Danny.Nat

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Great story!

It was so damn hard to start to read it. I tried 3 times. Somehow it was hard to understand anything. But after a couple chapters... OMG. This is so beautiful. I hate myself for not knowing all the words that can express my emotions like Professor would. But I couldn't just finish it without a comment. Great work. The personalities, the conflict. I loved every word!

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Great story!

One litle thing thouh. If you write russian surnames, they are a bit different) you say Petrov when you speak to all male or a whole family. Adding "a" in the end like Pertova can only reffer to female. For example Natalya Petrova but Roman Petrov. This rule reffers to mostly all second names in Russia.

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The story is really good. But the grammar... Come on!

Adults only. Nice story. Makes me miss my job and read it all up to the end.

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