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Teresa Knapp
I love hearing from my readers but from now on I'm only going to read and respond to reviews. Inkitt needs to get their act together.
A midsummer Masquerade
So he convinced his best friend to knock up his ex wife?
His friend doesn't have a problem with that?
Sneaky!
The Drifter in Disguise
Really enjoyed this story.
Look forward to checking out some more of your work!
Cody's Chance
Enjoyed this story. Not quite as much action as the others but was very sweet. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHis Fanged Savior
The story line was very good but it's very obvious that English is not your primary language. LOTS of spelling and grammar errors but otherwise was a good read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy Cats Protect us from the werewolves
Definitely very different from the many werewolf books I have read so far but it was hilarious and I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. So many unexpected twists and turns, each one just plain funny! Loved the authors sense of humor. Spelling and grammar errors galore but was still a joy to read!
Do hope you will check out some of my stories. Not nearly as funny but hope you find them entertaining just the same.
For never
i wish I would have known this was book #2 before I began reading because it made the beginning very confusing. The plot was not outlined as to where things were going with the story. I hope by the time I finish reading book 1 you will have edited book 2 and finished book 3. There are lots of spelling and grammar errors as well as his when you mean hers and vice versa through out the book that need to be fixed. Also when you said "he said" or "she said" it should only be when there are two people talking and no one else present. There were parts when I couldn't figure out who was speaking.
You've got potential to write some good stuff but you need to work on the things mentioned above.
Learning to Love
Now this one was really good! Yeah, Adrian punched out her dad! I loved it! A few spelling and grammar errors but this one was more well done! Keep it up!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Scarlet Tower
The plot of the story was very good but the story itself is very broken up and hard to follow. You never tell where she collected all the different girls from or what their powers are. You mentioned one had water powers but the rest are rather vague.
You build suspense but then it just peters out instead of coming to a conclusion and you left the entire story unfinished. The end doesn't really qualify as a cliff hanger, more like a rushed petering out. You don't describe the "final battle" or the council's reasoning for letting either of them live after what they had supposedly done, which was also never really described or explained.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors. There is potential here to make a great story but it needs lots of work! Don't give up and keep trying!
Exceptional story!
I enjoyed this story more than any of the ones I've read so far! Found very few spelling errors which made it even more of a joy to read! Will definitely be following more of your works!
Hope you will find time to check out one of mine!
Oh no you didn't!
Besides the needed grammar editing required for this story, it was intriguing to say the least. I can't believe you ended it like that and have not posted when the sequel will be out? Please tell me soon!
Lies die Geschichte jetztUnique story
The concept of the story is good and the characters personalities are well described for the most part. Kind of hard to get a handle on the "looks" of each one but the overall story is very interesting. I look forward to having unanswered questions answered in the next edition to this series. Grammar needs a lot of work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThrasher
Getting better!
Still feel like you could have gone into more detail in some areas and I see where you left it open at the end for another one!
Gravel
Whoa! Wait a minute. What happened to Lynch?
Do they end him? What about his men?
Rex?
This one was easier to follow but still left a lot of gaps into what was going on.
Could easily be expanded on!
Stone
Wow! It really moved fast and felt like parts were left out for the reader to decipher but the story line was good!
Into the Wild
NO! NO! NO! You can't end it like that!
Do they get away?
Or get caught? Is she pregnant or not?
What happened to Benjamin? Do they ever see each other again?
I personally would have bitten his dick off for treating me like that or planted that ax in his head but I guess the story wouldn't have been the same then.
Never read a werewolf story like this that's for sure.
Hard Earned
This one could have been a stand alone book, which is what I'm sure you intended when you were writing it.
I personally would have gone into more detail of what actually happened to her but this is not my story to tell.
I enjoyed reading it though.
Needs lots of editing!
Hard Time
This story is exactly the reason I'm single! LOL
Too much turmoil and heartache in human relationships.
JK
Lots of editing needed but was a good read.
Kingdom of Hearts
I thought there was going to be more resistance from her father or attempts on her life but glad there was a happy ending.
So I'm guessing that he eventually gave up his ski lodge?
Sounds like they totally relocated instead of just going to rebuild the kingdom?
The story needs lots of editing to fix spelling and grammar errors but otherwise it was a very enjoyable read. Sad that the series is over.
His Redemption
Love this series!
Needs lots of editing but the overall story is really good.
The teaser at the end makes me eager to move on to the next one!
Her Lover, Her Alpha
Kind of surprised that this one did not have an epilogue to it stating what the pups actually were. Also it seems like knowing what happened to the attacker that the feds took away is kind of left dangling with no closure since it's not really addressed in the next two books.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors as well as missing words but I still loved the story.
Contract with the Devil
There are very few books that I have read on here that made me wish they were longer but this is one of them.
Had some spelling and grammar errors, mostly because words were missing but I really enjoyed it overall. Well done! On to your next book!
True Mates
Definitely different from any other werewolf story I've ever read/written but enjoyed it anyway.
So glad it has a happy ending!
Good job, author!
South Side of Nowhere
I enjoyed this story very much. A few spelling and grammar errors and some words missing but otherwise a very good read. Look forward to checking out more of your work and invite you to check out some of mine!
Not Complete as listed
This book is not complete on this site!
If you start it, you will have to go to another site to finish it!
I did not read it and won't because I HATE to be left hanging.
Listing status needs to be marked "Exert"
My Neighbor the Biker
Really enjoyed your story!
Very well written.
Got a little confused on the men's names for a bit but finally figured out who was who.
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Foxes Equinox
What a unique story!
Loved it so much I couldn't put it down until I was finished. Will definitely be looking for more of your work!
The Cabin
Would have loved more chapters. Seemed to just cut off and was unfinished but well written except for a few spelling errors.
His Christmas Mate
Cute story. Needs some work on spelling and grammar and a few times the names got mixed up but overall it was a nice read.
Byron
Well done! A few spelling and grammar errors but overall a good read! Really enjoyed this one!
Callum
Really enjoyed this short story. Very well written. Short, sweet and no drawn out drama filled nonsense!
Can't wait to read the next installment.
BEWARE!
This story is NOT complete!
In fact if you want to read it, you will have to either pay to have Kindle unlimited or buy the book on Amazon. Personally I wouldn't give a plug nickel for it! Has great potential but falls seriously short because it wanders too much!
The Beta and his runaway werefox
Awesome story!
Spelling and grammar needs work but otherwise, very well written!
The Beta and Her Omega
Very well done! I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Very much looking forward to reading more of you work!
The Rogues Panther
Really enjoyed this story.
Had a lot of spelling and grammar errors but overall a good read.
Lust at first glance
Good story!
Was kind of interested to find out what his parents thought when they found out but other than that, it was a good read.
Reverse Harem
Oh to be Mia!
Couldn't believe she blindly went along with everything for so long and didn't find out what was happening until the next morning but sounds like she had fun along the way!
OMG!
That's all I can say is OMG! I can't even imagine doing that with my parents!
WOW!
Most of it had me falling off of my chair laughing and I was sure the best friend was going to end up involved when she showed up.
Kept waiting for oral and then the actual act but it never came which was disappointing kind of.
The One Who Infiltrated
So glad you wrapped up the story, mostly.
What happened with the Crystal Pool? What happened to Joe?
I could see this story being expanded on (suggest editing and adding to the existing stories) and adding more details.
Ex Wife
The story line was good but all of the grammar errors and English not being your first language (It's obvious) made it hard to understand sometimes. This desperately needs editing.
You also left a couple of loose strings, like who the girl was that saved Liam after his accident.
Did Xander give her a ring when he married her? What did she have? Oh and you still call Rose Katie several times in the first chapter (and maybe the second). But I enjoyed the story overall.
The Bikers Rules
Loved this first book!
I was confused a lot of the time but it was very entertaining, even with all the spelling errors (Bikers's should only have one S). Very much looking forward to the next book!
Angel Wings
This has the potential of being a great story but it needs some serious editing.
Can't figure out if there is really a plot to the story because it kept jumping around so much. Hard to follow because the characters who are supposed to be "speaking" are not identified and even when they are their names are often changed.
The poor grammar, spelling, etc. made it really hard to enjoy what could have been a good read.
Warriors
I really enjoyed this series. You had me sitting on the edge of my seat right up to the end. The only thing I really found wrong was in the last chapter, you took away from the realism of the story when you used dates that are past the current year of 2022. Another thing I noticed was that several times you mentioned the story of "The King" but there's not one on your list (at the end of Book #1). Do all of the stories you have on inkitt link together?
What would be the correct reading order to get the most out of your stories?
The Unbreakable
I'm really enjoying this series!
Can't wait to read the next edition!
Going to be sad when it ends!
Biker's Treasure
I'm really enjoying this series. Was kind of upset by how many people (readers) had so many negative comments about your character Layla/Michelle. They forget so quickly about all she's gone through and survived. They need to take a few steps in her shoes before they judge so harshly. Not everyone can come out of that kind of trauma and be like Lia.
Very well done!
The Ghost
I really enjoyed this story. Did she actually take care of her "mother"? Wouldn't blame her one bit for doing as it said she was planning. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series!
Lies die Geschichte jetztDominant Biker
I really enjoyed this story. It's full of spelling, punctuation and grammar errors that make it harder to read but it has a good plot. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel!
