Firefly Fanfiction

“Very good episode”

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Alana Dill

This could have been a real episode. It was well written and you have a great understanding of the characters, their voices and motivations. I also liked your use of technical jargon, which helped ground the story. I got really confused about the egg crate, though. What's an egg crate exactly? I… Weiterlesen

“This is exceptional.”

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kuraireikan

I noticed only 3 typos throughout; two places where a word is missing and one missing comma (I shall leave you the joy of finding them, muwahahaha.) Not only is this story well written but the idea is original and intriguing, making use of both Mr. Tudyk's work and life as an actor. But I think… Weiterlesen

“Lovely autumn flower”

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owensdavis

Even though I am not familiar with the roots of this story, it drew me in with its flowing writing. It was descriptive without being flowery. And while I couldn't decipher Wash's affiliations, I"m intrigued and would love to read on. Nicely done, Alana!

“Free association”

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Alana Dill

River is a joy to write, and you write her mental perambulations so very well. This story should have more votes! I am curious about the woman in the cage, screaming, and I'm guessing this is only a glimpse at a much longer tale which, judging by your style, I would love to read. In spite of my… Weiterlesen

“Need a tissue”

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carleen

I love drabbles like these. In fact, it's my favorite way to write. It's possible to say so much in just a few short lines. Very sweet little story and I think you got the character's voices just right. Thankyou for sharing. Carleen

“Serenity regained”

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BexWurx

A great piece of fan fiction, Confessions of a Warrior Woman feeds that need for the crew of the Serenity to be back in action. Written in Zoe's voice with her dry wit, you get hooked instantly. As the story line unfolds, I found that I was compelled to keep reading. The author captures the… Weiterlesen