NiniSmith21

Las Vegas

I aspire to be a published and best selling author. I run track as a sprinter and I read ALL the time. My favorite color is purple. Enjoy my booksπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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Good

I loved how original it is but it was the punctuation and grammar that had me like uhhhhh.. Capilization and commas can make the biggest difference. Love your ideaπŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’š

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SOOO GOOD!

I LOVED it. It was well written and thought out. I fell in live with the relationship between Lacey and Soren. I would recommend this to every one. I can't wait for the sequel.

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Super amazeballs

Such a cute and empowering book. I loved all three of them and I loved they're strength and courage. I also loved how the title Wes really incorporated into the book itself. Really great jobπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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It was really good. There were some moments where I wanted to stop rwadi because of my religious beliefs but I'm glad I didn't. Its such a good book. I love itπŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

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.......

Its was ok. There wasn't a lot of character development and it was confusing to read because of the grammatical errors and the plot seemed really rushed. It base good potential, just needs more editing

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Good but confusing

It was cute and interesting but the grammar was....crap. I apologize for being so blunt but the grammar needs a lot of work. I also feel that the plot was rushed and that the main character was extremely confused and confusing. It was really hard to connect to any of the characters and that's what I look for when I read a book.

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Amazing

So good. I loved it.

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It was amazing but there was the fact that the four "beasts" were consistent in calling Alyssa a whore and she too that shit, yeah she was annoyed by it but never confronted them about it and never told them how it felt when she was constantly called whore. I didn't like that. She's supposed to be a strong, leading female and yet she basically took being whore laying down.

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I can't even....

Sooo good. The way you developed Lysa's character is amazing. And i loved the chemistry and sexual tension between her and Vik. Keep up the amazing workπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜œπŸ’›πŸ’›

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SPEECHLESS

I can't even begin to describe how wonderful an DC heartfelt this book was/is!!! I love it!!!

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Amazing

Super good but at some moments it feels like the story a.k.a the plot, was rushed

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Strictly Baby Business

Pretty good but the punctuation and grammar needs some serious damage control

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Smh

The first one was waaay better and the sequel is honestly, very disappointing.

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My Muted Mate

Overall the book was kind of meh to me. There are various reasons, one of them in relevance to the plot. In my opinion the plot moved too quickly and seemed kind of rushed. It was also very confusing at times when it went 0 to 100 in the blink of an eye without anything leading up to it and no explanation afterwards. Another thing is that grammar and punctuation. There were so many spelling and grammatical errors that had a huge role in the confusion I had felt while reading this. The third reason is that the intro of the characters were boring because everything was explained in so much but barely there details. Nothing was left to be discovered throughout the rest of the book. This isn't intended to be hateful but as constructive criticism. I hope you take this as a way to improve your writing in the future.

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Locked

Extremely repetitive and confusing

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The Power In My Veins

I feel Adeline forgave Gabriel too quickly and that she should have drawn out his "punishment" way longer but overall good story

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The Kingdom of Archer Book 1: Bloom

OMG I love how you developed the characters especially Lyric and Parker. I love them so much and I loved reading this boon

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Manipulative Attraction

So fun to read

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Akin to Magic

This book was very good. It captured my interest immediately and the plot was well planned.

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The Alpha

I loved it and the story plot was amazing❀❀

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The Tattooed Bad Boy

It was a good read but some parts were just too confusing and the plot seemed kinda rushed in the beginning and the plot was kinda all over the place. It was still an amazing book, though.

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Slumber

Suspenseful. Needed some work with technical skills

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