Nancy Rich Foster - NRF

A New Earth 2.0

I loved this story! And as I read it I wonder what I would find on a new Earth, if by chance I were to be transported onto one. There are several places where a word is misspelled or missing which needs work. I find that if I have my computer read my work to me, I can hear the mistakes, and then correct them, this may also work for you.

All in all this is a great little story and I look forward to reading more of this authors work.

FOOTSTEPS TO MURDER

Wow, The picture for this story was really misleading! But the story more than made up for it as it was really different and the way it ended was a real surprise! Who'd have thought that so many would plot, do and escape unscathed! Kudos to you Michael for a great mystery! NRF

Synthesized

This story topic was a great one, but the author did not take the story far enough. Does the girl in the story have a name? Does she search for others that are awake? If she leaves the home of Viliana Chaknov, where will she go? So many unanswered questions . . . I will rerate this story if and when the author adds to it or revises it. Good luck, you have a great story line, and I hope you make it into a book!

In the After

In a time of deadly viruses six experimental ships sail from port to see if man can permanently live on water. Generations later they discover that their plan has a deadly flaw, that if not repaired could mean death for all aboard.

This story is not a complete, and has a good story line, but needs editing as words are missing in sentences and some sentences make no sense. I found out that if you hit read aloud and listen to your story, you will be able to hear all mistakes and thus correct them. I will reserve further comment after reading the rest of this story.

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SELECTION

This is a horror story of tragedy, sabotage, murder and espionage. A future where young lives are torn apart by events so tragic that you will gasp in disbelief at an out come that ruins several lives and devastates several more! Kudos to the author for a can't put it down, wish there was more novel! I hope there are many many more books to come!!!

First on Earth

This story is awesome! It is well written and fast paced. The idea of a super-human is not new, but the author used it brilliantly, and Leon, who was raised by Michelle, was born! Designed to be a super crusader he and his companions fight huge beings that look somewhat like big monster bears.with huge blades for claws. This story has many twists and turns, with a surprise ending that will stay with you for weeks!

2136

Wow! I love futuristic and end of the world apocalyptic books! They are my all time favorites! kudos for a wow of a book. I look forward to more, more, and more!

Legend of Earth

Loved this story! It was different and evoked the question, what if! Kudos to the author for a great read!

Genetics: 1159

Loved this story! It was so good that I could not put it down! Loved Jordon, Taylor, and Nona with their group of vigilantes. This story has a twist that will take your breath away! Kudos for a great story and hopefully a book two that ends CLU"S rein of terror once and for all.

Book of Rain

This was an excellent story. I liked that each chapter was about a different person, and how Rain helped the suffering and the lonely find peace. I also liked the way the author told Rain's story. My only gripe is that most of the time the author did not leave a space between the end of the sentences and the next word, which was very distracting, to say the least.

The Cradle Snatcher

This story had me from the first page! It was fast paced and believable, In an ideal world Sam would get better, and Detective Lauren Ryder and he would become engaged or married, And Peter O`Donnell, well I have a death wish for him! I look forward hopefully to a 2nd book.

NRF author of The Lost Souls of Gilfords Falls also on Inkitt.com.

elimination

This is such an awesome story with, cold, uncaring nameless, numbered characters. Loved every single word!

An Act of Gods

This is a story about a ten year old street orphan that gets into big trouble when she robs the wrong person. I like Rory's spunk, and her ability to adjust too everything that's thrown at her! I am now on book two of this series! Kudos to this author for originality and a great story! NRF

From An Office Window

When Chloe's car catches fire and Mitchell sees it from his office window, an unexpected friendship is formed. But as friendship gives way to deeper feelings, Chloe finds out that her husband, whom had vanished without a trace, and presumed dead, was very much alive . . . . . This story was a page turner with lots of twists and turns. a very enjoyable read! NRF

written in blood

This is a story of a high school reunion that goes terribly, horribly wrong, and of those that lived to tell the tale. This story was suspense from the first word to the very last! I also loved the short chapters which made for easier reading breaks!! The only flaws in the story was the way some of the sentences were structured. Plus I liked this story, enough, even with it's flaws, to give it my vote.

"The Inheritance"

this is part one of An Evil Family, and had me from the first chapter to the very last! The twists and turns, and suspense had me guessing to the very end! This was a great job by a great author!

All Things Begin - The Anmah Series Book 1

This story had me mesmerized from the first word! I am now going to read book two, with the hopes that book three will be finished by the time I finish reading it, so I will not have to wonder how the story ends! Kudos for a fascinating story!

