Dawn_Lakewell

Hi everyone, I love both reading and writing fantasy stories. If you have a request, idea, or a question, feel free to message me.

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WOW!

Just wow! The MC is wonderful. She is serious at times, but also very witty, which makes the book an engaging read. The skill of the author and their world building makes the places they create feel absolutely real. Their descriptions are amazing and the plot is great, not to fast but not a slow lazy river either. Definite must read for any lover of magic, fantasy, and powerful females :)

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Up to Chapter IV

The author paints a beautiful and unique world with amazing plot twists and their descriptions are absolutely amazing! They make the reader feel like they are being sucked into the story. Although some other readers (at least one) have given this story a bad review I think that the author has improved the story since then as I have seen none of the errors mentioned by previous readers. Great job author :)

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Up to Chapter 2

It is an ok story but needs a lot of work :)

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The Pirate Queen

My goodness! This was the first book of yours that I have read and even though I had not read the previous books in the series you did an outstanding job of explaining everything. When Anna says you can read a book as a standalone she means it folks :) Simply stellar plot and character development, it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Keep up the remarkable work Anna!!!!!!!

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Up to Chapter Unexpected Rescue

Wow!!!! Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried! This story is an amazing mix of modern day and Greek mythology all mixed in a way that is unique to the author and leaves the reader wanting more after every chapter. The prologue was sheer genius and sets up the story very well, giving the reader a glimpse as to why the conflicts in the story are happening. The characters are well written and the dialogue is amazing. I read everything she has posted so far in one go! Great job Melody :)

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Great addition to the world of Eresthai!!!!

Very nice continuation of the theme from book one:) I think that I enjoyed this book the most out of them all so far (and having read all of your Eresthai books up to IV and absolutely loving every single one) it was NOT an easy choice.🤣 However Vivian's family (cough homicidal sister cough) issues, witty comebacks, amazing magic, and care for her loved ones makes this book more than just a page turner. In fact I would say that it is a true star!!!!!! Amazing job Suzanna🥳

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WOW!

Very intriguing and suspenseful read. If you are looking for plot turns ( and a big cliff hanger in the end) you will love Levis's Eresthai Series! :) I love how the characters build throughout the series and I simply cannot wait for the next book to come out. For an unedited first draft the spelling and grammar is very impressive! Great job and happy writing!

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Up to chapter 121

So far so good! Some of the chapters are a bit short for my taste but not so short that it disrupts the flow of the story. The grammar and punctuation in this story were also very well done. I love how the main characters develop throughout the story and I can't wait for the end and/or possible sequel! Overall great story can't wait to see what happens next :)

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AMAZING SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!

WOW! You really outdid yourself on this book! Absolutely amazing plot and development of the characters. You kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

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Up to chapter Calix

Very unique and original concepts to this story! It is like no other story that I have ever read before and I truly have enjoyed it so far :) I am definitely looking forward to continuing to read this story!! I don't give out full five star reviews very often but WOW, the punctuation and grammar as well as the amazing writing style have taken my breath away! Definitely a must read for lovers of fantasy =)

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AMAZING SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! Discovering Fae is an amazing book! After the first book in this series i thought that it was impossible for me to become any more obsessed with Fae and her world but man do you prove me wrong! The storyline, characters, and perhaps most of all the many twists and unexpected turns in this book make it a real must read! I could not put it down and read it all in one sitting:)

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Review up to and including chapter 9

So far the story seems pretty good. The general culture and concepts seem the same as those in The Third Red which I like. Being female, I obviously would like to have a female who was not in constant need of being saved in the story, but even so I have to say that it is quite engaging. The plot flows well with the other books in the series and it is quite an enjoyable read!

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Days with Dragons

I really am enjoying the story so far. I also like that you gave us a little peek into the time after the "Bloodfeather incident" with Eric and Katrina. The way you make it seem like we are reading a book inside of a book is quite unique and I can't wait to see how it progresses. I am hoping we get to learn the names of ALL of Rubara's hatchling soon as well! All in all it seems great so far!!!!

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Absolutely Fantastic!

I love this story! The plot twists and shocking reveals made this book a binge read for me. I could not put it down and it had me on the edge of my seat from start to finish. I am really looking forward to book two as well as any others the author chooses to write :) Great job Sam!!!!

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Amazing!!!!!!!!

I love Dolphins at Sunset! It is easily one of the best books that I have read. The flow is amazing and I love the character's and real life events. Great job!!!!!

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Great Start!!

I think that Her Broken Wolf has a lot of potential. I also really like the fact that there is a strong female who is not afraid to reject her mate. I am eager to see how the story progresses!!!!! (Update, the story has not updated for MONTHS!!!!!! I get needing to sort stuff out but still NOT cool!!!)

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Amazing Creativity!!!!

I love Finding Fae and I think that it is a great story with some amazing concepts. I especially liked the idea of the Trials during the Awakening and the Morfi concept. All in all it is a great book and I cant wait to read the sequel! :) Great job ALY!

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