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Opinons on "A Modern Nebuchadenezzer"
Let me begin by saying this review that dream sequences are my absolute favorite thing to read and write about. Josh does this particular dream sequence very, VERY well; right out of the gate the entire scene is fantastical, and the main character is already fully aware that he is in a dream.
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This dream touches down on the main character very well, as it subtly hints and shows very pivotal points in his life, as well as his view on things, especially with an entity that has apparently been a part of the main character's life for some time now. The pacing is very well done in my honest opinion, as is the scene with the girl that the main character see's. The dream itself also shifts subtly into a more darker area of the main characters life; but only as a teaser, and that teaser is as brief as a breath but it's powerful.
All in all, really enjoyed it!