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Vanessa
I have read all your stuff on Lulu and Storiesonline. I do like your stories. I think you write very well and they are interesting. I am less sure I like the whole transvestite thing with Eric. This story has not progressed for eons, much like most of the stories. I read this ages ago and not a step farther. Nothing new for ages.
I would love to see some progress,
In fact I thought you were dead its been so long since anything has happened.
You no longer have a blog and there is no place for communication.
Please continue. Also having stuff up then down is discomforting.
I have read most of it twice. Lots of great ideas.

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Excellent book

This is an excellent story by an author who writes very well. the only problem areas that I see relate to proofreading and editing. All of the stories by Vanessa are excellent, and I have read them all more than once. I had hoped that they would be better edited and proofread on this site, but it is not to be. I guess you get what you pay for! I do enjoy a writer who sticks to their galaxy and keeps their stories within the same theme. My only hope as a reader is that the book will be finished and it will not be removed from the site half written.

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