Grammatik und Zeichensetzung
Intriguing, yet details need to be cut back...
The blurb in the beginning reminded me of a German film series that I recently watched, but this story has its own take, I guess.
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However, there was FAR too much detailing in the descriptive sense. The sentences and paragraphs were sadly drawn out and lost me several times. There should have been breaks between them. But, over all...when I have the time, I'll read more and see if it goes anywhere.
As a YA author myself, I've learned so much when it comes to learning when to add enough details without dragging it on and on. And most of that learning, came from my reviews.
Good luck to the author, though!
Happy reading! :)
I took the chance and finished reading this story, and found it intriguing after all. The story picked up its pace after Chapter 10, when things began to come to light about Ethan and who he is. The whole story line about the secret society was quite captivating, since that's what I'm interested in myself.. Although the author as I stated before, had too much descriptive and lengthy paragraphs, I really enjoyed the read nonetheless. Still, would like to have known more about Hanna's background and have more excitement.