I don't read incomplete stories so any idea when it will be done?
Carter
Really enjoyed the series even with all the errors but still rather confused by the order the books should be renumbered since you have 2 bk #2 but no #3.
Lies die Geschichte jetztCutter
A little hard to follow parts of it and it has lots of twists that kept it interesting. The ending was rather rushed but nicely wrapped up what happened to Jean. Would have liked to know more about her background and how and why she was taken away from her pack. And why Watcher never let on that he is a wolf? Good read except for the spelling, punctuation and grammar errors.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAlone, Always Alone
Very good story plot but the grammar, punctuation and identifying who is speaking needs work. Also noticed that characters names changed several times within the story (i.e.: Breaker changed to Brick then to Bricker). Will continue reading the series to hopefully get a proper ending for Jean and Manic in the next one. Have noticed that you have 2 book 2's listed. One for Cutter and another one called Carter.
Hoping Cutter's book is intended to be next and Carter's should be titled to be book 3? Please clarify.
The Banker Biker
I thoroughly enjoyed this story even with all of the spelling and grammar errors. One correction to the end of the story is that one month old babies can't reach out and rarely giggle, if at all.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories and would love to read more about other members of the ROD MC.
The Dark Rider
There were a few places where you could have expanded on the story more, like HOW she got involved with Ty but other than that, you did very well and I enjoyed your story very much. Needs a bit of editing to correct some spelling and grammar errors.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Good
This has potential to be a really good full length book except for the spelling and grammar errors!
If you decide to leave it as a short story, please at least fix the spelling errors! They really detract from the story.
My Eternal Mate
Great ending to an awesome series! Needs some editing to fix the grammar and spelling errors but was a really good read and a very enjoyable story! Good job!
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy Luna Mate
Very well done. Still have some issues with grammar and spelling but otherwise a very good read! I wonder who the actual father of Jessica's pup is?
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy Orphan Mate
Really enjoyed this story even with the many grammar errors that made me have to back up and re read some of the lines to be sure I was not misunderstanding it. A few spelling errors too.
Can't wait to read the rest of the series! Good job!
Austin
Loved this story! So very glad to hear there is one coming for Lou but when will it be available? Can't wait to read it!
Lies die Geschichte jetztJax
I really enjoyed this story. I do hope you plan on writing one about Lou! He deserves to find happiness. He sounds like a good guy!
Lies die Geschichte jetztLight in the Darkness
Loved this story! I didn't see any errors and "proper grammar" is only good in English class! Very few people actually talk like that and I'd rather read things with the way real people talk! Good work! Look forward to reading more of your work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztHow to tame a Beast
Absolutely loved this story. One of the best that I've read on here so far! Need to separate the lines when different people are speaking and other than a few spelling errors it was GREAT! Looking forward to reading more of your work! This one will definitely be on my list to read again and again!
Lies die Geschichte jetztOn the run
This story has the potential to be really good but you left out so much (i.e.: the whole story to do with "A" and what was the deal with Mona and Noah?) It seems like this was just an excuse to write about lesbian sex with no background to actually have a plot to make it interesting. Glad it was just a short story. I only finished it because I kept assuming that the background and plot would come out at some point but it never did. There's not even any background on how the 5 girls became friends in the first place.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe She Wolf
Really enjoyed this story! Only a few spelling errors but otherwise, very well written.
Lies die Geschichte jetztHunger Awaits
Loved it! Really enjoyed this story. A few spelling errors but nothing major and was a good read! Look forward to reading more of your work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztWhite Medicine Woman
Was really enjoying the story but it seems to have been cut short and left unfinished. Only found a few spelling errors but otherwise well written.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThumper's Fight
Really enjoyed this one too! Well done! In answer to your comment at the end, please keep this line going. Choose another one of the bikers........like maybe Ace? Maybe a "mature woman" comes to the bar?
Lies die Geschichte jetztFarrah's Ride
Loved it! Can't figure out why it says there are 37 chapters when there are actually only 24? When will the next one be available and complete?
Lies die Geschichte jetztDorian Ponder
Loved the story, except for the end. What did he hear? There were two books before this one? The title says this is book #1? What are the titles to the two previous stories?
Lies die Geschichte jetztFrom Felon to Family
Loved this short story. He never should have gone to jail in the first place. Kept waiting for his sister to pop up out of the woodwork. His mom sounds like a great lady who raised an awesome son. Why can't I find one like him?
Lies die Geschichte jetztStolen Moon
Don't get the title but it was an excellent story! Really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztShort Circuit
Really enjoyed this one even with all of the spelling and grammar errors. Hope you finish # 8 quickly as I'm dying to read more. I love biker stories!
Lies die Geschichte jetztKnock on Wood
Still needs LOTS of editing but really enjoyed this story. Can't wait to find out who the mystery wedding is for.
Lies die Geschichte jetztIronhand
I was slightly disappointed by this one but still found in enjoyable. Couldn't stop looking at his photo! Damn that is one hot looking man! Needs some editing and would suggest that when you use foreign languages that you put the meanings of what you are saying in parentheses right after them.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAbsolution
I'm really enjoying this series and this one did not disappoint. Still needs a bit of editing to fix some spelling, grammar and punctuation errors but otherwise, very well written.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFight On!
Really enjoyed this one and can't wait to read the rest. She's been through some rough stuff but is a survivor!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Hellhound
Really enjoyed this story. Some spelling, grammar and punctuation errors but otherwise, very well written. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series. I hope the final book will be ready by the time I finish the ones between now and then.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Broken Doctor
Very good story except for the many spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztDoctor for the Mafia
Good story but LOTS of spelling, grammar and punctuation errors and wow! What a cliff hanger of an ending! Can't wait to find out how it all turns out.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy Muted Mate
Needs LOTS of editing but otherwise was an enjoyable short story.
Lies die Geschichte jetztDiehard Desire
Really enjoyed this story except for the many spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. Look forward to reading more of your work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHawk & Peggy's Journey
This story had so many twists and turns and different plots that it was very hard to tell what was going on. Combined with the bad spelling, punctuation and grammar it was hard to read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztViper's Woman
Overall, this story is hard to read because its so hard to tell who is saying what.
Plot? There didn't seem to be just one or one at all really.
Author needs to edit and proof read his/her stuff before publishing. If unable to get it right, then get someone else with better English skills to do it.
Spelling, grammar and punctuation almost don't exist in this story except for the one chapter of legal mumbo jumbo.
Zion's Great Dire
This was a good ending to the previous story but was a bit confusing.
Lies die Geschichte jetztSnake
Glad to see some improvement in this one but still need to work on not only indicating who is speaking but the spelling and grammar. Enjoyed what I could make out.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy name is Knuckles
At least this story gives you some idea of who is speaking sometimes but the punctuation is horrible. Needs lots of editing!
Figures it would end on a cliff hanger. The story line is OK but it jumps all over the place and ends up not being about Knuckles at all. He becomes a side character. Maybe should have been titled the MC's club name.
My President's Sister
The story was OK. Lots of twists and turns and action but it got so confusing because you don't identify who is speaking to who. Just a lot of jumbled conversations. Lots of spelling and grammar errors too. Would have enjoyed it more if it wasn't for those things.
Lies die Geschichte jetztPanther Plays with Fire
This should have been cut into two books and needs LOTS of editing but at least it is done. The ending was rather rushed. You've got the story line laid out, now it just needs to be cleaned up.
Lies die Geschichte jetztRain
The story was fair. Needs LOTS of editing. I know so many authors think that cliff hangers are the way to get people to read their next story but it's not, especially if the story is not well written to begin with. This series has potential to be very good but it needs LOTS of work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztJean and Ink's Daughter
This one was much better than book 1 but still needs some editing and revisions done to it. Characters need to be described and identified when they are speaking.
Lies die Geschichte jetztVenom's Chosen
This could have been a really good book. Somewhat of a plot is there but it's so poorly written. It's choppy with so many twists and turns. No idea of who is speaking and too much of the background details are just completely left out all together. The title says "Venom's Chosen" but he has a very small mention in the book and he never stakes a claim to her at all, just expressed an interest to someone who didn't even matter. Jeannie seems to just get passed from one man to the next without any real say in the matter. This needs more than just editing, it needs to be completely redone!
Lies die Geschichte jetztForger
This one was good but seemed rather choppy in places. I left comments after the chapters that I have questions about and hopefully you will find the time to respond directly to them.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBear
Another good one but you really should renumber the series and make this Bk 1. Also the last chapter should be put on Rogue's story. Having it here is confusing and it doesn't really fit in here.
Lies die Geschichte jetztRubble
I liked it overall but felt like there were some things missing from this one. Needs more of Rubble's background story (a flashback to his youth maybe?) Also sad that you didn't put in his proposal. Maybe in the next story?
Looking forward to reading the next one and sad that I'm getting closer to the end of the series.
Rogue
Another good one! I read your A/N and have to agree on your comment about trying to plan out a story. I've never been able to hold back my imagination when writing. I come up with an initial "plot" or idea for a story and then just let my imagination take over. Sometimes have to scroll back to confirm timelines and to be sure I have names correct (I'm notorious for changing names midstream and have to go back and change them to the one I like best)
Really enjoyed this edition of the series and can't wait to start the next one. You are very talented.