The Phoenix King: The Awakening [Book 1]

This story did not disappoint. The murder of a king by his near kin. The hiding of the prince at the age of one, and his discovery at the age of fifteen, left me hungry for more. I hope the author finishes this story soon! NRF

"The Waiting Room"

What can I say? I recently lost my husband to of 23 years, to colon cancer. This story grabbed my heart and wouldn't let go! My thanks to the author for this outlook on life and death, although unlike Paul, My Bruce never got to wake up. NRF

POLLEN

When I first started this story, I was not impressed with it at all, in fact I told myself that I should at least read the first five chapters to give the author a fair chance. Well by chapter three I was so immersed in this story of fourteen walled districts full of people that were nothing but rats in a prison, to those that were using them for personal gain, that I didn't want the story to end. I now look forward to reading the next book Titled STEM!

A legacy of pain

Wow! the author killed it! This is one of the best short stories I have had the honor of reading in a long, long time. I was hoping that Asha's and Dean's fate might have turned out differently, but alas it was not to be. Kudos to the author for a story told with eloquences and such sad beauty that it nearly broke my heart!

BROTHERS IN BONDAGE, SISTERS IN SLAVERY

Orphaned and abandoned children in a dysfunctional united States of America band together for safety from reapers, soldiers, and those that would enslave those ages ten to eighteen in work camps that supply goods to the rich and privileged. This is actually the beginning of a very believable story, and I look forward to seeing what happens to the twins, Lilith and Blair, and to the leader of the group, Aiden. I am also curious as to the connection between Aiden and Alexander aka Lex. this story has some word repeats in some of the sentences. Hint, if you hit read aloud and listen while your story is read to you, you will hear all the little mistakes you have made and will be able to easily correct them.

The city

So far this is a great story and I loved it. The hero, James is awesome in his bitterness toward the king for the years of hatred and mistreatment that the king has shown to his family. I wonder, will James's indignation and pride endanger his family, or will it be a symbol of hope and freedom for the down trodden of the city? I hope as this story continues that James gets his wish and his family is redeemed! Kudos to the author for a fine start to what could be a great story!

The Tear Catchers

Wow! What an awesome story! I loved Every word! From the first one to the last, this was a page turner! I loved how the sparks flew between Tessa and Greymore! And as much as I loved this story I hate that it ended on the note it did! Pleas write a sequence to this story and tell us whether the two lovers ever find a path to togetherness, and what becomes of Sodalane!

Tethered Twins

This was a thrill a minute kind of story. My only complaint is the way it ended! Please finish this story with a few more chapters that wraps up "the deck", Emmie, Will and the rest of the gang.

Exposed

In the year 2080 there are two kinds of people. The humans and those with mutated DNA. This is a story of survival for the fittest, with an ending that will leave you reeling! I hope there's a book two that picks up where this story leaves off! Kudos to the author for a fine piece of work!

The cleansing

This is a powerful story of one man's journey to be cleansed of a madness that was always just one step ahead of him! kudos for a story well written and a job well done!

Locust

Love, love, love this story that's a reminder that hell has no fury like a woman's wrath! Kudos to the author.

Preface

Love this story. I just wish the author had told us, the reader. where she was taken and what happened to her!

Dreamscratch

What do we dream about when we dream? The nameless girl in this story dreams of Aranke the dream eater and a jawless man. I gave the writer a three across the board for effort, as the story, to me, has no plot. The author has given this story a beginning, but it needs some filling in the middle that explains why Aranke is eating dreams and why the country is at war? It also needs a conclusion that wraps up the story and tells how it ends. I wish you the best of luck with this story. NRF

rex et iurisdictus

This small tidbit of a story leaves you wanting MORE . . . .

Masquerade

This story did not make a lick of sense. It jumped from one scenario to another with no explanation as to what was happening or why it was happening! very frustrating, indeed!

False Dystopia

This little story was great food for thought. There are so many diseases out there that this scenario may very well become a reality in our life time or not so distant future!

Icarus

This was a great little short story. I hope the author continues the story line a makes this story into a book length novel.

Epoch Earth; The Great Glitch

Great little story of death, due to government and population control.

Unknown Real

I love stories of Armageddon and end of the world scenarios, and am looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

From the Ashes

Wow! When James Hartford, his wife Shelia and their four year-old daughter Emily move into their dream house, they never expected the unexplainable to happen . . . The characters in this story will haunt you long after you finish reading it! This is not a five star book it is a 100 + star book, This book is awesome! Kudos to the author for a great story that will keep you on the edge of your seat as you shake your head in disgust and bewilderment at James stubbornness . . . !

