Grammatik und Zeichensetzung
I've only read 4 chapters so far but I can tell this is going to be one hell of a ride. Normally this is not my type of books as it's very emotional and I dont deal well with sad situations, heck I even cry on happy endings. But the writing style was very nice, maybe you should try to make it more intriguing coz I know your book is amazing and it will make it more interesting. There were grammar errors but I do more than that😂so it's okay. It's natural.
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Im gonna talk about the characters, I loved the sibling bond. You explained the personalities of everyone quite well.
The cover page was also very good. I appreciate the effort you're putting in this book. Keep up!!