Boulder
Another hit! Really enjoying this series! Looking forward to the next edition.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBreaker
I am thoroughly enjoying this series. I love MC biker books. Thinking of trying my hand at one as well. Can't wait to read the next one! Good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztRunner
Loved it and enjoyed it. Two things really stood out that I found rather irritating was that you jump back and forth between their real names and their rider names. Very confusing to keep who is who straight. The other was Ollie's age. It started off at 6, then went to 5 and then 7 and then 8, Please clarify?
Lies die Geschichte jetztHunter
Loved it! That pic is HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! It feels like his eyes are looking right at you.
Found a few errors but not much. Very well written and look forward to the next one. Can't wait to hear about Breaker finding his lady.
Reign
Oh, I wanted to hear his proposal or did she propose?
Good story. A few spelling errors and some grammar issues but otherwise, very well written. Look forward to the next one.
Saving Natalie
Would have given this a much higher rating if it was actually complete as stated but only the beginning of the book is posted here with a note of it being available on some other website. Like the characters is about all I can say in a positive note.
Lies die Geschichte jetztIt's been a while
Although it was very violent, I enjoyed this story.
Didn't realize it until I started reading it that it was a sequel to It's Now or Never. Good work!
It's now or never
Loved it! Great story. Would have liked to have known the name of her son. Also who was the figure in black who rescued her the first time? He shot the TV on the video they were sent.
Only saw a few grammar and spelling errors but otherwise, very well written.
Artemis
You have got to be kidding me? You have it listed as complete and you leave off here? You really need to leave off the "author's notes" at the bottom of every page. This story is not even close to being finished. Please go back to your settings and change it to "ongoing" until it is actually complete.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy Murderous Finale
Wow. This was an amazing story. Very well written! Can't wait until you finish your other two stories. Good work. Keep it up!
Lies die Geschichte jetztStranded
Oh, I definitely want more of this story. There's so much more to tell. Why and how did she get stranded up there? Why is he living there? Do they end up staying together? Does she end up PG? Love what you have done so far but definitely want more!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBullied
I think this story will hit home for a lot of kids who are bullied. If I was Iris, I would have been reporting Hunter after every attack, especially after the rape. Sounds to me like no one has ever told Hunter's parents about their son and someone needs too.
Good story!
Where is she Bk 2
If the spelling and grammar issues were fixed along with some clues as to who's talking to who, this would actually be a good series to read but the way it's so chopped up makes it take too much concentration on trying to figure out what is happening from one chapter to another takes away the enjoyment of it. Needs some serious editing!
Lies die Geschichte jetztWhere is she? Book 1
This book could be so good if it had LOTS of editing but the bad spelling, horrible grammar, missing not only words but entire sentences in addition to never having a clue as to who is say what makes it very hard to read and understand. It also seems to jump from one situation to another and then back again so many times it's hard to keep up with any one line of thought. It would also help if the characters were described in more detail.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFear Me.
The overall story is good but moving rather slowly. Good plot. Needs lots of editing to correct spelling errors. Need to correct "gender errors". You sometimes say "She" when it should be "Him" and vice versa.
Hate the cliff hanger ending. Do hope "Hate me" is finished and on here.
Solomon
The plot of the story was excellent but the content is so full of errors of all kinds that it's rather hard to read. Needs LOTS of editing. The detail of how she was "snatched" was never really made clear, only that she was kidnapped, not how. Same with his packs end. There were several paragraphs that made no sense at all and lots of places where "she or her" should have been "he or him" and vice versa.
Lies die Geschichte jetztGenesis Spirit of Goddess
The title should have given me a head's up since it's missing the word "the" before Goddess. Good plot and characters but the story itself is full of spelling and grammar errors. Really need to identify who is speaking in the places without it because the story is confusing enough. Also if you are going to use non English words or phrases, you need to translate for us dummies who do not speak whatever language or slang you are using. The story was choppy leaving out big sections on what was going on with the main characters (i.e.; What was Azah going through and why?) and then the whole thing just ends with so much unfinished. This definitely needs LOTS of editing.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Hunter
The story line was great but the book is so full of spelling and grammar errors that its rather hard to read and really detracts from the story itself. Nothing some serious editing couldn't fix.
Lies die Geschichte jetztWrestling for her heart
Can't believe she spent $5K on that dress *(makes me think I need to get back into sewing again) or $1700 on that cake but the gown was beautiful! Loved his bachelor's cake! Too cute! Lots of laughs with some of the things said and thoroughly enjoyed the story. Has several spelling and grammar errors but otherwise it's a good read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztForever Single?
Six more books? Or part of the other ones? Loved it Suzy's comment about her mate being over zealous!!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHer Older Mate
Oh, I wish this one would have been longer! Most all of the werewolf stories are about young wolves finding their mates. It was great hearing that love is still possible even if you are old! Great story! Needs some editing to fix a few spelling and grammar errors but as usual, very well done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Gift
Easily 6 books in the making here! I bet you would make each one a masterpiece that I very much look forward to reading.
Lies die Geschichte jetztDream Love
Great story!
You are very talented and I loved this one, especially the ending! You came to a close for the parents story but left yourself an opening for stories about the kids! Can't wait to read another one of your stories!
Rejected
Enjoyed this story very much. Could easily be expanded on and it wouldn't hurt it at all to have more clarity on some of the situations. Felt like the ending was rather rushed but at least you offered some kind of explanation on a few. I'm not really clear on whether or not her other children (how many more did they end up having) were bears or wolves or half an half hybrids?
Lies die Geschichte jetztUnexpected Love
Cute GP 13 story. Not too many errors on spelling or grammar just a bit of confusion on the eye and hair coloring. Nice read for young girls.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFinding Love in Tall Grass
What a sweet, simple short story. Not an ounce of smut in it.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFelon
Didn't realize this was part of a series and would suggest you make note of it on the listings. Is filled with spelling and grammar errors but also noticed in one of the early chapters (first time he took her to the room to chain her up), you stated that she had on no panties because she hadn't done laundry yet but yet when they were getting dressed, you said she slipped her panties back on.
Otherwise was well done and a good read.
Until Dawn
I don't get the title but wow, talk about a surprise twist on the ending! This one was a very good read even though it is full of spelling and grammar errors. I can see where you left yourself an opening for a sequel.
Lies die Geschichte jetztDevour
Really liked this one even with all the many many spelling and grammar errors. He bought a house for THEM to move into and didn't include her in the process? HMMMM.. LOL
I think if I was going to live there, I would want some say in it but that's just me. Good story! Not as kinky as I was expecting but still had plenty of sex which is always good in my book!
Yours truly Raven
While often confusing it was interesting and entertaining. Lots of spelling and grammar errors but otherwise I enjoyed it.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMercy
This was OK. Kind of weak on the plot and not much action. That combined with the poor spelling and grammar made it hard to hold my attention.
Lies die Geschichte jetztIn the night
Enjoyed the story even though it is filled with many spelling and grammar errors.
Lies die Geschichte jetztPiece of Cake
Nice story. A few grammar errors and you really should put in the translation of all foreign language phrases.
Chapters 28 & 29 are exactly the same.
Otherwise very well done and point well made.
Ace's Secret Addiction
Loved it! So glad Ethan finally found the courage to come out of the closet and boy did he come out all at once in a very public way!
Read the preview of The Desires of Diablo and can't wait to read it! Finally a threesome! LOL
His Shy Sphinx
Loved this one, as much as the rest! REALLY looking forward to the next one. The sneak peek chapter here has me wanting to stay up all night to read but it's already midnight and my eyes feel swollen and full of sand from reading His Shy Sphinx all day! Loved it! I knew Marco wasn't dead, I could just feel it.
Lies die Geschichte jetztLusting after Lucifer
Perfect title for this one but could have also been "Lucifer's Lust" LOL I was kind of surprised that their parents were surprised by them loving each other and that his father objected. Was even more surprised by Lilly's reaction at first. She had to have known. Oh well, at least it all worked out. Really looking forward to this next story. I'm really hoping for more of Uncle Nolan and his husband in this one. Love those two!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Rise of Raven
Great story! Loved this one as much as the ones before about her parents. Wish it had more of Uncle Nolan in it. Love that guy! Can't wait to read Lucian's story next!
Lies die Geschichte jetztDouble Reflection
Absolutely loved the entire Trilogy and look forward to reading the spin-offs. Will be recommending to friends to read this one! Love the characters. A few spelling errors but not enough to slow me down. Couldn't wait read what Nolan was going to do or say next! Loved his character!
Lies die Geschichte jetztAngel's Silhouette
Wow! Talk about a cliff hanger! Very interesting story. Love Nolan! And Damien! Can't wait to read the next edition!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Devil's Looking Glass
Really enjoying this story!
Very glad to see that book 2 and 3 are already finished and on here. Nothing pisses me off more than to have someone end a book with a cliff hanger and then tell you to go to another site to read the sequel.
Mia's Courage
Enjoyed your story up until the cliff hanger. Could you please list the name of the story to follow it at the end as I am supposing there is one? Some spelling and grammar issues but barely slowed me down. Will say you need to shorten paragraph lengths as parts of this seemed to be one long paragraph. Would also find it helpful to have better descriptions of the characters themselves. Have no idea what anyone was supposed to look like other than the main characters, Mia and Ace.