Different

This is a story of people that have special powers and are being persecuted because of them. Some parts of this story did not make any sense to me, as the story had no body to speak of. People were rescued but then what? This story should be rewritten, and revised with a beginning,(Why these people are born mutants, and why they are being persecuted.) Middle, (What do they do once rescued, do they form an army and fight for the right to live, do they stay hidden to stay alive, what are their plans, their future?) The ending, (Do they become a country in their own right, Do they gain their freedom, how does their story end?) If revised, this could be an awesome story.

Oh, Pioneer!

This story reminds me of the song "In the year 2525." I love dystopic stories! They are my food for thought. Kudos to the author!

The Curing Jars

This was a story short that left me shaken! Kudos for a great job on a subject that is often swept under the rug.

Untitled Manuscripts

Joey just wanted to be a writer of fiction, until she signs up for a Criminal Analysis class. When the teacher partners her with Daniel, things take a turn for the worse as her storied turn into true horrors with real murders. Although Detective Doe and special agent Cook are working round the clock, the murders keep piling up. This is a great who done it story that will leave you flabbergasted at the way it ends!

A Planet Called Eden

I love this story. But I was sooooo disappointed when it ended with no conclusion whatever! Is there a second book? And why is there not a feasible ending to this story???

Hell off-world

This story has an amazing plot an is a page turner! I loved everyone of the Black Comet's crew members!. Atlas, Amy, Monty, Blain and Captain Thresa. The Squid People, fearless in the face of defeat, were a kind, benevolent species! kudos for a great story! I look forward to reading more from this author!

sameness

This is the second time I have read this story, and every time I read it, it sends shivers up and down my spine! I can see my great, great grand children possably living in a society exactly like this one! Kudos on what could be actual, realistic future of horror!

The Hurricane

This was a good little story idea. I think it would be a great little story if it was revised and the howling banshee was not used as much, but was replace with ferocious wind, fearsome storm, or something like the torrent of water pounded at the uncovered window, while lightening and thunder lite up the sky. Etc. Just an idea. Anyway, The more you write, the better you get! Best of luck, NRF

Alone

Wow! This certainly was a different kind of story then I usually read. It was truly food for thought, though I hate what happened to IREANE AND MIGELLE. Kudus for a job well done!

The wardens: first hint of darkness

This is a story about monster hunters, magic and good surviving evil. It is not a bad story for what I assume is a first tine writer. Wishing you the very best! Have fun with your writing, I do! NRF

Wayward stars

Great story, believable characters and unique plot! I wonder what I would have done if I were in Liam's shoes. Can he face his toughest demon of all or will he lose the battle . . . .

An's Workshop

This story was a hard one to rate. It was also hard to follow at times. And although it is a futuristic story, parts of made no sense to me, but as I do not play, nor do I have any desire to play computer games. It's only logical, that stories about them would not interest me! Good luck with your book, I wish you only the best! NRF

Caged

What can I say I read the first 3-4 chapters and thought, boring, then thought what the heck, it's only ten chapters, so I read the next chapter and thought what? Is Melody or April having a nightmare? Or was Stefen actually in a life threatening accident and these are nightmares from a fractured mind! Anyway the story turned out to be surprisingly sad but, delightfully different.,

Progeny

This was a fascinating story! I hope there is a book two.

New Eden

I really liked the essence of this story, but I did not like all sexual descriptions, (as nothing was left to the imagination,) or the filthy language. The concept of a hand full of people settling a new earth is an awesome one, though, and for that I tip my hat to you, the author! NRF

Caloric

I liked this story a lot, but thought the plot was a little over done. Phoenyx wakes up in a 6foot x3 foot cell and discovers that Lily is also being held prisoner by an unknown party. Soon Sabastian and Skylar join them. Knowing only that they will be executed in three days they must escape their prison or die . . . . .

Equinox: The return to Earth

Well I have read all three books, Equinox: Beginnings, Equinox: The rise of Jason, and Equinox: The return to Earth. And I can not believe the way this story ended! Come on, Yusuf R Shaik, What are you doing! Don't leave us hanging . . . Where do I get Equinox: timeless????? NRF

Equinox: The rise of Jason

This is book two of Equinox: My one question: is there a method to Jason's madness? I guess we'll see in in book three, Equinox: The return to Earth . . . . . .

