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I'm all for second chances, but---
Let's begin with the good parts: after around chapter 20 the storyline finally stopped feeling like season 1 of "The Witcher" and became bearable and I actually liked the ending. Not everything is "happily ever after" and life sucks sometimes (points for daring - I liked it!) Oh, and I LOVED that plot twist - did NOT see that coming and it left me all giddy inside! With that said, the way it kept going back and forth between the POVs, having to read the same scene just from another POV was annoying at best - there are better ways to explain actions than to replay the whole thing. The plot was mediocre good. I like a rejection/"asshole turned around" story as much as the next guy, but some of the things going on were unrealistic (I know this is a fantasy, but even sci-fi has to have some "science" in it, so fantasy should also have a bit of realism), tiresome repeats arguments and sometimes the so-called "grown-ups" acted like idiotic teens. Now, you probably want me to be done and over with this because as an author myself, I hate bad reviews, but I'll just say this: I love your passion! You're a true author (you know... the kind who lies in bed at night plotting a 7 book epic fantasy ;) ) and you're bringing your fantasies to life. It's amazing to see and I want to encourage you to continue doing what you love. You're daring and I would love to read more of your books because with practice comes--- well, closer to perfect ;) All the best :)
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