Lies die Geschichte jetztRogues Revenge
Wow! Very violent but intriguing. The end was a total surprise! Very well done! Found a few spelling and grammar errors but otherwise very well written.
Lies die Geschichte jetztKaiah
Full of spelling and grammar errors made it hard to enjoy. No back story on Dagger other than he's friends with Solange really and there is not really a plot to the whole thing. More like a description of how they got together.
The entire series is like chapters of a whole book because the "chapters" in each story are more like a page or two long. This would have made a good book if the spelling and grammar errors were corrected and an over all plot would have been applied. Only one or two of them had any drama to them.
Thalia
Was very disappointed in this one, especially after how much better you did on the last one. You could have done so much more with it but it seemed as if you were rushing just to put something up. Spelling and grammar were issues again as well as lack of a plot. More of a description of how she came to be in the group.
Lies die Geschichte jetztSolange
Still needs some help on the spelling and grammar but big improvement. Definitely need to go back and edit all of the others leading up to and including this one.
Lies die Geschichte jetztCalliope
This one was better on the spelling and grammar but still needs some help. OK story line too. Could have had more details but it was OK.
Lies die Geschichte jetztEve
This one had somewhat of a plot but not enough detail but still full of spelling and grammar errors, though not as bad as some of the others in this series. Strange ending as it came from Atlas's point of view instead of Eve's.
Lies die Geschichte jetztCoretta
This one at least had a "story" to it. Spelling and grammar still needs work but it was a decent read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztEvanna
Full of spelling and grammar errors and basically had no real plot to it. More of a long description how another female member becomes part of the MC.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAlivia
This story didn't seem to have much of a plot and the spelling and grammar were so bad that it was really hard to read. It made me glad for the rushed ending.
Lies die Geschichte jetztOlive
Very short, choppy and full of spelling and grammar errors that makes it difficult to read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztRiver
Liked this one except for the bad spelling and grammar. Did she continue to fight? Or did Hawk put his foot down and make her quit? Kind of left those questions unanswered.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAlthea
You started off really well, except the spelling and grammar errors are still pretty bad but you kind of rushed the ending.
Again, when it's one it's spelled woman, when it's more than one it's women.
Reina
Getting better on the story lines. Spelling and grammar still needs LOTS of work. Poor thing sure had to go through some heavy shit but so glad she finally got her happy ending.
Just read this for the second time. Sure do wish you would fix the MANY spelling and grammar errors. Would make it a much better read and this series definitely has potential!
Lustful Payment
You are improving but still need to pay more attention to spelling and grammar. The story line was good, yet familiar.
When it's just one, it's woman. When there are more than one it's women.
Former Alpha's Mate
This one had a good plot but was still rather chopped up as if it was written one sentence a day or something.
Spelling and grammar needs a LOT of help! This would actually be a pretty good read if it wasn't for that.
Addressed as Vampire Supreme
Very strange story with an unreal ending. It wasn't just the horrible spelling and grammar that made this a hard read but that the whole thing was like individual thoughts put together is the best way I can think of to explain how chopped up the story was. Sorry but not one I would recommend.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMated to the Alpha Supreme
The story is good but the grammar and spelling errors make it hard to read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztPuppet for the Twins
Some background on why the twins are like this would be very helpful or are they just mentally disturbed? Spelling and Grammar needs a LOT of work but the plot of the story is very good. Looking forward to reading book 2 to find out what happens.
Just looked and there is no book 2.......yet?
Biker Redemption
This book seems like a bunch of cliff notes. Very choppy and while it filled in the end of book 1 it seemed rushed. I would have left out Penny getting pregnant all together if you weren't going to get into it more than you did. LOTS of spelling and grammar errors too.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBikers Betrayal
I was enjoying this story except for the many, many spelling and grammar errors. You really do need to edit it ASAP.
Then it ends in a cliff hanger after only 26 short chapters? Hoping Book 2 is done better.
Destiny of his pack
Loved it! I can definitely see the opening you left for a 3rd book without leaving a cliff hanger. Good story! Keep it up!
Lies die Geschichte jetztFinding His Destiny
Really enjoyed this story. Had some spelling and grammar errors but was a very entertaining read! Looking forward to book 2.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFangs, Claws and Mistletoe?
Loved them! Are you going to do Valentine's, Easter and hey how about a St. Patrick's Day? Now there is a subject that hasn't really been hit on here!
Leprechauns! Maybe mix in some fairies! You have a great imagination and would love to see what you can come up with. Might even try it myself!
Fangs, Claws and Turkeys?
Loved the short stories. Was kind of hoping to see her father's reaction in the last one but otherwise all were well done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztRise of Marchetti
Wow! Lots of action and drama in this one. Wish I had a clue as to what the individuals are supposed to look like a the descriptions are either non existent or very vague but love the interaction between them. Can't wait to read book #3.
Good work!
House or Marchetti
Wow! Really enjoying this story! Can't wait to find out why Frankie gives her the creeps and is he going to kidnap her? Why were they out without his normal security guards? How did the shooter manage to get away?
Lies die Geschichte jetztClub Nights
Entertaining story even though I felt that there was a lot left out. Like does she ever figure out he has/had ties to the Mafia? Need better descriptions of characters and locations. Story was fun but short and didn't really seem to have a "Plot" which I don't really need but without it there needs to be more smut! LOL
Lies die Geschichte jetztHunter
I can see why this one won the award! It was excellent. The other two were very good but I think I like this one the best. So glad her ex finally got back some of his own medicine! Serves his sorry ass right!
Love the happy ending! Please do more of this series!
Wyatt
Another hit! Was kind of surprised that the main characters names changed from the other book when the club name stayed the same as in your book 'Connor'. Kind of takes away from it being a series and makes these stand alone stories, which is kind of nice as each one has the possibility of becoming series within themselves. Would have liked to hear more about Wyatt's and Nix's backgrounds, if you are considering expanding this one.
Can't wait to read Hunter. Purposely left it for last since it's the award winner. Congrats on that!
Connor
Loved this story! Only found a few errors but otherwise, very well done! Look forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out some of mine!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHer Beastly Biker
Good story. Needs more descriptions on people and places but had enough action to keep it interesting. Don't be afraid to describe intimate moments unless you are a minor.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Beta's Mate
Personally would have titled it "The Beta's Royal Mate" but it's up to you. Really filled in the spaces for The Assistant. Was surprised by the rushed ending and of how the rogue died.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Assistant
Great short story! Really enjoyed it. You gave it enough description from the previous story, The Beta's Mate to those who have read it to wrap it up but didn't dwell on past happenings too much to take away from this being a stand alone story. The only thing I could think of that would improve it as a stand alone story would have been the reason's why their former wife/husband died.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Moon Baby
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very well done except for a few spelling and grammar errors. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztSold to the King of Alpha's
Very good story. Some spelling and grammar errors but otherwise, very well done
Lies die Geschichte jetztHis lover
Wow, talk about confusing! Between the deceit, secrets, horrible spelling and grammar issues this story is very hard to keep up with. The overall plot is good but need to edit and fix the spelling and grammar errors. There were several places where the gender of who is speaking or being spoken of is wrong and lots of missing words. Hard to imagine what the characters look like since the descriptions are very vague if they are there at all.
Lies die Geschichte jetztLighting a fire
This one was good but very confusing. Couldn't really figure out who was who sometimes, most of the time. Still needs help with spelling and grammar but was a good story.
Lies die Geschichte jetztFall to Air
This was a good story. Definitely different. Needs LOTS of work on spelling and Grammar but was a good short story.
Lies die Geschichte jetztSweet Caroline
Absolutely LOVED it! Needs a bit more detail on what the characters look like but the flow of the story was great. You didn't get long winded on unnecessary details (thank you!) Didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors either which was very refreshing. Very well done. Look forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out some of my stories!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe She Devil's Wolf
Loved it even with all of the spelling and grammar errors! Loved the 'old time' setting. I do hope there is a part 2 that tells of her sisters fate/mate? Is he a werewolf too or a vampire?
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Alpha's Prize
Excellent story even with the MANY spelling and grammar errors. Was so happy that the witch gave her back her wolf! Why didn't Eve get a proper burial? I noticed her name was missing from the others that were mentioned.
Lies die Geschichte jetztReverse
The story line and plot are good but the story is choppy and confusing. Spelling, Grammar and punctuation needs work but the potential is there.
Lies die Geschichte jetztWitch's Life
Loved it but hate that it's ending with a cliff hanger! Wish you would have forewarned me that it was part of a series that's not finished. Only saw a few spelling and grammar errors but otherwise very well written.
Is Book 2 going to be the end of the series? Or will there be more? Please let me know when the whole story is complete.
Good job so far, you've got talent!
Not the Beta's Mate
Loved it! Was kind of disappointed that she didn't turn out to be a werewolf but very happy that they got back together and things worked out for them. He should have proposed and those trips could have been their honeymoon! Really enjoyed this story!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHis Second Chance
Loved the story even with all the spelling and grammar errors. You left it wide open for a second book at the end. YEAH!!!!
