David Estrada?

I write my books...

I write my books for a woman I once knew. the people who killed my uncle threatened to kill me if I dated or married any woman especially Yesenia Vega. I think we were friends since being babies but when I was 5 I told her I would marry her....but things are difficult when police don't investigate murders especially when my mom witnessed her brother (an undercover police officer) being killed and then we were followed home by the killers and then they bought houses in our neighborhood but the police don't investigate murders. And I know I'm a bit off topic but your story is very sweet. I wish you all the success and happiness in the world.

Pan Galactic Gargle-blaster

the first sentence is reminiscent of the description of the drink in hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy....love it
keep going

Thank you

I enjoyed the setting and detail…I thought of something…native Americans don’t have one language with dialects but fully formed languages that are not mutually intelligible but as the voice of the character is far in the past and this information isn’t necessary to tell the story nor would your audience know or care about linguistic details. I studied anthropology and although much of my work is part sci-fi it is also inspired by Mesoamerican culture…many people act like the Aztec culture has no connection to Ute culture but because their languages are in the same language family…the Uto-Aztecan language family. Indigenous American culture or interaction didn’t obey modern borders and the Aztec people are said to have left Aztlan in Blythe California head south to Tenochtitlan or Mexico City following a religious prophecy I wrote my books to use the publishing money to help my family and romance a woman I think of as my Palmela…I felt she deserved me to try to build a gilded cage for her and I to have children together. But that was the past…

Rainman and Rainbeau

I loved the Character name Rain...I knew the most beautiful woman in the world...other than either one of my mothers or sisters. She called me Rainman hoping I would go to Las Vegas or her family home. her family name is Vega. It never made sense why someone so beautiful as Yesenia would want me or love me...and so I never went and things turned sideways...I write all my books in the hopes my literature can create a beautiful life for her and me in the event she feels the same after 30 years.
Keep writing...I know your work will create a beautiful life for you and your loved ones.