Equinox: Beginnings

This story is about a prison ship and its prisoners. Jason is the main character in this story. It seems that among all of Jason's talents, which include a genius mentality, quick thinking and mind reading, he, at times has an ugly attitude, and a mean streak, that says my way or no way! I don't know whether I like this story or not, as I don't know where the author's plot is headed. I'm hoping that Jason gets a brain before he destroys himself and everything else with his undisciplined power!

Defying the Alpha

Although the story idea was a fresh one, the author's endless bragging and story interruptions that start at the end of chapter 18 and continue to the end of the book are very off putting, My first thought was people only compliment and brag on themselves because NO ONE ELSE DOES OR WILL. Sorry but all the little comments are not needed nor are they wanted when I read a book, therefore the low rating. My advice, stick to the story, and leave out the other nonrelative mumbo-jumbo! NRF

Every 2 Minutes

This story will break your heart, and the sad part is that although this is written as a fictitious story, every single incident in this heartbreaking story is true, according to studies and research on leprosy! I was so hooked on this story that I read it in less then a day! Kudos to the author, I would buy her books in a heart beat! Keep up the good work! NRF

Balloon Man

This story was as gruesome as they get, and at first I thought it was just a story of mayhem and the torture of children by a psychotic killer, but the more I read the more one chapter merged with another for a shockingly unforgettable ending!

The Memory House

I definitely like your story.Twelve strangers from all walks of life wake up in a room together. Realizing they are all prisoners, with no way out of the house, they quickly chose sides, but when one by one the bodies start to pile up, panic and chaos follow as the accusations flow. . . . . I did not like the way this story ends at all, as it leaves the reader hanging, therefor I have not given it the 5* rating I would have given it, had it been the finished product. When and if the author finishes this tale of woe, and she informs me of its completion, I will change my rating accordingly. Thank you, NRF

Excalibur ~ World from Ashes

Not my cup-a-tea kind of book. The story of a gang war in an apocalyptic world sounds fantastic, and it's a brilliant idea. I just can't get past Who the "lovers" are. Sorry . . .

Make it Stop

This is one of the saddest stories I have read in a long long time! It is also a story that tells it like it really is, and Yes honor killings happen every day in every country in the world. thank you, floridatown, for sharing this truth with us, your reading audience.

An Evil Family

This story had me from the first chapter to the very last! The twists and turns, and suspense had me guessing to the very end! This was a great job by a great author!

"The Last Grey Sky"

Wow! This is a blow you away story in every sense of the word. kudos to the author for a story about a killer virus caused by seeing colors, mad scientists, torture, friends, sacrifice and death. I read it in less then a day.

Bag Men: 2069

This story was fairly interesting, to say the least. A virus that is killing people, suddenly changes from zombie like status to almost human to survive the SAC BPH agents that track their victims who are called, sleepers. This is their story . . . . . NRF

The Hidden Truth (Book 1 of The Hidden Truth Series)"

This is the story of Estrela Alice Montgomery, orphan, who has been told her family was dead, But now has proof that they are very much alive. With her friend Shayne, she leaves the orphanage on a quest to find them. This new twist on an old story had me mesmerized from the very beginning to ending. Now I'm looking forward to book two in hopes that it explains why . . . . NRF

Then All Things Become New - The Anmah Series Book 3"

What can I say! the third book was as awesome as the first! Three Kudos to the author, for three awesome books! I would definitely read more of this author and I would also buy her awesome books!

But Peace Must End - The Anmah Series Book 2

This second book of the Anmah Series was as awesome as the first story, I disagree with spare runner. The names were ordinary names with different spellings, which I for one loved. I am now going to read the third book in this amazingly awesome story!

Zero (Book 2)

i have read three chapters of this story and find it mildly interesting, because i don't usually read this kind of book, now my friend found it highly entertaining! so there you go! I am curious as to who's body they found in the cabin, and where Silver Solano disappeared to. And whether the body was that of Silver Solano's!

The Queen that Time Forgot

This story ended to abruptly, I hope the author finishes writing this story, as I feel that it ended before it started. I want to know what happened to Berengaria. Did she ever rule as queen? Did Richard ever love her? Did she ever return to

her home land? As I said, this story ended to abruptly, and I hope the author finishes writing this story.

Wiped (The Trapped Trilogy #2)" Author

Great story, this is book two of a trilogy, I am now reading book three.

Trapped (Trapped Trilogy Book 1)"

Love this book! I have just added book to my reading list!

Second coming

This story was a rare and awesome work of art! The story's characters were so human and so amazing that at times I literally felt tears form in the corner of my eyes! Imagine waking after thousands of years to the perfect society! Kudos to the author for a job well done!