Can't wait to move on to the next one. I just pray it's on this site!
Hidden Depths
Oh, I didn't want this story to end! Not real clear on how Dalton became Seth's 2nd in command but really like his character! Some spelling and a few grammar errors, mostly a few missing words here and there but otherwise, very well done.
Motor should have been monitor.
Theron II
Absolutely awesome! I actually liked book 2 more but both were great! Some spelling and grammar errors that need to be fixed but it was a great read!
Lies die Geschichte jetztTheron
Thoroughly enjoyed this story and can't wait to read part 2! So glad Theron is still alive! Lots of spelling and grammar errors but one thing that stuck in my mind was I believe you said Lina was 5'8" at one point and then near the end you said she was only 5'6"?
Lies die Geschichte jetztSirens Lust
Great story line but English is definitely not the authors primary language. It's also very apparent that she knows little about the Hawaiian language or culture as many names are either misspelled or just incorrect. There is no D or Q in the Hawaiian language. The way the people spoke in this story doesn't even come close to how they would sound if you were to visit the islands.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMate Hunt
Excellent story with many interesting unusual twists and a shock ending! Lots of grammar and spelling errors but otherwise, very well done! Look forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out some of mine!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Hybrid
Absolutely loved this story! Lots of grammar and spelling errors but really enjoyed the plot of it.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Revenge
Excellent!
Really enjoyed this story. There were some spelling and grammar errors that should be easy enough to fix using google.
Very well done.
Lorraine's Forever
Loved it! This could easily be made in to a full length novel and would love to read it. You did very well! Wish it had a little more on character's physical descriptions for all the characters but loved the way you described their emotions! Very well done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztSweet Dreaming
Enjoyed the story. Was really toned down compared to the series before this one. Lots of spelling, grammar and punctuation errors but was an enjoyable read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztHis Getaway
Really enjoyed your book. You mention there are other parts to this series but not the titles. Could you please tell me what they are? Are they before or after this one? As I've recommended to others who do series, it really helps readers if you identify which book of a series it is somewhere on the cover or Prologue.
Lots of spelling and grammar and missing words in this one but was a good read!
Never Have I Ever
Really enjoyed this story even if some of the "Tommy parts" brought back some old bad memories for me personally, it made me wish I had found my James but too old for that now.
Good story line. Physical descriptions of men (Johnny and Graham mostly) could have been a bit more detailed but got the general gist of their characters and liked them all.
Scotch on the Rocks
Really enjoyed the story. I swear I've read one very similar to it before but can't remember the details of it. Wondering what part 2 will be like, although I think it's fine as is.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBearington Bros & Their Fated Mate
Love the original plot to this story even with all of the punctuation errors of which there are many. At least right up to the cliff hanger ending (hate those) and I do hope that book 2 is complete!
Lies die Geschichte jetztShifter Mate Tri Totem (BK 13)
Oh, I'm so sad it's over but definitely see myself enjoying this series again but think I'll wait for final book (14). Hoping it's going to be about the impending war!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHer Rockin' Shifter
This chapter was fun! Love Marry Beth and her friends coming in at the end like that! Can't believe there's only one more story to this series. I could easily see this as a new series on TV! How fun that would be to watch!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Last Dragon Shifter (BK11)
Loved this one and glad that you were accurate with the egg issue. Found several spelling, grammar and punctuation errors in this one but still really enjoyed the story. Wish there were going to be more to the series and I dread it coming to an end soon!
Lies die Geschichte jetztTate's Foxy Shifter (BK 10)
Loved, loved, loved this one! I seriously think you should take each one and expand on them and make them longer.
Getting depressed that there are only a few stories left to the series! But can't wait to read the next one! Looks like it's going to be really exciting!
Made for the Alpha Shifter (BK 9)
Oh, I'm so glad Daryl finally found Ivy! Wish I was her! LOL Also wish I could keep my eyes open long enough to read the last 4 books but it's late and I have to be up early tomorrow. Will try to finish up tomorrow or Friday. Absolutely loving this series!
Lies die Geschichte jetztRunning from the Shifter
I've been overlooking the spelling errors in all of these stories but this one really needs to be corrected since it's the title! You've misspelled Running. You have it as Runing.
I am so loving this series! Really looking forward to book #9 because of the super hot guy on the cover! Is that Daryl? Don't know where you are finding these pics but DANG! These are some HOT guys!
Pucking the Shifter (BK 7)
This one seemed shorter than the others and what a surprise! Now they've added a ghost to the pack! Actually, he's the origin of the pack or something like that! Loving it! On to book #8!
Lies die Geschichte jetztShifting the Shifter (BK 6)
Another score! Loving this series and can't wait to read the next one!
Waiting for the last two brothers to find their Fated Mates! Good work! Keep it up!
Dreaming of the Shifter (BK 5)
Loving this story! Is there a reason you split it into 13 books instead of making it one longer story?
Either way, i'm really enjoying it!
Bearing the Shifter (BK 4)
A little confused with the last two chapters but guess they are actually the "hint" to the next book which I'm looking very forward to reading. Loving this series!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Shifter Bar (BK 3)
Love, love, love this series! Are the men on the cover representations of the main guy in the story?
Is the hottie on the cover of this one Dominic? DAMN! That makes the imagination go wild. I was checking out the other covers and I can't wait to get to book 9, now that is one HOT man! LOL
Shifter on Ice!
Loving these stories! Can't wait to read the next one! Still wish the character descriptions were more detailed but loving their chemistry together. Makes me wish I was a Shifter!
Lies die Geschichte jetztShifter World Bk 1
Thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the rest of this series! Can you describe the characters physically? I'm not getting really clear picture of what they look like except that the men are big and she's tall with blonde hair and blue eyes.
Can't remember seeing any errors in spelling or grammar which I have a bad habit of finding in others stories and rack it up to being a secretary for more years than I care to admit.
Would love it if you would read and review my story Magic on Changeling Mountain or any of the others I have written.
Her Mythical Warriors BK1
Loved this story. Very original from anything I've read so far. The only thing I would suggest is to please tell us what "Psychi" and "apsycho" means? I tried looking them up but couldn't find a definition for either one. I'm really looking forward to reading book 2. I do hope that the two fairies figure out they are mates.
Lies die Geschichte jetztNever Ago
Lots of loop holes, spelling and grammar errors but the story was good so far. I personally hate when books end with cliff hangers and feel this story could have been edited down to the two books being just one but then it's your story and not mine. I do hope book 3 will be finished soon so that I can find out what happens.
Lies die Geschichte jetztOn the run
Really enjoyed your story!
A little lacking on character descriptions and details about what she had been through but was an enjoyable short story. Keep going!
The Road Between
Enjoyed your story very much. A little broken in a few places and needs some help with grammar and spelling but the story line was interesting and entertaining. I'm still curious to know who the unnamed person was that leaked the information about them going to attack the other gang that allowed "the monster" to get to Aviana (love that name!).
Also have no clue who the new people in the Epilogue are.
Ember Rain
Thoroughly enjoyed your very original story. Some spelling and grammar errors but the story line was great! Needs a little bit more character description but otherwise was great. Look forward to reading book 2 which I hope is already complete.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAll but rejected mate
The second book is just as good if not better than the first. Really enjoyed both of them.
Still a few spelling errors but was an excellent read. So glad for the happy endings.
The Silver Tower
Much better! Big improvement over book 1. Your spelling and grammar still needs some work but was much better this time. Also you detailed much better this time. Who was the mysterious character who had their tongue cut out? Did they have to get permission to leave or were they just allowed to go?
Still some unanswered questions but this one was much better than the first one. Please consider editing and republishing them both. Your story line is very original and interesting.
The Bad Things
Just as awesome as the rest of the series and love how you left the end open for other addition which I hope will be out soon?
Lies die Geschichte jetztTheir Silver Moon
I couldn't put it down until I finished it. Another great story! Would definitely like to hear more about Patricia and Seth and the twins. Also what about Jamie and Grace? Do they ever have children? Does Seth magically rebuild the pack house or does Alice design a new one for them? How does Seth's coven feel about his decision to join with the wolves? So many possibilities..................
I can't wait to read some of your other stories but first I need to sleep some!
His White Luna`
Loved it even with all of the spelling and grammar errors! So glad they got back together! Can't wait to read the next edition! Keep up the good work. Do you do this on a phone?
Lies die Geschichte jetztContingency
I was thoroughly enjoying this book, thinking it was the last in the series only to find out there's one more and it's not done yet! Boohoo! Found several grammar and spelling errors but otherwise the story is great. Wish you would state who is speaking instead of posting someone's POV at the beginning of the story. I get so confused as to who is talking when it seems to change almost every chapter. Please hurry with the last installment.
Lies die Geschichte jetztHis Trans Boy
Really enjoyed this story! Definitely different. Keep up the good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztA Sterling Silver Love
Enjoyed the story but there are several missing parts, like what did he do to her that she sent her kids away from them? What ever happened with King Jason? Lots of spelling and grammar errors but was a good read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztDiamonds Edge
Good story! I have a feeling her son is either psychic or part werewolf but don't understand how. Do hope book 2 is already done? Look forward to finishing the story. This one needs some editing to correct spelling errors but otherwise well done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBYOP
Damn! That was so hot! Not sure what else to say............DAMN! Whew! Need a cold shower now! Am I'm not even gay or male!
