M.Jones

LGBT Author of the Children of the Night's series. The first book is now available on Amazon. Book three, ‘The Night's End' is in progress of writing. Weekly updates on Mondays.

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One of my All-time favorites

This story had me hooked from the moment I found it. Having read thru it all in a single day I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the story. Your writing style was very well balanced and easy to understand, also how you portrayed each character as an individual--especially Lea; I loved how she knew exactly what she wanted and would not quietly take no, and yet understood her position as a human in an immortal world.
Not very often is it detailed how one is turned either as a vampire or a werewolf which is what drew me in further to your very unique and scientific explanation. As I reached the final chapter and realized that it was the end, I unintentionally shouted my disbelief for there not being more...and scared my dog awake.
I hope to see more work from you or a continuation of this novel!

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Good research

As someone who normally doesn't read UFO type books I enjoyed the writing style and how easy and relate-able it was to follow along. Its very easy to see that the author is very knowledge and did a lot of research for the settings and the subject itself to get an idea for the plot.

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Amazing!

Its rare i come across stories with women relationships and its rather realistic, but at the same time its as a fantasy in terms of a shinning knight and a princess type style. The only thing was I was having some issues at parts with keeping track of who was saying what and who was talking at times (it could just be my reading). At the end of chapter 8 i saw that was all and I literally went "AWWWWWWW" really loud because i wanted to read more!

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Adorable!

This novel was so cute! I want another one!

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Amazing story!

This book was not only well-written, but the story, characters and relatability made it all the more better. Seeing the characters struggle with their own demons and watching as each learned to rely on another really emphasizes what it means to be in a relationship.

It speaks of the damage a toxic family can really do, leading to other pains and problems that can go on for years. The novel shows that regardless of how dark things may get it is possible to find a light at the end of the tunnel with love and support.

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Great story! Must have more!

This is such an adorable story! I like how it feels like Paris is sort of talking right to the reader about what is going on rather than just a narration. It feels like the main character is treating the reader as a friend to chat with or message over texting

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well-developed

I enjoyed on how dark it was in certain parts because of the realistic idea of the social underworld I have. The details of scene description allowed for me to easily imagine the story as I read it and i liked the conflicts between the characters that not only made it realistic, but also allowed for me to make assumptions for what may happen in the long run, but still be surprised with the end result.

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awesome story

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