and doesn't bore the person reading it. Though the writing style can confuse you but, isn't that the very point of a suspense novel. To twist the already twisted neurons in your brains. The grammar can still be improved (Brutal honesty, no offense), but that's always there for everyone. I would recommend you not to read this at night, before you go to bed, because it can keep you up all night, for the reading and the vibes.

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