Danny.Nat

Lviv

Hello dear readers, This is my small imaginary world and I gladly share it with you! If you are also a chatty one, I am always available on any social media I left here. Enjoy!

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Good read!

It has some grammar errors but I like it so far. Hope it gets better along the read

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Interesting story

The plot intrigues from the very start. I like the fact that the author makes a lot of gaps in chapters making it easier to read.

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Great!

The details in this book fascinated me! The descriptions and the dialogues are interesting to read!

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Looking forward for the updates!

it's a great start you've got here. Keep up!

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Great story!

Some grammar errors but the plot is sinple but interesting. Less drama more erotica. Kuddos!

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Mixed feeling about this one

Fighting all first book for her freedom and giving up so simply in the second one confuses me. It doesn't make any sense. I was disappointed reading how Xavier had his way all along again. There could be so many new ways to turn the events more interesting.
Every new chapter I read I hoped for some intriguing ending of it. But nothing came.
It felt like the author didn't know how to proceed with the plot. It is understandable that this was just her second book for all times but why such a rush?

The writing style is quite good if it weren't for the mistakes.

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Great story!

It's a pity it updates so slow (((

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Light story, just as needed

Very easy reading book. Not so much drama but definitely worth reading

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Great story!

It was so damn hard to start to read it. I tried 3 times. Somehow it was hard to understand anything. But after a couple chapters... OMG. This is so beautiful. I hate myself for not knowing all the words that can express my emotions like Professor would. But I couldn't just finish it without a comment. Great work. The personalities, the conflict. I loved every word!

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Great story!

One litle thing thouh. If you write russian surnames, they are a bit different) you say Petrov when you speak to all male or a whole family. Adding "a" in the end like Pertova can only reffer to female. For example Natalya Petrova but Roman Petrov. This rule reffers to mostly all second names in Russia.

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The story is really good. But the grammar... Come on!

Adults only. Nice story. Makes me miss my job and read it all up to the end.

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Good story, not so good ending

Honestly, it was somwtimes too hard to read but the plot kept holding me. I think that the last reunion chapter was not worth it. It was easier to imagine their future or even reunion on my own head. Maybe it is just me but I think it wasn't right to come over with babies and husbands and do stuff like that. It creates a lot of holes in the plot. But overall I likes it. Nice work.

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Not bad

The plot was good but sometimes it moved too quickly. Grammar could be really better though

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