Lies die Geschichte jetztI bring sexy back
Good story! Like the way the two girls turned their lives around. Not an easy thing to do. Needs some editing on spelling and grammar but otherwise a good read.
Hope you will check out some of my stories and share your thoughts with me.
Full Moon Scrifice
The plot of the story was good but the writing is poor. It's evident that English is not the author's first language. Needs lots of editing and revising! Could definitely be expanded on especially the part on what happened to the vampires or rogues who attacked the village. Kind of feels incomplete as if this is a draft. If it is, please revise and update.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Other Side
Loved the story! So good to finally get the other side out there (In other word, been her except for her ending!) Needs some editing because there were lots of spelling errors but was a good read!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Goddess of Beasts
Very good story but needs lots of editing. Lots of spelling errors, grammar and punctuation mistakes and some words completely missing. I see you left it with cliff hanger and do hope you will post the second edition complete.
Lies die Geschichte jetztOn your knees`
Loved it! Very well done and look forward to reading more of your work! Good job!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHood
It started off rather slow but then when she found out about werewolves, it finally got interesting enough to continue. Was hoping they were going to come up with a way for her to become a werewolf but guess she's doomed to stay human. Felt like the ending was kind of short and blah but overall was a decent read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztQueen Luna
This could have been an excellent story but the technical writing needs so much work that it feels more like a draft than a completed story. It's so broken up that it's hard to read and very obvious that English is not the authors primary language. Suggest serious editing before you continue with another story.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMind Night Blue
Very well done but what actually happened to Juju and her wolf? She got kind of left out in the end. There is a part 4?
Lies die Geschichte jetztMind Night Blue 2
Awesome! Enjoyed this one as much as the first and looking forward to reading the last one next! Needs some editing to correct spelling and grammar issues and you have on repeated chapter that I've already commented on.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMind Night Blue
Wow! Have never read a vampire(Bampire) story like this before but loving it. Very original and after reading some of the reviews left here, I would like to say this is your story, write it like you want! Don't pay too much attention to what others feel they would change about it.
Looking forward to book 2.
Good work!
Second Chance
This was a great teenage love short story!
I felt you really glazed over somethings (i.e.: Calvin's POV on her and situation in general.) It has a good plot that could (and should be) expanded on to make a really complete story. I',m curious to know how old you are? One of these days I can foresee you with a best seller, you might even be able to make it on a VERY PG 12 level but once you experience some more adult issues in life (not just sex) you will be an author to be on the look out for.
FYI-It's very unprofessional to add your "thoughts/comments" at the base of every chapter as if they are part of the story which they clearly are not! Take them all and summarize the as "Author's Comments" or as a Outline to your story. If you have to apologize for a chapter being to short, perhaps you should edit or revise it before posting it? And your story itself should lead the reader, not directions from you in a "footnote". Also, were you aware that "chapters" on this site can be up to 10,000 words long? {Notice "Writing style score"}
Keep trying!
Before the fall
Enjoyed the book very much. Felt it moved rather slowly without giving much details about their reasoning but you find most out later.. Looking forward to reading the sequel.
Wanted to see them really "fall" for each other instead of hiding their feelings for each other but maybe that's just me I love a good romance story!
The Whitlock Academy
Dang, girl! I think this one is definitely a 12 of the list of best reads! I know everyone who reads this wants to be (even if they won't admit it) Emma! It was HOT!!!!!
Hate that its the last story you have to read posted here but will look forward to future works! You have given the courage to post one I've been working on but it's not ready to go yet. Still needs an ending and editing and artwork, not to mention I can't decide on a title just yet. LOL
The Proposition
Another 10 on the enjoyment scale! The characters are wonderful and I really liked Hanna! She's great!
Only one more story to go, darn it. :( Looking forward to reading it though! Hoping you will check out one or more of mine!
A Love Like This
WOW! Not sure what else to say but WOW! Not my scene for sure but was a very enlightening read. Didn't realize they allowed stories like this on here but looks like their are no boundaries at all!
I noticed several more spelling errors but got so tied up in the story, I didn't point them out. Sorry, like to be more help when I can but dang this story was something else!
Omerta
Loved it. She turned the bad boy to mush!
I wonder what they name the baby? They both had great names!
Sinnful Temptations
Loved it! Only thing I think was missing was a more detailed descriptions of his tats!
Lies die Geschichte jetztSkyheart
Loved your story. Had a few spelling and grammar errors and there were a couple of places where it got confusing about who was speaking and it seemed the characters names got mixed up but otherwise, very well written.
Look forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out one of mine and let me know what you think.
On His Watch
Very good start to what could be a much longer book! If I were you, I would take this and expand on it. You have a good story base and are talented. Don't be afraid to really let your imagination go wild and have fun telling about their lives together! Did her other grandfather ever accept her? Did she have a relationship with him? What about Cassan? Does he ever find his mate? Oh there are so many possibilities........
Good book. Really enjoyed reading it. Wish there was more to it.
Lucifer
Awesome! Loved it! Wonderful story! Parts of it made me think of parts of my younger years. You did it again and so sorry that I'm now of stories to read from you! Keep up the good work! You are a wonderfully talented writer!
Lies die Geschichte jetztJust One More
Well, you did it again! Loved this story. Couldn't put it down until I was done. Even read part of it on my phone, which I hate doing, at the doctors office. I think I've only got one more of your stories to read and will be starting on it tonight. How's the 5th book for the Bad Things coming? Hoping you will have it up soon!
Lies die Geschichte jetztMontana Skies
Another great story. Was a bit disappointed that the part about River killing Jax was more like a foot note when I had expected it to be more of a whole chapter. Very few spelling errors, mostly in the epiloge but did notice one more where she was talking about coming back from Dr.'s appt and the ultra sound pics being on her console.
I don't remember how it was misspelled but it was done the same way every time.
Angel
Love it, except for the cliff hanger, but I will read the next one in line. Love your work and can't wait to read more. Lots of spelling errors in this one!
Lies die Geschichte jetztFinding Ace
Loved it! But what happened to the baby she was pregnant with? More spelling and grammar errors and even found a few words missing all together but very well written and thoroughly enjoyed every chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
Lies die Geschichte jetztQueen of Bad Things
Oooohhhh
I hate cliff hangers! Didn't need one to get me to read the next book. I'm very much enjoying this series and can't wait to start book three! Quite a few grammar and spelling errors in this one but was still a very intriguing read. I just hope they survive! Won't be the same without Ace!
Ace Bad Things
This is not normally my type of story but I have to say that I was caught from the very first page! You kept the action moving all through the story and I couldn't put it down till I was finished. I understand that there is a part two which I look forward to reading tomorrow.
Really enjoyed it! Great job!
I'll be home
Very sweet story but was hoping it was going to end with a marriage proposal if not the actual wedding. Some spelling and grammar errors but was an enjoyable read overall.
Lies die Geschichte jetztNorth Forest Alpha's
Enjoyed this one as much as I did the one about the guys parents! Very well, done. Only found one error and left a message in the comment on that chapter. Look forward to reading more of your works and hope you will check out at least one of mine. I'm inspired to try my hand at another werewolf or maybe a witch story!
Keep going! You are very talented.
South Forest Alpha's
Wow! Great story.
Only found a couple of spelling errors.
I personally would have made Leilani a little bit more willing to push their dominance BS down their throats but loved these stories! Three for one, who doesn't appreciate that you didn't leave anyone hanging. The "gay" portion at the end was great!
Do you know what the Hawaiian names mean? I do, just wondering if you do.
Looking forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out some of mine and let me know what you think.
Keleka Anakalea
Sebastian, The Traveler
They seriously need to add a "LOVE IT" button instead of just "Like". You've done it again! Excellent original story that captured me from page one and held me until the end. I never wanted to put it down for a second.
Only a few spelling errors but otherwise was great! PLEASE tell me you are going to add more stories here? I see you only have 4.
GREAT JOB!!
Warrior of the Damned
Very well done! Slight cliff hanger at the end but found no errors in your story as far as spelling or grammar! Was a very refreshing read a story by someone who can spell and use English! My only suggestion would be for more character "visual" descriptions.
I really do hope you will check out one of my stories! I would like your opinion!
Different
You are quickly becoming one of my favorites on here. Loved the story and look forward to reading Times Two.
I felt so bad for Jeremy and glad that you are going to explore that more.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors in this one but if you read over it slowly you will find them. Easy enough to fix.
Keep up the good work and please check out one of mine! I would like your opinion.
The Sluts
Good story. She doesn't really qualify as a slut but Emma did! Women have needs, just like men. Just because they choose to have more than one partner doesn't make them sluts, I don't care what anyone says! YOU GO GIRL! Life is too short to end up not having lived it to the fullest! Sometimes the end is happy, sometimes not but at least she lived it to the fullest!
A few grammar (mostly misspelled words) but was a very enjoyable quick read. Will definitely check out more of your work and hope you will check out some of mine and leave a review.
Three Brothers One Mate
Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Very well done! Kind of curious to know whatever happened to her brother but maybe that's another story? Was glad that they let Cole back in. It just didn't seem complete without him, especially when you consider that the oldest two children were his.
A little bit of spelling and grammar errors but wouldn't be hard to fix.
Look forward to reading more of your work and hopefully you will check out some of mine. Let me know in a review please!
What am I?
Fun story. Could be expanded on but it was a nice short read except for the bad grammar and spelling. Keep trying, you have a good imagination.
Lies die Geschichte jetztMy little Omega
Was a fun read for the most part. Needs LOTS of work on mostly grammar and spelling but also need to work on the flow of the story. Much of it seems like individual thoughts written over time and pieced together.
Keep trying and perhaps edit this one in the future?
Alpha Jace
Really enjoyed the story and I do hope, now that you are older, you will go back and edit out the many spelling and grammar errors as well as follow up with the story of their sons since you left a cliff hanger at the end.
Need to break down the paragraphs more. Makes it really hard to read when they are so long.
Very different
Really enjoyed this very different story! A few spelling errors and I really do think you need to reconsider and put the English translation in for those of us who do not speak French but it was a very interesting and enjoyable story. Will look forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out one of my stories as well.
Lies die Geschichte jetztPerfect Mates
Really enjoyed this edition of the series! Also checking out the Patreon site you mentioned. Thinking about signing up myself. How's it working out for you?
Hope you will check out one of my stories and let me know what you think.
Beta Mates
Enjoyed the story even if it was a bit "choppy" and grammar and spelling errors made me cringe, wanted to fix them but of course I can't.
I only read completed stories but will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Alpha Mates
Whew! This story was HOT!!! Kept thinking "why can't straight me be so open with their feelings"? Grammar needs help and lots of spelling errors and you definitely need to make it clear as to who is "speaking" through out the story as it got kind of confusing very often in the story. Definitely different but very interesting. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Lies die Geschichte jetztLoved it!
I know I"m going to regret staying up this late to finish this book but it was so good I couldn't put it down. Just hope I don't miss my flight in the morning! Good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztI want more!
Loved this one! She got the bad boy and tamed him! Love it! Hate that the series is over because I want to hear more!
Lies die Geschichte jetztLoved it!
I only found a few typo's but the story was so captivating that I didn't even slow down. Loved it!
Can't wait to read the next one. Hope you are liking mine. I saw where you added it to your reading list.
Another high score!
Loved it! Characters physical descriptions are needed but the plot is great! Really looking forward to reading more of this series. Going to be sad when it ends.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome!
Can't even express how much I enjoyed this book. Details like how they look were not detailed enough so the mind is left to it's own imagination. Was rather disappointed that she never got her wolf to shift but the series is not over yet, right? Very much looking forward to reading the rest of this series! You are a very talented writer! Keep up the good work but hope you will take some time to check out at least one of my stories!.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Mating Games
I was really enjoying the story. I can't believe you left it without a finish I was sure it was marked complete when I first started but now I see it's an ongoing thing Please let me know when you finish entirely.
Good plot and reasonably character trait descriptions.
Delta's Deceit
I do hope you plan to rewrite these stories and fix the grammar issues because the stories would are a good read and have good plots.
Lies die Geschichte jetztGamma's Game
Whew! The grammar in this one made it very hard to read. I can see how the different stories are related and have to say, they could easily be combined into one book once the grammar errors are fixed.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBeta's Bride
Just like book 1, this one needs a lot of work on the grammar but it was an enjoyable short read.
Lies die Geschichte jetztKasun's Kisses
Grammar needs A LOT of work as it is apparent that English is not your primary language but overall it was a good story. A little short on background information but a nice short read. Will look forward to reading more of the series.
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe Beta's Daughter
Very well written! Really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more of your work. Hope you will check out one of mine and let me know what you think.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAlpha Black
Enjoyed it as much as I did the first time. Still needs some editing and I don't remember the part about Jenny dying before but then it's been a while since I read it so I may have just forgotten. Anyway, moving on to book 2 now and I'm sure I will enjoy it just as much! You are a very talented writer. Hoping the names won't be so confusing this time.
Really enjoyed this story, even with all the spelling errors and some grammar errors, it was a very enjoyable read. Looking forward to reading book 2.
Hoping you will check out one of my stories. I recently put up my first werewolf story called "From Orphan to Luna".
In the Heat
Excellent story! Really enjoyed this one and look forward to reading more of your work. Hoping you will check out one of mine. I just posted my first werewolf story today.
Lies die Geschichte jetztCalling Callin
Oh please tell me you are doing a book 2? Want to know what she finds and if they solve the problem with the rogues. Grammar and spelling needs lots of work but the story was very good. Please let me know if there will be another book to finish up the story.
Also hope you will check out one of mine!
Runaway Alpha
Needs considerable editing, mostly grammar and spelling issues but was an enjoyable story. Can't figure out why you ended it where to did because you left a lot of questions unanswered. I do hope you plan to do a Book 2 to finish up? Would love for you to let me know when it's done. Story line was very interesting with lots of twists that kept it interesting.
Lies die Geschichte jetztTorn
Wow! Was so sad that Amaris and her mate died with so little fanfare. Glad that Leon and Ayla worked things out and that Ethan got his just desserts! Great ending.
Can't wait to see what happens with Lila and her mate. Sounds like a very interesting twist.
Keep up the good work!
Caleb
Definitely different but I think that's what makes it such a good story. Really enjoyed reading it. Grammar, spelling and paragraph separation needs work but otherwise, very well done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztAmaris`
Grammar, spelling and punctuation needs LOTS of work but otherwise was a very enjoyable read and I look forward to reading the rest of the series. Can't wait to find out what happens with Caleb!
Hope you will check out one (or more) of my stories! We seem to share a similar writing style.
Wow!
A lot of sex but loved the story. So glad that everyone found their mates. You never did say what happened to Sarah but since she was such a minor character, I guess it doesn't matter. was just curious. Need a lot of work on the grammar and spelling but otherwise a good story.
Lies die Geschichte jetztVery different
Extra lot of sex and wish you had expanded on her at least meeting her daughters, if not part of their rearing. The end really surprised me but I'm hoping that book two is complete? Will be checking it out for sure. Some grammar errors in this and needs to be edited but otherwise well done.
Reread this one before moving on to book 2 just to be sure I remembered the whole story. Still has some spelling errors but a great read none the less.
Can't wait to read the next edition.
Batman
What a delightful twist on an old story! I always wished he would find someone to love! Wouldn't have minded being that someone either in my younger years. Running out of your stories to read. Please tell me you have more coming?
Lies die Geschichte jetztLonely Monster
Loved it! You did it again. Was so glad to read that her father got what he deserved!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBecause I want a kiss too!
I was wishing the story would never end! Are you sure they don't have any more brothers? A few sisters, cousins, friends? Loved this series! Grammar needs work in all of them but otherwise a great read!
Lies die Geschichte jetztCraving those kisses!
Well, you've done it again! Loved this story! Can't wait to read another of your work! Keep em coming!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBook 3
Loved the line "Best ride to the airport ever!" Took me a few minutes to stop laughing at that! I do hope that one of the future books is going to go into more detail not only for the 2 remaining brothers but about Shelly and Dean as well? If not, it sounds like an opening for Book #6? Have enjoyed everything you have written so far. Keep up the good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztHunter
Thoroughly enjoying this series! Can't wait to go on to the next one! I've read 3 of your stories today and several over the past week, have enjoyed them all. You are a very creative person with a wonderful imagination!
Lies die Geschichte jetztGood story
Can't wait to read the sequels to this series. Not exactly the ending I expected but I love happy endings.
Lies die Geschichte jetztTruly
What a great ending to the series! Loved it! Looking forward to reading the next one! Do hope you will check out one of mine! Don't have a wolf one up YET! But it is coming!
Lies die Geschichte jetztForever love!
Loved this story! Survived a similar situation that she had with Mark and many times wished I'd find an Eric to rescue me but ended up having to do it on my own. Loved this story!
Lies die Geschichte jetztValentine
Well, you've done it again! Love your stories. This one you tended to shift from first person to third several times and I had to back up and make sure I'd read it right but enjoyed the story very much! Can't wait to read the next one! Keep em coming!
Lies die Geschichte jetztGreat love story!
This could definitely be a harlequin romance easily. Really enjoy your work! Hoping you will check out and enjoy one of mine!
Lies die Geschichte jetztGreat story!
You've done it again! Loved the story! Made me want to meet a vampire! LOL Found a few spelling errors and some words got left out in certain parts but I was able to fill in the spaces and really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztAnother excellent story!
You are a very talented writer I've enjoyed all of the stories I've read so far and look forward to reading more of your work! A few spelling errors but not so that it slowed me down much. Keep up the good work! Hope you will check out one of mine!
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome story
I've read a lot of wolf stories and I have to say yours is one of the best I've read so far. Thoroughly enjoyed the characters and the story line. It was definitely different from anything else I've ever read. Had a few grammar errors but still giving it 5 stars since there were only a few. Look forward to reading more of your work. I haven't posted my first wolf story yet (need artwork for the cover) but will so. Hope you will check out one of my stories in the meantime and let me know what you think?
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome Read!
Thoroughly enjoyed your book! Great read! Will look forward to reading more of your stories on here! Hope you will check out one of mine and let me know what you think. I'm working on a werewolf one as well but haven't finished proof reading, title and art work yet but will be putting it up as soon as those things are done!
Lies die Geschichte jetztUpset!!!!!
I was thoroughly enjoying the story when it suddenly ended. You promised an ending but only have one story posted. I swear I'm going to give up reading Inkitt stories because so many people do not forewarn reader that their stories are unfinished or part of a series that has yet to be posted or you have to pay to read. Very frustrating! There were several grammar errors including needed words that were completely left out.
If you are not going to post the next series, please mark your story as being incomplete because that's what it is.
Aura
Enjoyed your book very much. Was very different from the many other's I've read.
Got a little confusing in some spots but was still a good read. A few grammar errors but otherwise very well done!
Good story
Really enjoyed the story except that it was really hard to tell who was saying what because you have entire conversations run together in paragraphs and not identified who is saying what.
Grammar errors are mostly because of tenses, like
They are
is supposed to be They're
There
is
a place
They have
is
supposed to be They've
Their
is
when referring to more than one person
There were several other spelling errors but these were the main ones that were repeated through the book, which was otherwise a very good read! Will look forward to reading more of your work and hopefully you will correct these mistakes.
Very well done!
Story was rather short but was a very good read! Only found a few spelling errors but thoroughly enjoyed it! Good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztGood read!
Reminded me very much of the series on Nicholas Flammel by Michael Scott. This story needs some editing on spelling and grammar but otherwise was a very good read and I enjoyed it!
Lies die Geschichte jetztEditing definitely needed
Apart from the grammar, spelling and punctuation errors, it's very hard to read when whole sections are missing. Chapter 24 is missing part of the beginning and seems to start in the middle of the sentence. Chapter 26 is very confusing right from the beginning as part of the story seems to be missing in more than once instance right from the very beginning. I think I'm going to stop and hopefully you will come make the required repairs. Let me know as I would like to finish reading it but right now, it's so disjointed that it's giving me a headache trying to keep up with what's happening.
Lies die Geschichte jetztBook 1
Enjoyed the story overall. Needs editing.
A little long winded in some area's but realized you were trying to build background. Grammar, spelling and need to identify who is speaking at the time because it got kind confusing.
Need to explain what the whole prophecy is. Hoping Book 2 will reveal more details? Mr Sliver is a minister? Now there's a twist I really didn't expect since I've always understood that vampires can't go on to hallowed ground so he wouldn't be able to enter a church.
A feel good story!
Loved your story! I felt her pain at being betrayed not only by her boyfriend but by her supposedly best girl friend. Wondering if her angel didn't have just a little bit of demon in him? LOL There were some punctuation, grammar and spelling errors but otherwise was very well written. Hope you will check out one of mine?
Lies die Geschichte jetztChristmas wolf
Loved the story, even when it got a bit confusing as to who it was "speaking" in several parts.
Never could figure out what the "Deleted create by Sketch" meant. Think the only other thing that I really would have liked to have seen explained was why Di didn't like to shift and had left the pack house?
Rejected Warrior
Thoroughly enjoyed your story! Only found a few grammar/spelling errors and got a bit confused over the Royal families name since it seemed to change somewhere along the line. Would definitely read more of your work! Hoping you will check out one of my stories!?!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBook 1
I like the way you wrapped up this one better. Grammar and spelling need help but overall was well done. Still looking for Book 3. How many are there in the series?
Lies die Geschichte jetztIncomplete
Plot was a good start to what could have been a great full length book. Grammar and spelling need work and it left too many unanswered questions. Feels like a draft of a much better story. Hope you will reconsider and add more or rewrite in more detail like what happened with her father and the man who tried to buy her and the rapist? Does Andrew end up accepting Nick?
Lies die Geschichte jetztGreen Grass Fox
The plot was good but this feels like a draft copy. Need more description on the characters, both on looks and on their thoughts and feelings.
Hoping you will check out some of my stories?
1st letter, 1st number......
The plot of the story was good but the grammar, spelling errors and the fact that English is not your native language made it very hard to read. In a few places, you mentioned two characters names as being part of what was going on at the moment when the second character was not even part of that scene. Was a unique story. I thought that both Nick and Aidan had mentioned that they had gone to Lisa's funeral so how is it she is alive? Why did Aidan kill her if he loved her? Why did Macey help him? If it were me, I would add a flash back scene to what actually happened to her, how and why.
Lies die Geschichte jetztLoved it!
Great story! I loved every chapter of it. Only a few slight spelling errors but very well done! Looking forward to reading more of your work and hope you will check out one of my stories as well.
Lies die Geschichte jetztUnsure what to say
Not like any other werewolf stories I've read since they only seem to be able to shift during certain times of the year and only at night. The story started off moving very slowly but picked up speed as it got closer to the end but definitely feels unfinished.
Lies die Geschichte jetztInteresting.
Very interesting story. Needs LOTS of work on grammar, spelling and punctuation but hope you plan on only making it a two book series? Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Lies die Geschichte jetztVery innovative!
Enjoyed the story very much. Very unusual and innovative. Some grammar errors but otherwise very well written!
Lies die Geschichte jetztPlease hurry!
Please hurry and finish the story! Enjoying it very much! Didn't see too many grammar errors in this section.
Lies die Geschichte jetztGreat story!
Enjoyed this one as much as Book one! Grammar still needs a bit of work but easy enough to fix with editing. I do hope Book Three is complete!
Lies die Geschichte jetztGood read
Despite the spelling and grammar errors, it was a very good read! Enjoying the story and looking forward to reading the next edition. You tie the characters together very well. Would like to have heard more about her using her powers, especially since she's supposed to be learning about them but hoping there will be more in the next book.
Lies die Geschichte jetztUnusual, to say the least
Very unique story. Lots of grammar errors and lots of unanswered questions and talk about ending with a cliff hanger! Overall, I enjoyed the read and will look for book 2.
Lies die Geschichte jetztVery well done!
Just a suggestion to help with the grammar errors is to try and write your stories in word and using the spelling/grammar feature before posting. Otherwise, the story was great! Keep up the good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztNeeds some work
Except for the lack of punctuation and not always being clear on who was speaking, I was enjoying the story. Still unclear as to what actually happened to his father? If his mother was a true mate and the mate legend is true, why is she still alive? So are B&E safe now? Every other story I've read, says the mating bond is not actually complete until they actually mate. Are you trying to keep it PG?
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome!
Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Your brought forth some characters that I have not found in other stories (ie: the Dire Wolves, the fire fox, etc) Found a few spelling errors but managed to figure out what you were trying to say. Was shocked to see your one notation of 5000 words when I thought we were limited to 1500! How did you manage that? Looking forward to reading your future works. Hope you will give mine a shot! Very different than what you have here but hopefully you will enjoy them!
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome!
Grammar still needs work and I got a bit confused as to what was going on and who was saying what but over all it's very good! I've always been a sucker for a happy ending!
Lies die Geschichte jetztLoved it!
Grammar still needs help but loved the story! Can't wait to read the next edition.
Lies die Geschichte jetztGood one!
This is the best of the three I've read so far! Grammar still needs a bit of help but otherwise you are filling in the blanks from the other two stories! Good job!
Lies die Geschichte jetztBecoming clearer
Not sure why you chose to break this into a series of books but I'm enjoying reading them. Some spelling errors need to be fixed. You have "warped" or "warping" when it should be wrapped or wrapping. There are a couple more that I spotted when I was reading it but can't remember exactly what they were off the top of my head.
Glad to see the next in the series is ready to go and will continue to read because I have to admit I'm hooked and want to know the stories behind all of the characters and why they are the way they are.
Good story
Needs more background information on the characters like what actually happened to Leon to make his pack turn on him? Did he kill someone? Who? Why? If not, who framed him? Why?
What happened to Ash's father to make him like he is? The end is kind of confusing as well. Grammar definitely needs some work but otherwise it's a good story. Look forward to reading the rest of the series.
Well done!
A few parts had me a little confused, mostly as to who was speaking/thinking at the time but otherwise it was a very entertaining read. Enjoyed it very much!
Lies die Geschichte jetztVery good ending
Well, done except for the grammar and spelling and punctuation. Needs LOTS of help but the story itself was very good. So glad you finally managed to finish it.
Well done!
Great story
Thoroughly enjoyed your story. Looking forward to reading the sequel.
Lies die Geschichte jetztAwesome read!
Enjoyed your story immensely. Great ending! Keep up the good work!
Lies die Geschichte jetztThe River Went Dry
First of all, let me say that I'm invested in the story but praying that the entire series is complete because I hate to be left hanging.
So far, I haven't figured out the plot of the story and not understanding where it's leading but I think that's because you are trying to be mysterious about it.
In either the first or second chapter, she would have nailed him either IN his private or BETWEEN his legs.
Might want to make that correction.
Looking forward to find out how this concludes.
Blood is thicker than water
Overall you have a good story line but you are dragging it out too much. 34 chapters in an unfinished book and still have no idea what happened first when she and her mother were taken, then no details on what happened to her and her mother and then what happened the night Michael died. Really hoping that you have a book #2 and that it is complete. Wish I had known this was not a stand alone story from the beginning. And what happened to their father? I know he's dead but how and when did he die?
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